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Hello all, Im still new here, Infact vey new to your guild yet, and this isnt exactly my most original bit of work, but I wrote it about 15 minutes ago, this is the unedited version of it, the original typings are in my online journal. Anyways, I know its not great, but I have to start a thread at somepoint, and this is as good a reason as any.

Do You Ever Feel Broken?
Do you ever feel broken?
Like a peice of shattered glass?
Do you ever feel lost?
A forgotten bit of trash?
When no one listens, and yet you scream.
When no one cares, and still you dream.
Do you ever feel used?
Like a sip of cheap wine?
Do you ever feel torn?
Pushed on both sides of the line?
When no one wonders, and you wait to be found
When no one looks, and your about to drown
Do you ever feel broken?
Lost in a world like this,
Do you ever feel broken?
Abused like some petty miss,
Do you ever feel broken?
Ill tell you I do,
Do you ever feel broken?
Shattered and through.

Gentleflame.

Thank you Sigurd, for the moment, yes I have.

Quite depressing, nice work.

Spiffy. <3 ninja

I like it. I'm not usually a fan of such writing, but I didn't get downed by this one.