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StarshineAngel01

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 07, 2021 7:46 pm


Name: Aurora
Gender: Female
Affinity: Nature
Appearance:
xxxHair: Long
xxxHairstyle: Straight with a small section braided
xxxAccesories: A angel wing with a blue bow hanging.
xxxEye Color: One blue; One Green
xxxSkin: Tanned
xxxSuit: Colors listed below

    xxx Light pink:: #fbc1e4
    xxx Light blue:: #c0e3d4
    xxx White::#FFFFFF

Refs: n/a
Personality:
Dependable: She is a very Dependable young girl, she will always be there when needed and knows when someone needs to comforted. If you ask her to do something she will make sure she does it and does it well. She will always be there when someone needs to talk about things. She is a very attentive listener. If you give her a task, she will make sure its done and will not stop until its completed.

Loyal: She is ultimately loyal to those she cares about and her friends. She will never let someone down or abandon them no matter what. Tread carefully, she is one who will worry about someone taking advantage of her loyalty and will not be open to someone who questions her loyalty to her friends. Once she finds someone she cares deeply about she will give unconditional love and be always there for them.

Gentle: She is loves caring for those around and strangers and will be exceptionally gentle when it comes to animals of nature. If she sees an injure animal she will try her best to nurse it back to health. This shows some of her motherly qualities but will develop more once she experiences the life of motherhood when she has her own children in the future.

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Keeps to herself: She is also the type to keep to herself and keeps her opinions to herself. She has a bad habit on internalizing her feelings and taking critiques about her character personally. She does not express herself very well and she does not like feeling vulnerable. She will need to be 100% comfortable with you before she pours her soul or life story to you.

Does not like confrontation: She does no like any sort of violence or confrontation with anyone. She gets anxious if she has to deal with a confrontation and if it goes on too long she will get a panic attack. She will get flustered and she will get clammy hands and will have trouble regulating her breathing. She will try to deal with a situation using diplomacy first, if that doesn't work she will be open to confronting but will be hesitant about it. She only uses confronation when absolutely necessary.

Easily Frustrated: She is the type who will get frustrated with a task she is doing really quickly. If the process of it is not going the way she wants it to or in her favor she will get frustrated and will give up on it easily. One instance where she would get easily frustrated is when the person she is talking to cannot make a decision. She does not have the patience to wait for them to make a decision and will walk away from the situation.

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Likes:

  • Writing
  • Animals
  • Plants (veggie and floral alike)

Dislikes:

  • Rude people
  • Those who think they are better then her
  • Storms


.:Future Goals:.
Hydroponics Gardener: I want her to become a professional hydroponics gardner so she can grow the food needed for those who live in the ship and those who want to build a settlement outside the dome. For this though she will need to do tons and tons of research to learn it. Through this she wants to contribute something to the ship's food storages to make sure that the ship doesn't run out of food for everyone who uses the ship as their home.
PostPosted: Mon Jun 07, 2021 8:14 pm


Open for Critiques!!
Please don't be too harsh

StarshineAngel01

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 06, 2021 4:04 pm


Hi! Thanks for making a quest, and updating it so promptly after we updated the info. Stellar work!

I've got a few questions first of all, regarding the suit. At present, every genome is drawn with a body suit. I'm not sure if you... wanted a school girl uniform, which they would not be drawn in, or if you were just using that for color references. As for the accessory, it's unlikely that, at present, they'd have something like that. Would you be open to the wing being a feather or 2, possibly tied with a ribbon?

For the personality, you have some good positive traits, but does she have any flaws? For a quest, only listing good things seems very "safe" but doesn't give much in the terms of how the character grows. Could you add some negative aspects to her? Right now, on paper, she sounds a lot like your existing character, Luna. Being soft, gentle, demure, and so forth.

The Hydroponic gardening is an awesome goal! We absolutely need farmers and agriculturalists, but I'm not sure that romance is really a goal. Can you push the goal a little farther? Is she an idealistic romantic? Does she pursue love and romance relentlessly? This could tie back into what I was saying with the flaws. A hyper fixation on idealized romance would be an interesting trait.

I hope you'll take these things into consideration. We look forward to what you'll do!
PostPosted: Fri Aug 06, 2021 7:38 pm


There made some changes

Also, yes I am open to it being feathers tied with a ribbon; and the ref is just for color references

StarshineAngel01

Interstellar Moonwalker

15,915 Points
  • Stellar Lieutenant 200
  • Blazing Power of Friendship Wave 200
  • Spirit of the Smackdown! 100
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