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000Hinata000 Vice Captain
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 Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 1:23 pm
I cen't write poems all that well, but I know some people are really good at it! So post your potery! it can be anything from hakus to big long ones! it doen't matter how long! We'll be th judges of how good it is! I like all poems so I think it will be very good! Poems are a type of fanfiction, you know wink
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 1:29 pm
Here's a poem I got off of Fanfiction.net! The names aren't mentioned but I think it's SakuraNarutoSasuke!
You've made me pleed allready.
You've made me bleed as well.
I love you to the point it hurts.
But you'd rather rot in hell.
It's been two years-I'm still in tears.
And now he's gone as well.
Learning and getting stronger.
The days keep getting longer.
He's so wrapped up in finding you-just because I asked him to.
I wish you two would wait a minute.
Hey hold up-'cause I'm still in it!
This is my team just the same.
We were not born to die in vain.
I'll get stronger!
Wait and see!
And then I'll bring you back with me.
Me and him-and you and me.
We'll be be together just us three.
We'll all be happy-and you'll see...
Just promise you'll return to me.
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000Hinata000 Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 9:34 am
Only Hope
Outside she crying, inside she's dying
Sick and tired of always trying
She fights so hard to hold them at bay
It's always the same, day after day
She wants to give up, but she just doesn't dare
She has to keep going, can't even stop for air
She's the only one left to keep us alive
She the our only hope to survive
She's our light in the dark, but she's dying inside
'Cause she has no shelter of her own, no place to run and hide
It makes no sense to fight so long
To think she's right when she might be wrong
It hurts so much to keep holding on this way
She wants to find a corner and hide away
It's duty and it's love that pulls her through
It's knowing that this is what she must do
She's got no choice, she has to fight the dark
Her destiny's there, in a crescent moon mark
It's hard, and it's lonely, and it hurts her so deep
But's she'll keep dying inside, while outside she weeps.
Just wrote that up for you. Can you guess who it's about?
Also, Hinata, you need to find the penname of the FF.net member who wrote the poem and post it, or I'll have to delete your second post.
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Posted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 7:38 pm
Okay I looked up who wrote that poem in my second post! It was .... *drum roll*.......... Atari Arashi chan on FF.net!
by the way I really like that only hope poem!!! that's really good!
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000Hinata000 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jul 15, 2006 10:09 am
Thank you. Casiela's a storyteller, but I'm just a humble poet.
We both rock at waxing poetic, though.
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Posted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 6:42 pm
CAn you write another one? I really like what you wrote last time it was so cool!
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000Hinata000 Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 12:23 pm
I'd be happy to try, if you'd give me a subject. I'm afraid I don't know much about Naruto, however.
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Posted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 10:07 pm
As the tears roll from your eyes, I wish I could cry. I wish I could feel everything you do, but things aren't as simple as that. I'm cried so many tears over these bleak years, I can no longer join you anymore in letting everything go. So as I gaze into your eyes please forgive me for watching you cry. I wish I could let it all go with you but, nothing is ever that easy or simple.
(Sort of just made it up!)
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000Hinata000 Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 11:57 am
That's a good poem!! you guys are good!! I'm not so good at write poetry, but I like to read poetry!!!
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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2006 1:36 am
You're sweet but, maybe you should give it a try? It's all about just letting thoughts come out in a sort of relaxing way. At least to me. I shouldn't say anything, mine really sucked!
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000Hinata000 Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 8:40 am
The only poem I ever made was some Naruto limricks. That didn't really make any sense. And I made up a few words because i couldn't find a rymeing word. But can you post another poem? I just love reading them! well the first one, and so i think I'll the second to!
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Posted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 9:30 pm
If you insist, I thought it sucked.
Bitter Love
You hurt me more than anyone I never knew, but I still loved you until the bitter end. You pushed me around, destroyed my life, made everything so unbearable, but I still smiled when you enter the room. If you told me to jump off a bridge, I'd soar. But, there are some things I couldn't even let go with a shrug. The way you hurt everyone I love with a smile, the way you order me to do the unthinkable just to hurt me. You were unfair, selfious, and evil but, you are still the one I care for. Even when the end came, I still looked you in the eyes with all the love in the world. You cursed me in the end, I still spoke of my love for you. Even now, I miss you, I love you. I only wish you were here to see me but, at the same time I'm happy you aren't. You destroyed everything you touched, including me. Still, I sit at your grave and weep with all my heart. I'll never stop hating you, or loving you. Wherever you are, I know you hear these words and are laughing at me but, all I could do is smile at you.
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000Hinata000 Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 8:01 am
!!!!!
That's really good!! I love reading your poems!!! how long have you been writing!! and thanks for writing a poem!!
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 7:47 am
[..THIS IS MY HUNDREDTH POST IN FFA..] I liked that.
It conveyed the theme to the reader really well, made me feel what the subject was feeling.
 [..THIS IS MY HUNDREDTH POST IN FFA..]
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 4:02 pm
Thanks both of you. As for writing, since I was 9 I believe. Though it was a journal at first and simple day dreaming. By the way, PC nice.
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