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Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 10:29 am

I hold a mask of darkness,
Hidden within the shadows,
Stripes of silver needles,
Slashed across it,
It never leaves me behind,
It never fades away,
It will stay by me,
Until I leave it.

I hold a mask of darkness,
That hides what I foresee,
Emotions lay hidden,
Turbulence unnoticed,
But that is how I wish it to be,
For me to seek solace,
Within my mask of darkness.

A/N: Picture belongs to my friend, The Succubus. Poetry is fully mine smile

Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 10:50 am

Wow.
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The picture is great, and so is the poem.
Did your friend draw the picture for the poem?

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Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 11:00 am

thanks crushed <3
yeah, she drew the pic specially for the poem..it was a challenge i formed actually...draw art based on words.and she won it hands down ^^

Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 11:43 am

Woah. The art really does fit the poem.
I like it.

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Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 12:04 pm

thanks steve-chan <3
i think so too ^^

Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 2:49 pm

omg that is absolutely amazing!

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Posted: Sat Aug 05, 2006 2:54 am

Creeper39

omg that is absolutely amazing!

thanks creeper ^^

Posted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 7:56 pm

I love it! It's absolutley(sp) perfect!

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Posted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 11:36 pm

Ai_Hoshiko

I love it! It's absolutley(sp) perfect!

thanks smile

Posted: Thu Aug 10, 2006 10:00 am

i know you didn't draw the picture, but I love the picture.

i felt more emotion in the picture then your poem

the poem made me feel deferent than the poem
the poem made me feel like you (ever since your poem is in 1st person)
used the mask as a shell to hide you and anyone else looking at you felt nothing but calm and coldness from the mask

the picture made me feel like the person didn't want anyone to know what she felt and had a mask but she secretly wanted you to understand her sadness so you see her peeking out of her mask

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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 10:45 am

yujako114eva

i know you didn't draw the picture, but I love the picture.

i felt more emotion in the picture then your poem

the poem made me feel deferent than the poem
the poem made me feel like you (ever since your poem is in 1st person)
used the mask as a shell to hide you and anyone else looking at you felt nothing but calm and coldness from the mask

the picture made me feel like the person didn't want anyone to know what she felt and had a mask but she secretly wanted you to understand her sadness so you see her peeking out of her mask

thanks for the comment smile
yeah well, i believe that this is what everyone has been doing...it conforms our lives...and we rarely see those who speak out their minds bluntly, right? =]

as for the picture,i love it as well. a forum friend drew that as a challenge based on my poem...she really did capture the meaning of the poem and i love her for that smile

Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 6:28 pm

I absulutely loved your poem! I really like the picture that goes with it too. Are you going to do any other poems? You should because you are really good at it!

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