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Aikichii
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 2:44 pm


To my unknown love
Whom ever it may be
Whos soul pure as a dove
Who lives life happily

May in time I find thee
Find you in the place of my dreams
Or you find me
In a place fate deems

When we are together
Let nothing take us apart
For we are strong together
Weak if we to part

So my unknown love
I await for you in darkness
Till your bright light shove
Me into enternal bliss

-By Robert A. Torres

I wrote this during the summer as a writing assignment. What do ya all think?
PostPosted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 12:43 pm


Nice very beautiful. I feel emotion in it which is why I like poetry you can feel the writers emotion.

Lucifer H. Marik
Vice Captain


Aikichii
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 4:59 pm


Lucifer H. Marik
Nice very beautiful. I feel emotion in it which is why I like poetry you can feel the writers emotion.


Thanks I did put some emotion into it at the time.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 5:34 pm


Aikichii
Lucifer H. Marik
Nice very beautiful. I feel emotion in it which is why I like poetry you can feel the writers emotion.


Thanks I did put some emotion into it at the time.
Thats the reason why its good. poetry without emotion is pointless.

Lucifer H. Marik
Vice Captain


Aikichii
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Aug 28, 2006 1:39 pm


Lucifer H. Marik
Aikichii
Lucifer H. Marik
Nice very beautiful. I feel emotion in it which is why I like poetry you can feel the writers emotion.


Thanks I did put some emotion into it at the time.
Thats the reason why its good. poetry without emotion is pointless.


THanks marik seems like your the only one who like it heh surprised
PostPosted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 6:15 am


*sniff sniff* I love your poem! Its too bad that I'm too young to understand love,so yeah... *skips away*

Cherry Delight

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