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Posted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 12:33 pm

If you would like to comment on my poetry, please use a different color.

If you would like to have your own "Sier-chan Original," see my store in the "Generosity, Inc." Subforum.

If you would like to take one of these poems, I ask you to please pay me 10g and give me props for writing it.

Feel free to comment and critique!

Posted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 12:39 pm

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I can't sleep
I toss and turn
I sob and weep
The flames--they burn
I'm engulfed in heartache
It grips me in its icy fingers
Pouring salt in my deep, jagged wounds
Fire licks at my heart, making me grit my teeth
-Boiling outside, shivering inside
Lost in a stormy sea-A sea of confusion
-Hatred, heartache, horror
A wrenching, stinging pain that just won't...
Go away

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Posted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 12:45 pm

Lost

The stars are winking down at me
The night sky glitters beautifully
There is no reason to be sad
But as I look upon this land
Farther than I can stretch my hand
I sigh

To me the stars sob painfully
The night sky glitters with their tears
I stare at this depressing sight
And hear a voice off to my right
"Don't cry"

The wind's soft hand caresses my back
Attention to notice I seem to lack
I heave a sob and whisper back
"But why?"

As I cry, filled with sorrow
I dread the coming of tomorrow
I wander about the faceless earth
Nothing to find, Nothing to search
And finally, I close my eyes...

Posted: Fri Mar 31, 2006 11:23 am

Certain

I am certain it will happen
It is certain, I will die
May my spirit be immortal, not within me where I lie
I know I'm not immortal
Like Lord thy God himself
But please don't leave my memory
Forgotten on a shelf
Yes I will be gone
But my soul will run free
Yes it is certain-
Certain...to be

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Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 3:27 pm

Weeping Willow

Weeping Willow, why do you cry?
What makes you feel so sad inside?
Is it because she went away?
Is it because she did not stay?

What is it that makes your branches sag low?
Is it because she didn't home home?
I miss her so much-she shouldn't have gone
You want her back-so does everyone

Weeping willow, is that why you cry?
Is that what is making you sad inside?
Now that I know, we can comfort each other
Where she is now, we don't have to wonder

We know that she's gone and we miss her so much
But we'll see her again, I have a hunch
She's right here
She's very near

And she'll never leave us alone
So, no, she's not really gone
Our love will keep her alive
That, weeping Willow, should make you happy inside

Written in loving memory of Caitlin Kelly Fuchs, 1989-2005. R.I.P. Caitlin; I miss you so much.

Posted: Thu Apr 13, 2006 2:34 am

Siermana

Certain

I am certain it will happen
It is certain, I will die
May my spirit be immortal, not within me where I lie
I know I'm not immortal
Like Lord thy God himself
But please don't leave my memory
Forgotten on a shelf
Yes I will be gone
But my soul will run free
Yes it is certain-
Certain...to be

It is our actions that carry us into the future. We are immortal in the things we do. In lives we cross. In the things we say. In the moment that became.

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Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2006 9:06 pm

dramaartwriting

Siermana

Certain

I am certain it will happen
It is certain, I will die
May my spirit be immortal, not within me where I lie
I know I'm not immortal
Like Lord thy God himself
But please don't leave my memory
Forgotten on a shelf
Yes I will be gone
But my soul will run free
Yes it is certain-
Certain...to be

It is our actions that carry us into the future. We are immortal in the things we do. In lives we cross. In the things we say. In the moment that became.

I like that. 3nodding

Posted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 10:54 am

dramaartwriting

Siermana

Certain

I am certain it will happen
It is certain, I will die
May my spirit be immortal, not within me where I lie
I know I'm not immortal
Like Lord thy God himself
But please don't leave my memory
Forgotten on a shelf
Yes I will be gone
But my soul will run free
Yes it is certain-
Certain...to be

It is our actions that carry us into the future. We are immortal in the things we do. In lives we cross. In the things we say. In the moment that became.

I beg to differ but do not mean to offend. Our actions will remain for years after we fall but will be forgoten once those who carry our memorys die.

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Posted: Sun Apr 23, 2006 9:47 pm

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dramaartwriting

Siermana

Certain

I am certain it will happen
It is certain, I will die
May my spirit be immortal, not within me where I lie
I know I'm not immortal
Like Lord thy God himself
But please don't leave my memory
Forgotten on a shelf
Yes I will be gone
But my soul will run free
Yes it is certain-
Certain...to be

It is our actions that carry us into the future. We are immortal in the things we do. In lives we cross. In the things we say. In the moment that became.

I beg to differ but do not mean to offend. Our actions will remain for years after we fall but will be forgoten once those who carry our memorys die.

Please do as I said and use a different color. I am weird like that, I know.
Also, if those who carried our memories die, who is to say that the do not pass them on? We shall still be forever if it is done. I mean not to offend, and I respect what you said, but, if you think about it, our memories may survive yet!

Posted: Sun Apr 23, 2006 9:52 pm

Dance for Me

Dance for me
Throw away your inhibitions
Only I am watching
Only I will see

Dance for me
Show me your true self
Let me see who you really are
Throw away the mask you wear

Dance for me
I want to see you
Withour your cloak, without your mask
Without your inhibitions

So dance for me
Go wild, go crazy
Release yourself to yourself
Let me see who you really are
And dance for me

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Posted: Mon Apr 24, 2006 12:01 am

Great thoughts and good poems.

Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 5:11 pm

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Great thoughts and good poems.

I thank you. heart

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Posted: Sat May 20, 2006 7:51 pm

You

I think of you-I dream of you
I speak of you-I laugh at you
I've heard of you-I've noticed you
I am fond of you-Afraid of you
I have even been ashamed of you

I've thought of what I've done to you
I'm sorry for what I've done to you
I don't speak of what I did to you
I can't laugh at what I did to you

I've hurt you so-I've made you cry
I hated you-I don't know why
I need forgiveness-I need you now
Is there a way, please, somehow?

This was written for my friend Kyle. Kyle, I know we have been through hard times, and I know that we have shared harsh words, but you can never know how much I miss you, how much our friendship really means to me. I'm sorry.

Posted: Sat May 20, 2006 7:58 pm

Mixture

I don't know if it's true
But I believe I have feelings for you
I see you and my heart pounds
I hear you and my heart stops
You reside within my dreams
Around you, I'm centrally themed
I don't know what is wrong with me
It has never happened to me before
You say my name and my heart soars
I don't know...

Maybe it's just a childish crush
I'm known to have those a little too much
I may just "kind of" like you
Just physical attraction maybe?
I honestly don't know
I want to explore the feelings
This astounding intuition
I want to know...

How I really feel...

About you.

I wrote this a month ago, about Cole. Two weeks ago, Cole and I started going out, and it's incredible. He is the best thing to ever happen to me. heart

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