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Nathaniel Arkchion Vice Captain
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 Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 9:05 pm
MAke fun of it and i will ripe off your head.
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 9:07 pm
"Tell me, is my voice heard in the coward, am I different than those you see,
all I see is a ocean of people stareing at me, they feel no sorrow,
no pain and no loss, all these things are all but lost.
I had a dream, but it was torn away,
in that dream I finally found my way,
but I was left all alone, now I am lost and without a home.
if you open your heart, then maybe I'll stay,
but you must hurry for I have lost my way."
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Nathaniel Arkchion Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 9:09 pm
*smiles*
I like it! .. its sad but very good in my opinion ^^
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 9:13 pm
YA... makes me feel depressed every time i reread it... then again it also brings back the memories of why i wrote it which was depressing as it is. sweatdrop
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Nathaniel Arkchion Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 9:18 pm
Soddus Forsworn YA... makes me feel depressed every time i reread it... then again it also brings back the memories of why i wrote it which was depressing as it is. sweatdrop
You should hear my teachers poems,
she writes about sad stuff
murdering
lustfull stories.
last one i remember when some thing like:
As a woman stands dying
Horses swirled and splattered in blood
brown horses white horses black horses...
As her husban lay dead bleeding
Her babies butchered into pieces
The blood everywhere
As men on hourseback
Brown horses white horses black hourses
soaked in blood ride away.
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 9:28 pm
MlDNlGHT Soddus Forsworn YA... makes me feel depressed every time i reread it... then again it also brings back the memories of why i wrote it which was depressing as it is. sweatdrop
You should hear my teachers poems,
she writes about sad stuff
murdering
lustfull stories.
last one i remember when some thing like:
As a woman stands dying
Horses swirled and splattered in blood
brown horses white horses black horses...
As her husban lay dead bleeding
Her babies butchered into pieces
The blood everywhere
As men on hourseback
Brown horses white horses black hourses
soaked in blood ride away.umm she is creepy XD
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Nathaniel Arkchion Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 9:15 pm
Soddus Forsworn MlDNlGHT Soddus Forsworn YA... makes me feel depressed every time i reread it... then again it also brings back the memories of why i wrote it which was depressing as it is. sweatdrop
You should hear my teachers poems,
she writes about sad stuff
murdering
lustfull stories.
last one i remember when some thing like:
As a woman stands dying
Horses swirled and splattered in blood
brown horses white horses black horses...
As her husban lay dead bleeding
Her babies butchered into pieces
The blood everywhere
As men on hourseback
Brown horses white horses black hourses
soaked in blood ride away.umm she is creepy XD
Today she yelled, "you b***h"
to one of the students, wide eyed expression and acted as though she slapped the girl. It was awesome. showing not telling the emotion. she teaches great. mrgreen
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 6:17 pm
That was a good poem. I liked it.
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