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Vellvett

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 05, 2015 8:08 pm


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I would like to know how I can improve...
Im new to making dresses like these...
I spent he whole summer making bikini kitty pics LOL....

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 05, 2015 9:36 pm




      Oh super cute drawing!!
      The dress looks beautifully drawn and you seem to have a good understanding of how dresses are suppose to work!
      I would recommend to have the forehead down a bit more, and the neck to be slightly longer, because the picture looks like it has a rather lot of motion in it! Slightly extending the neck and the direction of the head is mainly it!
      Lovely picture hun! I followed you on Da and I can't wait to see more drawings from you!

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 05, 2015 9:51 pm


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      Oh super cute drawing!!
      The dress looks beautifully drawn and you seem to have a good understanding of how dresses are suppose to work!
      I would recommend to have the forehead down a bit more, and the neck to be slightly longer, because the picture looks like it has a rather lot of motion in it! Slightly extending the neck and the direction of the head is mainly it!
      Lovely picture hun! I followed you on Da and I can't wait to see more drawings from you!


Oh Thank you!
The dress is actually from the Le carousel item but I think I made it a look different by making it flowy to give it a lot of bounce and spin since its a carousel item (like those carousels that go round and round @.@)
A couple of things to ask

1) When you mention the forehead going downward do you mean by lowering the eyes down?

2) Where should the neck extend? Do you mea by making it longer? (since the hair is long enough to cover the whole thing.)
PostPosted: Mon Oct 05, 2015 10:12 pm


Mayviline



      oooh Carousel items are nice ;u;
      Lowering more of the angle of the face, so eyes, nose, mouth. But it also depends on the direction you were going! so it can be different throughout the times!
      and here is the image that was given, (outlined by my blue but over your drawing)
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      and here is an idea of what it should look like,
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oheyitsraee

Lonely Gaian

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