This one is much better, I have to say. I just dont think your paying attention.
To me it seems like
Scribble scribble scribble, enter key here enter key there and spell check ok Im done! Look back on it. Read it over and over and over again. Read it 12000 for all I care, but dont say your done until your satisfied with! Unless your brain is fried then thats an acception.
Quote:
It's amazing what you'll find
When you just open
up your mind,
Sometimes love can leave you blind,
But still you try
To cover
up all the lies,
And ignore all the signs.What I thought was a certainty,
Has left me
spinning.
That we had spoken it seems to me,
Comparing to the last,
timeThat you're not happy,
Like you used to be.
To you I'm like a flavor
That wouldn't
even last,
You took one bite,
And spat me
back out.
real fast.
Now this mark will remain,
A scar from all the pain.
Sorry for editing it, but I just wanted to show you what it
might have looked like if you went back, read it over and made some changes.
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