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Bevyn
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 4:03 pm


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Avatar art done for [Mitarashi_Anko]

-Done with my laptop touchpad-
-Photoshop 6.0 ( Yea, I know it's almost outdated << )-







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I really like the coloring you've done especially with his hair. I don't particulary like the hat though, sorry, not my thing I guess. My favorite part would have to be with the pants and the sheen you gave them nice job. The fingers though are really boxy and don't look right. From the way her wrist it all the finger should not be showing completely, more knuckles in it would be nice. The face I think should go in a little more and not straight down, what you did makes it look really narrow and the chin is extremely pointy, ouch. The wings need alot of work it looks like saws were jammed in her back though. For being done with a touchpad though I think you did a very nice job. Anad again I love the coloring. Oh! And one last thing (sorry) the right leg is going waaaaay to far out and the knee is displaced. Something you can do with the left leg to show the elbow is resting on it though is put some shadowing and creases on the pants just so it doesn't look like the arm was pasted on the leg ^^ But I am serious when I say it is a nice picture ^^ keep up the good work!


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10 19% [ 8 ]
9 7% [ 3 ]
8 16% [ 7 ]
7 21% [ 9 ]
6 9% [ 4 ]
5 9% [ 4 ]
4 4% [ 2 ]
3 2% [ 1 ]
2 4% [ 2 ]
1 4% [ 2 ]

Total Votes : 42
PostPosted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 5:22 pm


~ To be honest. I'm really not all that great at critiquing so, I do apologize that my opinion seems Bias. However, I rated it a 4. Not precisely my 'cup of tea' if you understand what I mean by that, however it is very nice for what it is, as well, it is very well done for the type of media that it is suppoed to be. I do however, agree with the critiquing of the last person... 3nodding

~ Keep it up. and Keep trying. I know its better than what I can do. ^-^

Shinku Shukumei


Pandalover263
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 9:13 pm


I like! I gave it an 8, I really like the picture, but I think you could work a little more on it... the commentary above pretty much covered all... two... things I saw so yeah ^_^
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