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 Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 8:00 pm
Another poem. (I'm only posting my poems or stories because the forums are so dead gonk )
Earth Goes Round
Earth Goes Round
Like a hound
Chacing his tail
Or the mail
Oceans are blue
Cows go moo
Land is green
It grows beans
Beans we eat
Or a beat
Fish swim around
Untill they are bound
In a net
Or kept as a pet
Humans work
For a fork
Of cash
To throw a bash
Eagles fly free
or in a tree
Earth goes round
Making no sound
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 8:44 pm
Heh, I really like the first four lines. But I didn't get why "Beans we eat/Or a beat" and "Humans work/For a fork/Of cash." Did you you mean "Or we beat?" And what is a fork of cash?
I probably don't have as much material as yourself, so I intend to post only, like, one a day so that it all lasts while I work on new stuff. But if you keep posting it gives me something to do since I don't feel like doing my Music Business homework domokun
(Hey, figured out how to get the signature thing to work. rawk.)
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 9:17 pm
MaDMiDgEt Heh, I really like the first four lines. But I didn't get why "Beans we eat/Or a beat" and "Humans work/For a fork/Of cash." Did you you mean "Or we beat?" And what is a fork of cash? I probably don't have as much material as yourself, so I intend to post only, like, one a day so that it all lasts while I work on new stuff. But if you keep posting it gives me something to do since I don't feel like doing my Music Business homework domokun (Hey, figured out how to get the signature thing to work. rawk.) Umm, I know my poems have many mistakes. I am no poem writer is all. I just write whatever comes to mind when I'm bored.
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 9:20 pm
MaDMiDgEt (Hey, figured out how to get the signature thing to work. rawk.) Awesome 3nodding glad to hear it.
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 9:22 pm
YuHavery MaDMiDgEt Heh, I really like the first four lines. But I didn't get why "Beans we eat/Or a beat" and "Humans work/For a fork/Of cash." Did you you mean "Or we beat?" And what is a fork of cash? Umm, I know my poems have many mistakes. I am no poem writer is all. I just write whatever comes to mind when I'm bored. Oh, ok. Well, mind if I just do a little edit? Ah, thank you. "Humans work/for a pork/or cash." Mmmm...pork.
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 9:24 pm
MaDMiDgEt YuHavery MaDMiDgEt Heh, I really like the first four lines. But I didn't get why "Beans we eat/Or a beat" and "Humans work/For a fork/Of cash." Did you you mean "Or we beat?" And what is a fork of cash? Umm, I know my poems have many mistakes. I am no poem writer is all. I just write whatever comes to mind when I'm bored. Oh, ok. Well, mind if I just do a little edit? Ah, thank you. "Humans work/for a pork/or cash." Mmmm...pork. lol, pork? blaugh
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 9:34 pm
YuHavery MaDMiDgEt Oh, ok. Well, mind if I just do a little edit? Ah, thank you. "Humans work/for a pork/or cash." Mmmm...pork. lol, pork? blaugh Yes, pork! Pork is so good and...meaty and...porky! Very sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 9:36 pm
MaDMiDgEt YuHavery MaDMiDgEt Oh, ok. Well, mind if I just do a little edit? Ah, thank you. "Humans work/for a pork/or cash." Mmmm...pork. lol, pork? blaugh Yes, pork! Pork is so good and...meaty and...porky! Very sweatdrop I hate pork.
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 9:39 pm
xp ::throws pork at YuHavery:: domokun
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 9:41 pm
MaDMiDgEt xp ::throws pork at YuHavery:: domokun *Runs*
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 9:42 pm
Well, I have nothing against pork... but my parents make me eat it too much and it drives me crazy now. stressed
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 9:48 pm
YuHavery Well, I have nothing against pork... but my parents make me eat it too much and it drives me crazy now. stressed Well dang girl, have your parents send some pork my way if you don't want it domokun
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 9:50 pm
MaDMiDgEt YuHavery Well, I have nothing against pork... but my parents make me eat it too much and it drives me crazy now. stressed Well dang girl, have your parents send some pork my way if you don't want it domokun lol, I wish. All they cook is pork. stare
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 9:58 pm
YuHavery MaDMiDgEt YuHavery Well, I have nothing against pork... but my parents make me eat it too much and it drives me crazy now. stressed Well dang girl, have your parents send some pork my way if you don't want it domokun lol, I wish. All they cook is pork. stare Ah...Hey, mind if I IM you on AIM? Would make chatting easier, for sure. This constant reloading is getting a bother. And I no longer seem to be earning gold... gonk
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 10:01 pm
MaDMiDgEt YuHavery MaDMiDgEt YuHavery Well, I have nothing against pork... but my parents make me eat it too much and it drives me crazy now. stressed Well dang girl, have your parents send some pork my way if you don't want it domokun lol, I wish. All they cook is pork. stare Ah...Hey, mind if I IM you on AIM? Would make chatting easier, for sure. This constant reloading is getting a bother. And I no longer seem to be earning gold... gonk Sure thing!
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