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 Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 8:14 am
This Is My Poem And You Can Rate How Good My poem is And U could Also Leave A Comment
Suffering soul
My soul is nothing more then
A simple spirit stuck in the
Darkness where it suffers
Painfully tortured by sorrow
And sadness so much unable
To move, speak, and, feel
Anymore the flames of death
Deep inside burns in a way of
Rage and hatred it reigns over
All souls bringing eternal
Darkness.
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Posted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 11:15 am
i liked it. it flows very well, however it's very dark... but then again, with poetry, the dark things are easier to write about... sad, isn't it? we have more words for suffering than we do for joy....
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Posted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 1:16 pm
You write similar to me..deep, very deep.. I like it!
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Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 11:28 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 6:24 pm
I love it,it reads easily!Good Job!!
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 8:58 am
hmmm good i like it but no offence please dont take this offencive its not great i've read a few like this but its good
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 8:54 am
i like it..its pretty good...
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Posted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 9:17 pm
well i'm not that yet good in writeing poems yet
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