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Mr.Spazmatic Vice Captain
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 Posted: Tue Jun 20, 2006 7:54 am
Just write or show us a poem you have wrote
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Posted: Tue Jun 20, 2006 10:20 am
Remember N0 MAKING FUN OF ANYONE'S POEMS THIS IS A PLACE TO HAVE A POEM TO THINK ABOUT NOT WORRY IF THET'RE POEM WHERE NOT THE BEST!!!!!
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Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 11:26 pm
Friendship Rose
A friend's misery
is like a dying rose
It wilts away
as the wind blows
A friend's happiness
is a rose in full bloom
It feels like it
brightens the room
Through misery and joy
everyone will stand strong
for their friendships are long.
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Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 3:59 pm
Nice to see an optimistic flow in a poetic sense. Not too bad. Hope to see more.
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Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 8:49 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 12:44 am
But of course. Although, it would be nice to see something from all of you. It's always fun seeing all the different writing styles.
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Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 7:15 pm
Starting tommorow,
I'm leaveing yesterday,
My memories attack me,
As they begin to fade away,
Todays troubles,
they reflect tomorrows tears,
As yesterdays forgotten,
Admist these passing years,
The chains that bound the times to me,
Rust and break away,
Releaseing all the memroies,
Of tommorrow,
Yesterday,
Today.
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Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 7:20 pm
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Mr.Spazmatic Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 7:29 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 7:31 pm
no probs it was a magnificent peice
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Mr.Spazmatic Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 10:50 pm
Simple in structure, but deep in meaning. There is a great flow of words, and it has a singy-songy tone with great thought behind it. It truly is an excellent piece. The subject of time is always an interesting subject.
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 7:26 am
In the Abyss
I sit waiting
Falling into total nothingness
trying to find the light
The farther I fall
More time passes
longer and longer I'm gone
The blacker my heart becomes,
yet with one rose
The true temption of light or love
one choice
what shall I choose
P.S. Its not one of my best its just one I just though of
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Mr.Spazmatic Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 11:41 am
Not bad at all. The battle between hate and love, light and abyssmal darkness, is always a great subject to cover as it is relative to many people. Nice piece I must say.
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 10:47 pm
My tears they frame my pale face,
As i drift into deep nothing,
Holding onto my shadows embrace,
its the only thing that can comfort me,
It scares me that i loved this much,
It scares me that i cared,
It scares me that when i lost you,
I lived my worst nightmare,
I hold on tight,
I choke on words,
but i let no feelings show,
You plague my life,
you plague my heart,
but this you'll never know...
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 11:10 pm
*clap clap clap*
The perilous path to love.. excellent.
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