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Posted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 10:56 pm

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Yes, yes....All my series are shonen. XD

First one- Red Moon (created 4 years ago, 2 volumes *11 chapters*, and on hiatus) www.geocities.com/pyrofire2007/RedMoon

This was my very first major manga series...So the art is bleh compared to today's and the story is amateurish.

Second one- Eternal Tales (created 3 years ago and ongoing at 6 chapters)

The story and art are a bit better this time...But not so great on pacing. XD I cancelled on putting it on a website due to laziness...

Third one- Dawning of The Sun *Working title!!* (Still on planning stage)

Woooo! My newest series that's still being planned. XD Basically, I'm trying to think of putting some philosophy in here.......The story has been on my mind since 3 years ago. :3

Make sure to look out for Dawning of The Sun later on! Since I have an account for a website that lets me post my comics.

-Story shall be added later to these three-

Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 12:17 am

hmmm, for red moon, seems nice. May I offer some helpful critisim? Perhaps with a few more touch-ups in the art compartment, you might acctually have it published. By "art compartment", I mean more detail in backgrounds, and giving the characters a more, official design look. However, one thing that might improve your manga a bit, is the paneling. A lot of the panels are of teh characters side to side. I would liek to see more close-ups on the faces, and such.

I wish you luck with your future projects! b^_^d*thumbs up smiley!*

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Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 5:28 pm

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hmmm, for red moon, seems nice. May I offer some helpful critisim? Perhaps with a few more touch-ups in the art compartment, you might acctually have it published. By "art compartment", I mean more detail in backgrounds, and giving the characters a more, official design look. However, one thing that might improve your manga a bit, is the paneling. A lot of the panels are of teh characters side to side. I would liek to see more close-ups on the faces, and such.

I wish you luck with your future projects! b^_^d*thumbs up smiley!*

Well remember this.....Red Moon was created 4 years ago and my art has changed drastically since then. Plus, I've been making many one shots over the years after Red Moon was introduced so I've improved some in panel layout and other things. So basically, CAN'T WAIT TILL I WORK ON DAWNING OF THE SUN.

Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 7:57 pm

hhhhhmmmmm, then yes, I cant wait to see your other work then. After four years you would have to improve, after all. may luck be with you.

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Posted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 1:03 am

Actually, I was kinda hoping you'd remake this one... I know what it's like to recreate something without motivation though... very hard. The general gist of the story is quite good but there's a lot of cuts and no clear distinction between time switch... sweatdrop

Posted: Mon Aug 28, 2006 5:09 am

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Actually, I was kinda hoping you'd remake this one... I know what it's like to recreate something without motivation though... very hard. The general gist of the story is quite good but there's a lot of cuts and no clear distinction between time switch... sweatdrop

I had plans on doing a remake of Red Moon...It was really popular at my school, but Eternal Tales got me busy.

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