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 Posted: Mon Jun 12, 2006 8:55 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 3:56 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 11:04 am
*clap clap clap* love it! 3nodding 3nodding 4laugh
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Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 5:27 am
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Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 2:42 pm
The poem was okish,
(hope you dont mind constructice critisism)
But the poem didnt seem to have depth, everything was plain in your face. You just seemed to be stating what happened on the ship and i didnt think it read much like a poem. sorry.
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Posted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 2:03 pm
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