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Severus Snape of the GD
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PostPosted: Mon May 22, 2006 8:46 pm


Garden of the Past


Hidden among vines so old,
lies a garden with many tales untold.
Crumbling wall held only by spirit,
of people passed on who had once dared go near it.

Roses and stems
winding swiftly with thorn,
are dead and dying
with no one to mourn.

Should a soul pass by
and touch their sweet petals,
would they wonder why
they've turned cold as metal?

The silence has brought
a mysterious mist
leaving memories hazy
and clenched like a fist.

It's climbing and praying
for someone to care,
that a once great garden,
is no longer there.

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PostPosted: Fri May 26, 2006 1:52 pm


wow i really like it!!! did you write it?

fire_scorn
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frayedsanity
Crew

PostPosted: Sun May 28, 2006 1:01 pm


its good. hope i can read something more sometime.
PostPosted: Sun May 28, 2006 1:34 pm


Yes I wrote it for a book report I had to do on The Secret Garden. I love writing poems! 4laugh

Severus Snape of the GD
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frayedsanity
Crew

PostPosted: Wed May 31, 2006 8:24 pm


i'm really bad with making poems so im never much interested in making them...
PostPosted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 1:19 pm


I love it when my english teacher tells me to write a poem heart ...it's like 15 minutes of work. Book Reports on the Secret Garden...not so much stare

Severus Snape of the GD
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frayedsanity
Crew

PostPosted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 8:21 pm


gahh i hate book reports. i love books and reading them and even though im slow at reading i read a crap load i hate having to write about the books.
PostPosted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 11:49 pm


ya me too...it's the authors that do the writing...they wrote the book...so why should WE have to write about a book that THEY wrote?!

It makes no sense. If we wanted to write, we would write a book of our own. ...yes. I have another book report to do over the summer...it's on THE GOOD EARTH. Has anyone read it? Is it gonna be extremely boring, or what?

Severus Snape of the GD
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Savanah7

PostPosted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 11:35 pm


I like it good job biggrin What you can get out of just gazing about. Isn't it amazing
PostPosted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 8:27 pm


That was very deep. I liked it.

Martha_blue
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Severus Snape of the GD
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 10:10 pm


Thank You everyone! I really appreciate any comments you would like to share. ^o^
PostPosted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 4:15 am


it was goodno offense but i didnt expect that!

Ratchet5
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Valhanta

PostPosted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 8:16 am


not bad....i like it...but i could never wright a poem that good.... sad
PostPosted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 2:27 pm


ya same i really suck

Ratchet5
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