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Sundey

PostPosted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 7:23 pm


How Can I?

How can I go on when all I have it this?
The oppisite of everyone, who has eternal bliss,
I can't go on in this unreal place,
I can't continue to wear a fake face.

To cry alone in a dark lonley room,
My pain, for years, has continued to bloom,
I want to just give up all hope,
To step down from this really high rope.

But I have one more thing left to do,
And that is to say "I love you,"
But I canot go on with this pain,
It's like waiting during a drought for rain.
Goodbye world,goodbye to you,
Just remember that I loved you.

Yeah, I know it may not be the best...but oh well. Atleast I understand it.  
PostPosted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 9:01 pm


Poetry isn't about being the best. It is about free expression and you did a wonderful job. It has a powerful flow of words to it and it is a really nice piece.

Rayge
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Sundey

PostPosted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 12:53 pm


Rayge
Poetry isn't about being the best. It is about free expression and you did a wonderful job. It has a powerful flow of words to it and it is a really nice piece.
*huggles* Thanks! People usually bash my work. They tell me to get over my feelings. Thanks, it means a lot blaugh
PostPosted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 6:39 pm


Don't mention it. I don't believe in bashing someone's work. Poetry is about feelings and free expression...so express them.

Rayge
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Mr.Spazmatic
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 7:29 pm


As Rayge says its essetale this is a place were you can express your feelings and no one bashes your work

I find your poem

Simply inticising
PostPosted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 11:38 am


Tis Only the Truth.

Rayge
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Somberaiser

PostPosted: Sat Jul 01, 2006 11:07 pm


Sundey
Rayge
Poetry isn't about being the best. It is about free expression and you did a wonderful job. It has a powerful flow of words to it and it is a really nice piece.
*huggles* Thanks! People usually bash my work. They tell me to get over my feelings. Thanks, it means a lot blaugh


In my opinion, the peole who told you to get over your feelings do't know true poery. Some ofthe greatest poets had several deep felt feelings in their work (Poe, Frost, ect.). I think you did a wonderful job and you should continue to express your feelings through poetry. *smiles reassurigly*Thankies!
PostPosted: Sun Jul 02, 2006 8:22 am


The emotions of love, hate, desire, anger, envy, etc. can be crafted into the most beautiful works of poetry. Deep seated emotion can twisted and shaped into your favor to create the purest form of this art, but the sweet limricks based upon raw emotion

Rayge
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Somberaiser

PostPosted: Sun Jul 02, 2006 12:42 pm


Rayge
The emotions of love, hate, desire, anger, envy, etc. can be crafted into the most beautiful works of poetry. Deep seated emotion can twisted and shaped into your favor to create the purest form of this art, but the sweet limricks based upon raw emotion


*Claps* Beautifully said!
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