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 Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2006 12:41 pm
Hello all, this is the thread where if you have a piece to write, post it here and write weather you want it to be rated or not. Just try and have fun with this thread. All forms of writing are acceptable.
Fanfic
Emotional
lemon (try and keep all these PG-13, language IS allowed just don't go overboard)
ect.
(i don't know if those are forms of writing but you know sweatdrop )
And if any other mods want to discuss this thread with me feel free to PM me.
Idea originally by "crimsontears89"
EDIT: to keep things organised post by chapter. Format it "name of piece: chapter # (in bold)
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Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2006 1:34 pm
this fic i'm about to post up is something i wrote for Emily. I got her premission to do so.
EDIT: It has come to my attention that the fic i was going to put up here is not for gaia eyes to read (aka anybody under 37 years old). So i will write a new piece for gaia eventually.
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Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2006 9:35 pm
This is a monolouge of sorts. I call it..Somethin' Special.
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Who are you to tell me he isn't good enough for me? Who are you to say your boytoy is better? Sure, you have a nice looking guy on your arm. And sure, he buys you nice things. But really, is that why you love him? Probably is. I wouldn't doubt it. But see, my baby is something special. In my eyes, he is a gorgeous soul with flesh and blood. He makes me laugh when the happiness seems to go away. He raises me up to protect me when my world comes crashing down. He wipes away the tears of sorrow and regret so I can cry of joy and pleasure. He loves me for me. That's what I need these days. He might not be as smart, as sexy, as muscular as some of the meat bags you screw around with but you know what? He is everything I could have ever asked for. He is sweet but not smothering. He is intellectual but not cocky. He is sensitive but not a p***y. He is masculine but does he abuse me like yours does? no. Never would he dare lay a hand on me. Never would he purposely speak words of thorns to me. He loves me more than that. Though he may hurt me sometimes, he does it because he cares. He has watched me for so long go through heartbreaks and even suicide attempts. Finally, he has had enough and took me by my hand and asked me to be his. While you and the others told me he isn't my type, I knew you were all wrong. I could feel the connection between us grow stronger. The day he asked me to be his princess was the day my heart came out of its coma. But you know, even if we don't make it to the altar as I hope we might...I can't ever forget these wonderful moments he's given me. Who knew years of abuse and torment could be erased with just one, honest kiss? Apparently you didn't. So you go on, lying to yourself that he loves you. At least I don't have to lie anymore. Last chance, girl. Do what you know should be done. Drop the meathead and find a real man. You deserve someone special, like my man. My baby...he's somethin' special.
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Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2006 11:02 pm
crying My god!!! That was so great. It reminds me exactly how my g/f feels about me. Me and her have been together for a year and 2 months but we can kinda sense these feelings inside of each other.
Bravo with that piece 10 out of freaken 10 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2006 11:16 pm
heres a small piece that i'm tinkering with and trying to make into a full blown story. Its a fight scene between 2 of the characters. Tell me how you like it reader: Morisume and Holtsuma continued clashing swords till the ancient temple started to collapse. They both wanted to finish each other off but knew at the current moment it was logical to escape and put their right on hold. They each dashed in seperate directions, Holtsuma jumping from wall to wall in an attempt to get out of the temple, while Morisume was jumping from rubble to rubble as it was falling down to escape. As they both arrived at the top of the temple while it was imploding, it was at this point they both realized their destinies were inescapeable. "This battle ends here" proclamied holtsuma. "I couldn't agree more" replied Morisume. As both warriors went into the respective sword stances the building roof was beginning to crumble beneath their feet. ZING...with nothing but the sound of a singlesword clash and the blinding effect the sunlight reflected into the eyes of all people around, the winner was decided...
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Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2006 11:52 pm
That was really good, Elecy. But then it doesn't surprise me, as all of your stuff that I've read has been awesome.
Yours was good, too, CO. I had a clear picture in my head of what was happening as I read.
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Posted: Fri Apr 14, 2006 1:43 am
Twonk That was really good, Elecy. But then it doesn't surprise me, as all of your stuff that I've read has been awesome. Yours was good, too, CO. I had a clear picture in my head of what was happening as I read. Thanks, (i kinda lied in the beginning, i wasn't really working on a story i just made that up as I went and then proofread it)
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Posted: Fri Apr 14, 2006 6:59 am
Thank ya, CO. Heh. I am sure any girl who is truely in love feels like that. And thank ya kindly, Twonkins. I try hard to write good things.
And even though I dun really like fight scenes, I liked that alot, CO.
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Posted: Fri Apr 14, 2006 12:36 pm
Props go to Eagle and Elecy for awesome writings. Elecy, your submission was very true. 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Apr 14, 2006 6:11 pm
Stupid Girl
"It's not you, it's me", "I'm sorry it had to end this way" or "Let's just be friends"...so many gentle ways to break a heart yet you felt no incentive to be kind and let me down softly. You didn't even consider breaking up with me, did you? Thought you'd play two roles, didn't you? One actor, two roles. Sweetie, you ain't no Brad Pitt or Tom Cruise. You go back and forth between me and her. You are such a compulsive liar. You said that I was you first. Psh. Like a frame in a movie, I'm just one of many other sluts you play around with. To think, I almost believed you when you said you loved me. Let's face it...I ain't cut out to be your girl. Can't make a whore into a wife, right? That's what I heard you say to one of your boys. Apparently, a girl who cherishes her virginity is a whore to you. So what, that makes her an angel since she is always ready to ********. Look, I can't help it if I have standards. You don't understand how much I want to give you my purity. But I can't. Not until that ring is on my finger. But guess you can't wait that long, can you? Hmpf...stupid me...stupid stupid stupid girl I am...stupid for loving you. Stupid for loving. Stupid..for living.
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Posted: Fri Apr 14, 2006 9:04 pm
I read your work CO, I liked it. Ofcourse you had to add in the whole sword clash scene lmao always have to have the samurais do tht final slash that blinds everyone ^.^
Elecy, as alwasy your work is well written, perfect qaulity story telling. But as I always feel, you have other intent. Your work is trying to speak to me, I can feel it. ninja ~
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Posted: Fri Apr 14, 2006 9:18 pm
Elecy great piece. To me its not the girl thats stupid its the guy. Thats all I can really think of to say at the moment.
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Posted: Fri Apr 14, 2006 10:48 pm
3nodding I would post my stories here, but they're way too long gonk ~
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