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[Q] Gomorrah of Saturn

Nuxaz

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Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2017 5:31 pm

This is an upgrade for already approved and in play Noah Jones

Knight Title: Gomorrah, Page of Saturn

Challenge: Death is but the truth of living.

Uniform: Will be discussing with the artist.

Weapon & Magic

Page Weapon: Bow Staff

Squire: Staff with a Ram Skull

When Gomorrah strikes someone with the horns of the ram his target feels as if they are dying and the affected area is decaying.

Magic Pool: 30 seconds

Knight Weapon: Modified version of this staff

When Gomorrah strikes someone with the horns of the ram his target feels as if they are dying and the affected area has been decaying with intense pain that spreads through the limb.

Magic Pool: 50 seconds

Summons To be decided at a later time

Posted: Tue Jul 25, 2017 7:02 pm

Hi Nuxaz! First off Congrats on Gomorrah!

Before I can give him a stamp there's a couple of minor things that I need addressed, and a question/clarification I just want to make sure we're good on.

For both of his attacks would you mind tweaking the wording just a little for me to the following "target feels as if the affected area has died and begun to decay" This way it can fit into Saturn's theme's but still allows you the decay effect you wanted as well!

Also I have something I wanted to just double check with you on. Is the fact that he has to strike them for his magic to work means of intentional rp flavor? I'm wanting to double check and ask on this because I want to make sure that players are aware that knights don't have to touch their targets to channel their magic; they absolutely can but I just like to make sure everyone knows that touching their opponent directly in order to channel is optional for knights.

Nuxaz

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Nuxaz

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Posted: Tue Jul 25, 2017 7:27 pm

Adjusted the wording to include that they feel like they're dying and the area is decaying. I do know that touch is not required, the striking is for the area that will be effected by the magic.

Posted: Tue Jul 25, 2017 8:32 pm

Nuxaz

Thank you for your patience Nuxaz, and for working with me! Gomorrah looks good to me so a gm'll be around shortly!

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