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 Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 4:14 pm
Just one poem for now. This one is more so a spur of the moment thing I wrote when I had noting to do. So don't expect it to be anything great.
I remenber a girl who had such fame
Killing lovers and couples was her game.
She who was said to have "Cupid's Aim"
She enjoyed the cease of two hearts beating
In a blissful trance ever fleeting
It was said Death had finally claimed her in it's grasp
Because for some time no one heard a couple's last gasps
That was back when I had been younger
But now I lie wide awake from thunder
For I had a dream I will not soon forget
A demonic voice whispering, "I'm not dead yet."
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Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 5:43 pm
OH OH OH! I remember this one and I sooo love it!...damnit Ami-chan you and I have had no real experience yet your the one with cupid as a muse...lucky you! and I mean it your poerm ROX...well that's my opinion anyway
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Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 5:50 pm
Very powerful indeed... I love it... I just don't find the rhyme necessary for such a category of poem... but nonetheless... it is quite good.
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Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 5:54 pm
told ja Ami-chan geez why does no one believe me? *pauses* well I am a little nuts but still I've got valid opinions!
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Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 5:59 pm
chaos_incarnite91 told ja Ami-chan geez why does no one believe me? *pauses* well I am a little nuts but still I've got valid opinions! Well... do you like your OWN poetry? I love it... I love all of everything I've read here.
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Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 6:06 pm
I enjoyed this. I would think it would be quite easy to memorize considering the rhymes. If I remember correctly, that is what rhymes were for.
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 7:42 pm
OH! I remember you showing us that one! Very good poem! ^^
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Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 4:54 pm
Here's a few shorter ones:
Run
She told me once that she wanted to disappear,
And escape to somewhere far away from here
But all her attempts were in vain,
There was nowhere to run from the torment and pain
Wounds
You wish the pain wasn’t real
But some wounds refuse to heal
It may seemingly disappear and go away
But it’s there and there to stay
It may vanish one day
But that’s because you far too numb to feel it anyway
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 3:00 pm
*smiles sadly and bitterly* I often get agravated with your poetry...not because it's any good, but because it hits a lot of thoughts of my own that I never want to acknowledge...but your poetry kinda forces me too and that may explain why I never seem too interested in some poems but all of your poems are very beautiful and almost to perfect in my opinion lol
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 3:01 pm
Dante Deus chaos_incarnite91 told ja Ami-chan geez why does no one believe me? *pauses* well I am a little nuts but still I've got valid opinions! Well... do you like your OWN poetry? I love it... I love all of everything I've read here. *shrugs* doesn't matter whether I like it or not...I write what I feel I may hate it but I wrote it so it's mine to keep forever..usually to torment me later but life goes on...
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 3:03 pm
chaos_incarnite91 *smiles sadly and bitterly* I often get agravated with your poetry...not because it's not any good, but because it hits a lot of thoughts of my own that I never want to acknowledge...but your poetry kinda forces me too and that may explain why I never seem too interested in some poems but all of your poems are very beautiful and almost to perfect in my opinion lol ...I said that wrong...I made the correction in blue...
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 6:20 pm
You're really quite good, Amy. Your poems are short and sweet, if you will. They make a statement with their simplicity.
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 5:52 am
*laughs at what Ami just said ((I'm at her house))* she said simplicity is key...well I could never do that...well maybe but I don't think so...
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 5:21 pm
Disappear
Disappear, disappear
Lead me far away from here
Disappear, disappear
Please let the end be near
Dreamer
Dream, dream
Let me think things are as simple as they seem
Dream, dream
I want to forever escape reality and its pain-forged screams
Heartache
Heartache, heartache
It’ll hurt until it brakes
Heartache, heartache
I’m only alive now for their sake
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 5:29 pm
hmmm I remember these ones ^^ you know my opinion on them....
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