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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2005 4:20 am
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2005 4:22 am
The other side of you
I never was that lucky to see the happy side of you. I tried so hard to make you happy, it broke my heart that day I saw you with her! But that was the first time I actually saw you smile, but it wasn't with me! I thought that someday you would come around, and the beating would stop! Now I know why you beaten me all those times, you thought that I would leave but I stay because I loved you! I didn't think you knew how to show your love, I found out that day you did! I hate you, I want to hurt her like you hurt me!
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2005 6:38 am
Great idea to make a thread for poetry... 3nodding 3nodding I'll post one of my poems sometime soon.. xp
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2005 8:00 am
[A THOUSAND WINDS]
Do not stand at my grave and weep. I am not there. I do not sleep there.
I am a thousand winds that blow, I am the diamond glint on snow, I am the sunlight on ripened grain, I am the gentle autumn's rain.
When you awaken in the morning's hush, I am the swift uplifting rush of quiet birds in the circled flight, I am the soft stars that shine at night.
Do not stand at my grave and cry. I am not there; I did not die.
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2005 8:36 am
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2005 8:37 am
That one I posted isn't my own poem sweatdrop I wish I could write decent poetry but I can't. sad
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2005 8:46 am
Sariel_Flaillen That one I posted isn't my own poem sweatdrop I wish I could write decent poetry but I can't. sad Aaaawww... *pads on back* Well you're good at being random and funny.. So why not try and scribble down some poetry? xp
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2005 8:48 am
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2005 8:57 am
innocent_kitty Sariel_Flaillen That one I posted isn't my own poem sweatdrop I wish I could write decent poetry but I can't. sad Aaaawww... *pads on back* Well you're good at being random and funny.. So why not try and scribble down some poetry? xp lol, since i'm listening to music it would probably end up being a mix of lyrics somehow. xp
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2005 9:02 am
Sariel_Flaillen innocent_kitty Sariel_Flaillen That one I posted isn't my own poem sweatdrop I wish I could write decent poetry but I can't. sad Aaaawww... *pads on back* Well you're good at being random and funny.. So why not try and scribble down some poetry? xp lol, since i'm listening to music it would probably end up being a mix of lyrics somehow. xp Hehe.. xp Then bring a small piece of paper to school and perhaps write there? xp That's what I do sometimes.. Whenever everyone is looking in another direction.. xd xd
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2005 9:04 am
innocent_kitty Hehe.. xp Then bring a small piece of paper to school and perhaps write there? xp That's what I do sometimes.. Whenever everyone is looking in another direction.. xd xd lol, I listen to music at college just as much as I do at home. sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2005 9:07 am
Sariel_Flaillen innocent_kitty Hehe.. xp Then bring a small piece of paper to school and perhaps write there? xp That's what I do sometimes.. Whenever everyone is looking in another direction.. xd xd lol, I listen to music at college just as much as I do at home. sweatdrop Hahahha!!! I can only listen to music when we don't have classes.. xp Though recently not as much as I used to O.o xp
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2005 6:32 pm
Wasted
Time keeps draining away as the clock slowly turns I beg and I cry for a chance but you turned away and said you want nothing more with me .. It's the end of what all I've tried to do I don't give a ******** your gone and I'm here with all the pieces that I've gave to you. You left it in the dust you left me crying, crying to die. I hate you I want back what's mine you didn't keep it you just left it there I want it back never forgive you never want you back stupid me I should of seen what was written on the wall
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2005 6:34 pm
btw ... I need feedback on me poems .. thankies <3
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Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2005 9:24 am
I know this poem isn't all that good, so no need to tell me.
"I Am Unworthy" I am unworthy for thine eyes to see, Such a pitiful creature as me. Your beautiful voice doth sooth my ears, And its kind and caring words bring me to tears. To think that you could give me love, Thy must be an angel from up above. If thouse beauty were cast into the sky, Then to the sun we would say goodbye. I wish and hope and pray, That the day of our marriage shall not be delayed. I am eternally grateful that I have found, Such a love that knows no bounds. And if we were to ever part, The pain would be too much for my heart. Tru are these words that come from me, That say I am unworthy of thee.
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