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Ai_Hoshiko

PostPosted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 7:03 pm


Just words that came out of my head while I was listenin to music. So yea.

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If all I do is cry tears of sorrow
Then what is it I’m crying for?

There is no one I love
No one I care for

I’m just a caged bird locked up in darkness
A lonesome portrait of great beauty
Only left in a place where time stops
I’m stuck in time from when my heart was broken
To when I use to love those who were oh so close to me,
The one's who were so loyal who’d never leave my side.

I can’t remember what it was like
I can’t remember who they are
I can’t remember what the world looks like
I can’t open my eyes so painful just to see nothing
There is no light

There is nothing inside of me
I’m an empty casket just forget me
Just leave me here

I can’t hear your pleas for me to stay
I can’t say I love you
I can’t say I know you
I can’t tell you anything
God has stitched my lips closed tight

He told me to die
In my dreams told me to never open my eyes again
Told me to shut you all out told me the world was so cruel
Told me I only burden those around me
And now I lay motionless here dead

Do you hear me god…
I’m dead but…
Now what?

Heaven doesn’t exist
And hell was just a myth.
The devil was never there
And you don’t even exist…
All I heard,
Were the voices in my head?
PostPosted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 9:31 am


Sometimes things that just "come out of your head" can be the best, you don't over think them you just write. If you just write something without thinking a lot about it to much it can be better than if youjust sit there concentrating on trying to make one line work and make sense with the rest of the stanza.

One thing...
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To when I use to love those who were oh so close to me,

Did you mean "used to love"?

Henneth Annun


Ai_Hoshiko

PostPosted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 8:24 pm


yea oopsie.

Thanks for pointing that out!I agree. I dont see any point in poetry having to be something you have to work so hard to get that one word right. Just write what comes to your head and work from there. : P

ahhhh grammer sucks though!! (i dont have a problom with it Im just too lazy at the moment.)
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