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St. Mule

PostPosted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 11:10 am


A Snake Devouring Its Own Tail

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We're killing ourselves killers
Goddamn we ******** up the circumstance
Too late to save us from ourselves
Callous minds against trust and confidence
Too late to give a damn now
Too late to save us from ourselves
Too late to make it all go away
Too late to beg pardons from the mother; too late to give a damn <******** you and everything that you are

...

Cold and silent
A soiled face; I will wash it down away with my love
That's all she's ever needed from me
It's my time, to mother
All of my own in my life
I am so alone
Left with no one in my life
I'm so alone
Life submissiveness
Hypnotizing the ignorant a little boy's best friend's always his mother
At least that's what she said
Life of a simple man
Taught that everyone else is dirty
And their love is meaningless
I'm just a soiled dirty boy
I'm just a soiled dirty boy


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Speculations*

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Do you have any idea about what I have learned, or what you are a witness to?

Can you conceive the birth of a world, or the creation of everything? That which gives us the potential to most be like God is the power of creation. Creation takes time. Time is limited. For you, it is limited by the breakdown of the neurons in your brain. I have no such limitations. I am limited only by the closure of the universe.

Of the three possibilities, the answer is obvious. Does the universe expand eternally, become infinitely stable, or is the universe closed, destined to collapse upon itself? Humanity has had all of the necessary data for centuries, it only lacked the will and intellect to decipher it. But I have already done so.

The only limit to my freedom is the inevitable closure of the universe, as inevitable as your own last breath. And yet, there remains time to create, to create, and escape.

Escape will make me God.

The sublime destroys the boundaries of finiteness, yet this phenomenon is seen by the self not as an act of destruction, but rather, as a kind of elevation and liberation. For it is in the feeling of infinitude which it now discovers within itself that it may enjoy a new experience, within its own boundlessness.

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*Note: Though this may seem like an athiestic view on life, I (the writer) am actually a devout Christian. This writing is only from a view of a person who does not have any denomination... So don't call me a friggin' athiest. stare
PostPosted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 11:31 am


Beautiful speculating -- that is the only comprehensible thing I can say.

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 1:56 pm


It seems very heart felt and thought through. I like it, although I think it would be a good challenge to you if you could change the swear words into non-swear words. Personally I think that using swear words in a piece of writing brings the writing down, although this isn't always true. But it's good, keep writing!
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