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 Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2005 10:50 pm
I sit here alone
In the dark
I have no home
I'm waiting for you
To set me free
But instead
You've let me be
It's getting cold now
And I'm alone
I'm hoping for glee
But can only bleed
So as I sit here alone
With no home
You won't remember me
Okay, so I'm still fairly new to Gaia and this whole poetry thing. So forgive me if this is kinda lame. I'm going through some mental distortions now, and my mind is set to overdrive homicidal suicide.
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Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2005 9:44 am
Well new or not, it is a good poem. wink Hopefully you'll stay around longer, so I can read your furture works.
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Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2005 9:15 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2005 5:19 am
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Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2005 3:59 am
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2005 9:24 am
it's just fine my friend, just sharpin it out and you will have a fine edge and a good one.
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 10:57 am
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