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Jazzguy_87

PostPosted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 9:41 pm


Just read it and tell me what you think:


This is the Title of This Poem

It would seem it’s very tough,
Even a bit berserk,
The hardest part of writing,
Is titling your work.

You want it to be perfect,
That’s easy to be said,
You don’t want to find your work
Is hardly ever read.

‘Cause it’s the first thing people see,
When reading what you wrote,
And it may be the only thing
The reader’s going to note.

Before they make that choice:
To read, or not to read.
So an extra super title
Is exactly what you need.

So work to find a title
To catch the reader’s eye.
Something odd, or really strange,
A reader won’t pass by.

Which brings me to example,
Weird titles work on you.
See, you have just accomplished.
Reading my poem through.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 7:05 am


Ha ha. I like it. rofl

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 8:57 pm


speaking of weird titles... I came up for a title for our comment story... the swing dancing squirrels.... Yeah, I know, it sucks, but I'm tired...
PostPosted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 8:56 am


Pretty Nifty work you got there Jazz.

Siren Cullen


sister kisa

PostPosted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 3:44 pm


nice poem. 3nodding
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