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alfred baramender Captain
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 Posted: Wed Apr 26, 2006 3:37 am
PENDING WRITERS!!!" 1: Reno_123 Info on the Pending Writers If you post an example of your writing work, and I like your style (etc.), I will put your name in the Pending Writers list. This is were I keep track of those who might get one of the writing jobs. Some info on what the Writers will write! The Surreatlists revolves around a fantasy story line were a young moden teenage girl (14) has the power to dream her way into another land (it sounds corny when I write it out). When she first journeys to the land (called Udora, I think you'll be pleased to know, Chaos!! xd ) she meets an "outcasted" demon, Sakiel, and a mermaid, Risen, Sakiels close ( wink ) friend. And etc etc, they meet new friends, like Alfred (hey, that's me!!!! heart ) Melaydor and Selk and many more. If you do become a writer, you will contribute to the storyline by writing out a chapter of it (or a bit less or more). I will make another thread with an overview of the story, anoucements, and what happens in the next chapter. For the next chapter, I will most the main elements of it, and the next writer will write it out (you can take as long as you want, but if it takes TOO long, another writer will be assigned the chapter). The rest of the chapter is up to you!! More info on it will come soon!! heart The title says it all.
Yes, I will actually be posting in here! (And other people too).
Soo... This sub-forum is for the storyline of WRU, called the Surrealists. I'm currently looking for good writers to help me write the story out (you can also contribrute your own things). if you consider yourself a good writer, post in this thread with some samples of what you write (must be wholey orginal). I will choose around.... maybe five people, because though I'm a fairly good writer, I don't have time to write it all. So, post and get the job! You will get a good friend out of me (and the other writers) and perhaps gold and items!!
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Posted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 4:43 am
This is a story that I made up for a Magical Mishap. A role-playing pet that I wanted to win: Story .:Story:. Chrystall walked down the streets of Durem looking for a spellcaster's shop. She was having bad luck and needed a good luck potion. After a half and hour she found one. The sign outside said, "Julian's Spell and Potion Shop." She smiled and went up to the window, peered in and saw nothing but a blue curtain and some sample potions. She walked over to the door and opened it a bit, peeking her head through. There were thousands upon thousands of potions on shelves all around the room. She opened the door just enough to get inside and then she closed it. She crept over to one of the shelves and examined the different potions that were there. She picked up one and by accident, dropped it, making a big crash. Then she heard a door behind her open slowly. She pushed all the broken glass and its contents under the bottom shelf.An old man walked through the door and asked, "Who are you? Do you need a spell or potion created?""My name is Chrystall." she said and gulped then she spoke again, "Yes sir, I do need a spell created for good luck, because lately I have been having none." she repliedThe old man answered, "Okay, I think I can conjour up something for good luck. Come with me."Chrystall followed him wondering where he was taking her. They went into the door and into a room in the back of the shop.The old man said, "Okay. Now we need a few potions. You, Chrystall, will be picking out these potions from the front of the shop. So go along now."Chrystall walked through the door and into the front room. She thought to herself, I wonder if this is even a good idea anymore. I guess it is alright. I can trust this old man to conjour up some good luck spell right? She looked around and found a rabbit's foot. She then took it to the old man in the back room."You have found something, good, good. Now just place it in the cauldron. I will be going through some spellbooks I have" he said to her walking over towards his bookshelf."Okay." She said placing the rabbit's foot into the cauldron turning the liquid in it orange. I hope that is what is supposed to happen. She thought to herself. Then she walked over to the old man's bookshelf helping him look for a good spell."What are you looking for exactly?" he asked her."A good luck spell." she replied"Oh! That's right. That's right." he answered turning a page of the book.While they were going through spellbooks, two young boys were playing with a toy helicopter. "It's my turn to play with it! You have had it for a really long time!" one boy said to the other. "No, I got it for my birthday!" the other boy replied. "I want my turn!" the boy shouted grabbing the remote control away from the other boy. "Give it back!" the other boy shouted back trying to take away the remote control. While they were fighting over the remote control they piloted the toy helicopter accidentially through one of the windows in the shop that was open. They flew it right into the cauldron. The cauldron started to boil and bubble and orange smoke sprouted from it. Chrystall and the old man did not notice it one bit. They just kept looking up the spell needed."Oh! I have found the one spell I have been looking for for years! It is a good luck spell called, "The Luck of Ages." It is a rather nifty spell acually." he said taking it over to the cauldron. "What happend here? It is boiling. Oh well." he said. Then he recited the spell. Over and over he did this. The smoke grew more and more thick and all of a sudden, Boom! The old man quickly ran over to the cauldren and in it was a little bunny, human, girl. "What the heck!" the old man cried."What happend!?!" Chrystall said running over to the cauldron. "Aww. Look at the cute bunny!" she exclaimed."What happend to the spell. It has never done this before. Never! Wha-" he paused. "Wait, this must be one of those things that happens by mistake.""What are you talking about?" Chrystall asked.The old man went over to his desk, grabbed a pencil and paper, and wrote an address down. He then walked over to Chrystall and handed the paper to her. "Here, go to this address and talk to the people inside. Also! Take this baby with you." he said as he walked over to the cauldren and picked up the baby bunny."Uh, okay." she answered. She looked at the paper with the address and took the baby over to the old man's bed. "Do you have anything we could wrap her in?" she asked."Uh, here." the man said holding out a little towel."Thanks." she said wrapping the baby in it. "Thanks for everything!" Chrystall yelled as she walked out of the shop.
She walked down a few streets and stopped examining the baby. She is so cute, and fluffy. she thought to herself looking down at her pretty baby blue eyes. Then she looked back up with a smile on her face, walking through the crowd down the street. She then found the address and looked at the sign, "Magical Mishaps." she looked at the sign and looked back down at the address on the paper. She looked at the door and opened it. She walked in and said, "Hello? Is anyone here?"Another door cracked open and someone answered, "I am. Just a minute.""Okay." she said walking further in."What can I do for you Miss?" a creature said coming out of the door. He was a long necked creature. He looked at her and saw the fear in her eyes. "I'm sorry! I am Jabir, Maggie's assistant. What might this be?" he asked her."Um, th-this is sup-p-posed to be a s-spell. B-but it didn't w-work very well. The sp-spell caster told me to c-come here and s-so I did." she said very stuttery because she was scared."Oh! A spell gone wrong! That is a Mishap you're holding there Miss! Very rare, no need to be scared. I can tell you are. Don't worry I am not going to hurt you or your little friend. Be right back." he said walking into the other room.When he came out it was not him. It was a girl in fact. "You must be the next guardian. I had a feeling someone was going to be coming today. What is your name young girl?""A guardian? What is that? My name is Chrystall. What is a guardian? And who are you?" she asked her."I'm sorry! I am Maggie! And a guardian is a person who takes care of a Mishap." she said with a smile on her face."What is a Mishap?" Chrystall asked her.Have you ever wondered what happens to the creatures created by spells that have gone wrong? Most can easily be reverted but there are a few so complex, so unique that they turn into a permanent living being, the Magical Mishaps as we call them. They're sweet little things, really they are." she told her. "And you my dear, are the next guardian of this little one. What shall her name be?" she asked."Oh." she said in suprise taking in all the information at once. "Her name? Her name is..." Chrystall paused. Then answered with, "Her name shall be Milianna. Thank you so much, Maggie.""Oh! Milianna what a great name." she replied. "And no, thank you Guardian Chrystall."And that is the story of how Milianna came to be.
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alfred baramender Captain
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Posted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 7:16 pm
Nice! Very nice indeed! A cute story, and I like your style. I'll add you to the pending writers. heart
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Posted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 8:56 pm
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 12:02 am
you know i can write leith but i dont have anything right now please put me on teh pending list
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Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 10:42 pm
tildy you know i can write leith but i dont have anything right now please put me on teh pending list Soz Tild, but i will only put you on the pending list if you give me a sample of your work in this thread. It would be unfair for other people to do that, just cuz your my friend. confused
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alfred baramender Captain
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Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 11:13 pm
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 12:59 am
Well, post a sample and I'll see if I like it!
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alfred baramender Captain
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Posted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 11:36 pm
hope you enjoy my story..leith... blaugh
A memory lost for ever lock away never to be seen or touched...A child sufering with no hope of remebering who she is or where she is, As she crys in the corner a vioce yells out her "Veronica..don't cry dearist," said a vioce.Veronica looked up and saw a tall women standing infron of her...
The lady bent down and wipped her tears and took her by the hand. "how did you know my name madem..,"said Veronica. But no answer came out of the ladies mouth only a smile.
as years went by her memeory came to her and she wondered the lands lookinf for her home but as she got closer and closer shhe finally saw wat was her home but now was a dump.
burn't houses bones and swords everywhere...Veronica felt tears in her eyes..."Veronica!!," yelled a vioce. Veronica turned around with tears in her eyes. "my home is gone leim my home is gone...," said veronica as she dropped to the ground and cried. "Veronica..come we must go now," said Leim. as they walked away veronica still had tears in her eyes she turned back to have one more look before it disappeared...A memory flash suddenly came...
she remebered running with tears in her eyes...then she fell to the ground and a bunch of boys came her way..."look there she is quick get her..." yelled the boys Veronica got on her feet and ran for her life but they where gaining her.
She hit behind a huge box, she heard three feet behind her she shut her eyes wishing that they would not find her. "come one lets go she won't be far...." said the boys and they ran off...veronica was relevied "Veronica!!"yelled a vioce "mum!!" said veronica she ran to her mother with her arms open "there you are now come one we have to go and get some fruit..." said veronicas mother..Veronica danced as she walked down the street with her mother. And thats all veronica remebers of her home but all it is now is a pile of dust no longer a memory useful to her...tears still go down her face as she stands alone on the hill wondering if anyone really cares about her....
THE END
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Posted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 11:38 pm
sorry but i felt like telling the stry that i just wrote so hope you enjoyed it
lol blaugh blaugh 3nodding 3nodding
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