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 Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 8:32 pm
Don't change me,
I like the way I am.
If you don't like me,
Fine, I don't care.
Just,
Don't change me.
I can't be your prom queen,
I'm sorry I can't be your cutie teen.
I'm me and,
I'm in my own world.
I'll be your girl,
Just,
Don't change me.
Love isn't about changing,
Are you sure I'm the one?
Because you're not mine.
I will love you.
Just,
Don't change me.
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Posted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 7:09 pm
I didn’t feel any emotion when I read this. Plus one line of one stanza shouldn’t have just one word. Also there was a lot of repeating, I herd the same words over and over. I wouldn't be surprised if someone stopped reading mid-sentence of line one.
Sorry if I was harsh.
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Posted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 8:02 pm
I know.
I had half a mind not to post that, but I did, and it's just....
Meh.
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Posted: Thu Aug 10, 2006 10:14 am
it does seem a bit weird
it sounds weird
emotion is absent
i do not mean to be mean if mean was how i sounded
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