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 Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 7:59 am
Sitting in front of an old mirror she extends her hand lightly till she touches the mirror. She notices her pale skin and her long black hair. Her long black silky hair had begun to curl up and onto her shoulders. She began to weep softly as if no sound can be heard. She looks to the side and there’s a picture of a man. She picks it up with a shake in her hands bringing the picture to her side. She helds it beside her and see’s the reflection of herself and of this man. Weep is what she did.
What is the reason of her sadness? Can you guess?
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 8:01 am
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Posted: Sat Jul 15, 2006 6:22 am
Did you write that yourself?
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Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 10:59 pm
I like that. It's good...nice story part.
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 6:30 pm
She's upset because her man died?
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Posted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 11:05 am
i like it. it's a nice little thing. did that guy die or something? leave her? move away?
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Posted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 1:18 pm
She's a Widow.. Maybe I'm close, maybe not..
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 6:40 pm
I think she made the mistake of leaving him and now realizes that he was her true love...except now he doesn't want her back...meh,that's proly not it tho..
Well it's written really well!!
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Posted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 1:51 pm
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Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 11:23 pm
very original, and you can vividly see it in your mind, very good!!~
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