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 Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2004 4:03 am
I figured I'd might as well attempt to make a thread in this guild and finally post in it.. sweatdrop Mainly I wanted to share the EeQuee fic I just wrote, Playing Nurse. Also, if anyone wants.. I can post the picture I drew of Kanau awhile back.. *shrugs*
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Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2004 8:59 am
Interesting fic. xd I want to read more of it. Though I do have one suggestion. When describing a character's actions in a story you should only use past tense. Like this, Kanau opened the door, not Kanau opens the door. In the story you often switch tenses which is a bit destracting.
Please post the pic of Kanau. I want to see it. ^^
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Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2004 3:57 pm
YaminoSadame Interesting fic. xd I want to read more of it. Though I do have one suggestion. When describing a character's actions in a story you should only use past tense. Like this, Kanau opened the door, not Kanau opens the door. In the story you often switch tenses which is a bit destracting.
Please post the pic of Kanau. I want to see it. ^^ I don't really know anything about tenses ^^;; *got straight F's in english and such* I'll try to remember to do that though.. When I write the second chapter, I might go over the first and try to fix things. *goes off to upload the pic to photobucket* Oh, I'm going to enter that banner contest thing.. if I can get some pictures from the manga scanned for me to play with and make things.
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Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2004 3:59 pm
 There.. I know it's not good ^^;; I drew it a month or two ago... *thinking of drawing Mikuni molesting Kanau* twisted
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Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2004 11:56 am
LimOfFragReality There.. I know it's not good ^^;; I drew it a month or two ago... *thinking of drawing Mikuni molesting Kanau* twisted
I suppose I should post links to places to get images from huh? That might help people out. sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2004 4:23 pm
YaminoSadame LimOfFragReality There.. I know it's not good ^^;; I drew it a month or two ago... *thinking of drawing Mikuni molesting Kanau* twisted
I suppose I should post links to places to get images from huh? That might help people out. sweatdrop It might, hehe. I haven't gotte even one review for my EeQuee fic yet x.x;; Oh well though~ ^^;;
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Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2004 9:16 pm
LimOfFragReality It might, hehe. I haven't gotte even one review for my EeQuee fic yet x.x;; Oh well though~ ^^;;
That's why I don't do much on FF.net. I have an account there, but I haven't posted anything in a long time, and I might end up just posting fictions someplace else.
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Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2004 11:31 pm
YaminoSadame LimOfFragReality It might, hehe. I haven't gotte even one review for my EeQuee fic yet x.x;; Oh well though~ ^^;;
That's why I don't do much on FF.net. I have an account there, but I haven't posted anything in a long time, and I might end up just posting fictions someplace else.
Hmm. When I'm in my next EQ kick (which will probably be soon), I'm going to go read that fanfic. heart AND REVIEW IT! MWA! heart
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Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2004 11:46 pm
YaminoSadame LimOfFragReality It might, hehe. I haven't gotte even one review for my EeQuee fic yet x.x;; Oh well though~ ^^;;
That's why I don't do much on FF.net. I have an account there, but I haven't posted anything in a long time, and I might end up just posting fictions someplace else.ff.net has been the only place I've posted my fics really.. I put some on mm.org and eff.net before though too..
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Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2004 11:49 pm
Idiom Laurels YaminoSadame LimOfFragReality It might, hehe. I haven't gotte even one review for my EeQuee fic yet x.x;; Oh well though~ ^^;;
That's why I don't do much on FF.net. I have an account there, but I haven't posted anything in a long time, and I might end up just posting fictions someplace else.
Hmm. When I'm in my next EQ kick (which will probably be soon), I'm going to go read that fanfic. heart AND REVIEW IT! MWA! heart Yay whee I was planning to update either after I've gotten five reviews.. or a week later.. so yeah. I have one so far. I think the week will probably happen first.
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2004 10:04 am
When you put up the next chapter I'll review it for you. I'm too lazy to log in at the moment. xp
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2004 6:17 pm
YaminoSadame When you put up the next chapter I'll review it for you. I'm too lazy to log in at the moment. xp I really should update my other fics before I update PN though.. Or people might start threatening me again x.x;; *tends to attract odd rabbid fans*
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2004 8:16 pm
LimOfFragReality YaminoSadame When you put up the next chapter I'll review it for you. I'm too lazy to log in at the moment. xp I really should update my other fics before I update PN though.. Or people might start threatening me again x.x;; *tends to attract odd rabbid fans*
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2004 9:41 pm
Idiom Laurels LimOfFragReality YaminoSadame When you put up the next chapter I'll review it for you. I'm too lazy to log in at the moment. xp I really should update my other fics before I update PN though.. Or people might start threatening me again x.x;; *tends to attract odd rabbid fans* I also tend to attract flames, lol. I got e-mailed the other day by one of my rabid fans.. they kept going on and on about how one of my old YGO fics was the best fic with Malik in it they'd ever read.. They did even say that fic it was though.. *in a mood to babble*
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Posted: Sun Sep 26, 2004 12:16 am
lol It's been so long since I"ve updated, that I think the rabid fans gave up. xp I got tired of the same types of reviews, and getting told to update. If you want me to update, then say that you like/dislike my fic, and how I can improve; not UPDATE!!!!!!!!11111, or you must update. I loose my motivation when forced to update.
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