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Evidyr

 
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 24, 2006 10:20 pm


now before i start this one just so some of u know my stories are from whiles back and this one is a close one to me so just read if u leave a damn comment on it be easy on this one only if u cant help but leave a comment i am in a process of making a story about me and a friend so i havent made a story in a bit of time so i dont wanna hear or this is one is worse or please start listening to doc because maybe when i make another one which is soon it might be better but read this first post
PostPosted: Thu Aug 24, 2006 10:21 pm


He walked the streets going to his house looking very depressed.alot of things were on his mind and the morbid images he was getting werent helping.he let a tear drop from his miserable face as he walked.as he neared his house he found a long rope, He pulled and dug his claws into his head with a twisted and scared face.he picked up the rope and walked inside the house.He got a rootbeer out of the fridge and sat at a chair drinking in silence staring at the rope.as he finished his drink he cried tieing the rope into a noose and swung the noose over a high beam and stood up on a chair.he put the noose around his neck.he cried harder and jumped from the chair.as he kicked and gasped he only thought of how he scared her.his last breath was saved for the words " Im sorry" .

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 12:41 am


Wow very good I could see this becoming a good horror book


you know jsut to say this out loud alot of your stories ( with the blood and all )

are much like my dreams...when i was in 7th grade i was scuicidal and for a week i went without sleep then i slept then for about a week and a half i had god awful nightmares and these stories remind me of them ^)^ thats not a bad thing im saying you realy bring out my emotion and I think that is key to being an author!
PostPosted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 4:23 pm


I actually think this one is better.
A lot better.
It was enjoyable.
I think maybe you should work with it a little, and make it sound even better. It's a good piece of writing.

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Evidyr

 
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 5:19 pm


i thought this one up when i was depressed about something while i was walking home one night
PostPosted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 5:24 pm


it is very good ^_^

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