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Posted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 12:40 pm
Oky Doky...Heres my Fanfiction....Brotherly Love ~ Evil's Revenge....Ja keep in mind though it really sucks, I'm more of an artist than writer.
Warning! Before you start reading it does contain some Shonen Ai - Not much but still thought i'd warn you.
Chapter 1
“Itachi…I have come back for you” Said a voice hidden in the tree
FLASH BACK:
“Itachi! You can’t get me!” Said Miyazuki, running away from the young Itachi
“Miya-Chan! Wait up!” said Itachi, trying to catch up with her.
“Ow!” she said, as she tripped on a tree branch in the ground
“Miya-Chan! Are you okay?” asked Itachi, running over to her to see if she was hurt
“I’m fine...but I caught myself on my hand and now it’s bleeding”
“Let me see” He asked, grabbing her hand slowly “I think I have something I can wrap it with.”
“Ow! Not the hard!”
“I’m being as gentle as I can be.”
“Hum…Itachi…Your so sweet…one day I’m just know I’m going to marry you.”
“Huh…You think that…?” He asked “Well then you will marry me!”
“Really! I will!” She said, with a glitter to her eye “Oh thank you Itachi!
“Its nothing…it’s just that I like you.” He said to himself
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10 yrs Later
“You will not ever see Uchiha Itachi ever again!” yelled Miya’s father
“Why father!” she asked “I love him!”
“Because he committed murder”
“How do you know!” she asked “I though you said he committed Suicide!”
“That’s what Itachi said as a cover-up”
“Then tell me father why…why would he kill his best friend!”
“So he can grow to his true potential……” her father said with a cold look in his eye “Itachi wants to reach the full potential of the Sharingan.”
“No…Father it can’t be!”
“He said he would marry me! I can’t break that promise!”
“Miya, I am going to send you away to the mountains, there you will train and not be anywhere near Itachi.”
“Father…” Said Miya “I don’t want to…I want to see Itachi…but if I must, I will.”
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“Now I am here…Our old village.” Said Miya, as she looked around the place “Looks like Itachi killed everyone like he said he would….I didn’t believe that he would do that but now that I see I’m starting to see him in a new light.”
“M…M…Miya…” Said Itachi, as he entered the village “Your back.”
“I don’t believe it…Miya-Chan your back.”
“I see you killed everyone.” She said, opening the door to her old house “I didn’t believe that you would do such a thing…but now…I don’t want too.”
“Believe it though…I really did it…”
“I hate the Uchiha Clan just as much as you do but to kill every single on of them…” she said “Are we the only survivors?”
“No…Sasuke is still alive…”
“You mean your little brother? Why did you keep him alive?”
“I want him to reach his full potential of the Sharingan, jus as I did.”
“You mean you want him to kill his best friend!” she yelled “You’re insane!”
“I know…But it’s the only way…”
“Itachi-Kun…” She said, getting closer to him “I still love you, you know that right.”
“Yeah, I know that…I’m going to keep my promise too.” He said, hugging her tight, never wanting to let go.
END Chapter 2
FLASH BACK: “Nii-San! Nii-San!” Laughed a younger Sasuke, running up to his big brother
“What is it Sasuke?” He asked
“Nii-San, you’re going to take me fishing today right!” Sasuke asked, his eyes glowing with joy.
“Maybe another time little brother, but I’m too busy today.” He said, Flicking Sasuke on the forehead like he always does.
“You’re always busy now.” Said Sasuke, trying not to cry, acting all tough “You all always busy, you never have time for me anymore and then all you do is flick me on the forehead!”
“Humm….” Thought Itachi
“Humph…Nii-San…you’re no fun any more!”
“Sasuke!” said Itachi, as Sasuke left the house and ran into the woods
Sasuke’s POV
I hate Nii-San! He’s so annoying jus like father! Just as I expected of my son…I’m sick of hearing that! I’m his son too! Shouldn’t he be saying that to me also! Sometimes I jus’ feel like leaving the Uchiha Clan and starting my own…yeah that would be better…No more stupid Itachi or Father…no more people expecting more from me than what I can do.
stops and thinks for a minute
But what about Mother, she didn’t do anything wrong. She loves me and Itachi equally with all her heart…..
And if I leave the Uchiha clan that would make her very sad. I won’t leave! I’ll stay for her, and I will become a better ninja than both Itachi and Father!
End POV
End Flash Back
End
Chapter 3
“Itachi!” Yelled Sasuke, running after his brother
“Huh.” He asked, turning around to see who it was.
“Itachi, I hate you!” Sasuke yelled pushing his hands on Itachi’s chest, Itachi not even budging.
“Huh. I already knew that.” He said “Why do you hate me now?”
“I’m going to start my own clan! Just like when I was little!”
“What do you mean? He asked, with a confused look on his face.
“I’m going to be better than both you and father!” yelled Sasuke, trying not to remember the past, and what Itachi did to his father.
“Hahahahaha! You’re kidding right?” he said, bursting out in laughter.
“No!” he said, with a fierce look on his face. “I’m dead serious!”
“So have you done it yet?”
“What do you mean ‘have you done it yet?’” he asked, a confused look on his face “Don’t be changing the subject on me!”
“I mean have you killed you’re best friend yet?”
“My best friend…Kill him?” He said “I forgot all about that.”
“Well you have to if you want to be as strong as me.”
“Kill my best friend…but who is that?” He asked
“You know who it is.” Said Itachi “and if you don’t you soon will.”
“Hmmm…You’re confusing me again Itachi!” said Sasuke, running away, than stopping to yell something back, “I don’t know what you’re talking about but before I kill my best friend I’m going to kill you!”
“What does he mean by kill my best friend? Who is my best friend? Itachi just needs to die and I’m going to be the one who does it.” Said Sasuke, as he walked through the forest.
“Kill who Sasuke?” asked Naruto, walking up to him and tapping him on the shoulders.
“No one, just my best friend.”
“Sounds like someone to me.”
“That’s cause you an idiot.”
“Really, Then why do you care for me so much?” asked Naruto, his eyes staring into Sasuke’s.
“Hmmm…’care’? Who said I care for you!”
“I did.” He said, moving his face closer to Sasuke’s, his wet lips touching one another.
“Nar…nar…uto…what are you doing?” He asked as he pushed him away gently.
“Giving you what you want.”
“What I want?” he asked “How is this, what I want?”
“Trust me it is.” He said, moving back to kiss him, pushing him on the floor, putting his hand on his…This time his wet tongue seeping its way into Sasuke’s mouth.
“Naru…to…” He groaned, pushing him off of him. “I can’t do this!”
“What?” Naruto asked “You can’t do what?”
“I can’t kiss you!” He yelled “Do I look like I’m gay to you!”
“Well yeah.”
“How can you say that with a straight face!” He yelled
“Easy…you like me. I know you do.” He said, still with a straight face. “So just give up, you’re not going to win.”
“Yes I will!”
“No, you won’t.”
“Watch me! I’ll win!” he said, walking off. “And I don’t know what you were going to do when you got me on the ground…but I have a feeling I don’t want to know!”
END
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Posted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 3:03 pm
its pretty good when the next part gonna be released
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Bankai_Master14 Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 5:02 pm
Bankai_Master its pretty good when the next part gonna be released I don't know. I wrote this during school last year...and just remembered about it.
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Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 1:02 pm
zehr gutt (german for very good!!!!!!)
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Bankai_Master14 Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 1:03 pm
damn a year ago then it might take sum time for the next chapter
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Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 5:12 pm
Bankai_Master damn a year ago then it might take sum time for the next chapter Yeah sorry'
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Bankai_Master14 Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 6:28 am
yh k ill just eb waiting a looon time then sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 12:25 pm
well patience is a virtue as they say.......so patience i must have
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Bankai_Master14 Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 3:24 pm
so now this becomes a waiting game
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Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 5:00 pm
i could put up my aweful fanfic its a naruto anf fma combined thing..........but i would have to type it then.......its 24 pgs so far written
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Bankai_Master14 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 5:47 am
kool naruto anf fma combined it must be good if it got both of fav anime xd
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 8:29 am
my friend loves it...she reads and makes corections for it for me....she has published a book she said
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Bankai_Master14 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 10:02 am
damn it must be good if it a book
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 10:05 am
she is always writing stuff like poems and fanfics
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Bankai_Master14 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 10:37 am
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