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PostPosted: Fri May 29, 2015 3:35 pm


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xxxxName : Sutekina Bara
xxxxGender : Female
xxxxHeight : 5'9
xxxxWeight : 124 lb
xxxxReiatsu Color : Palatine Blue
xxxxReiatsu level : High
xxxxAppearance : When she is standing still her hair reaches the entire length of her back, she does change the style when going on a mission but prefers to let it flow freely when not in battle. In addition she usually sports a pair of high heeled black boots with golden zippers on the back that have decorative pattern of daggers for handles. Final note, she wears an eye patch due to her being reborn with Heterochromia or 'odd-eye' which means that while her left eye was a bright green, her right was a slate grey coloration. The grey eye can be easily aggravated by bright lights and colors so she wears an eye patch to both protect it and to keep herself from having to see the mismatching colors.
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xxxxPersonality : Sutekina is usually the type of person that isn't afraid to speak her mind. She isn't afraid of making others angry or getting in the way, as well as being a stubborn woman who has an unwavering conviction and an iron will. She doesn't shy away from a battle but that does not make her reckless, she does think things through and does her best to keep herself from starting things she cannot finish. Whenever she starts a task she will see it through to the end, it is her nature as both perfectionist and a woman of her word. Sutekina has a deep love for the natural beauty in this world and as much as she enjoys the natural imperfections in nature, if she can control it, she will make sure things turn out as she feels they should. Meaning if it is in her power, she will have a situation/object/creation conform to her idea of perfection. Because of this nature she can come off as a bit more aggressive than she means too, she tries to look out for others before herself in most situations. However, her way of showing love can come off as more so criticizing and scolding when she only means to help. Though she attempts to express her feelings directly, she can be too blunt and can very easily be misunderstood. Sutekina has her share of character flaws which include, being honest to a fault, not knowing when to be subtle, and having a hard time relaxing. She has a habit of working herself too the point of exhaustion and sickness. She can also be incredibly hard on herself, always feeling like she needs to be better, do better, become stronger, this plays into why she can be hard on others and tries to push those around her to do their best. However, she can ignore her own limits when she gets too focused on trying to complete a task at hand. Whether it be paperwork that she will ignore sleep to complete, or a battle that she should back out of but won't because it is her mission to be victorious.
xxxxBiography : Sutekina was born to a noble family during Japan's early Edo period, her original family name was Fujiwara. Her father was a Shogun and she was the only daughter having three other elder brothers. She was born on an early spring afternoon and her skin was pale and lovely, driving her father to name her Sutekina (the literal meaning is 'lovely'). While she grew up, she wanted for nothing, being the picture of a perfect lady. The only thing that was out of the ordinary about her was her ability to see shadows and people that had passed. One such spirit was her grandmother who died before she was born but still appeared to help guide her granddaughter though life. When she told her mother, she was reassured that it was a good sign and only those who were pure of heart and soul were able to see and speak to the dead. Despite this reassurance, her mother Yume, insisted that she keep her ability hidden from her father. By being quiet and doing as she was told she gained the love and admiration of her parents despite both being female and the youngest. Sutekina was able to live a lavish life style but that did not mean she was spoiled. Even though she had servants she had to do things for herself seeing as the servants were for her father and brothers. Over the years, she adjusted to a life of serving men but still held on to her independent spirit to take care of herself just as easily. She was taught to dance, entertain, and groomed to be a good wife. Her future had been planned out for her. At twenty she was married to one of the samurai under her father's control, the perfect role for a woman with was both capable of caring for herself but was still attentive to others. However, her future was not one that would be seen. During the shift in the political climates happening all over Japan, the village under her father's domain were being taxed far too much. This lead to the farmers' up rise against their Shogun. Sutekina had been left alone while her husband went to battle in order to protected her father. She was slaughtered by an angry villager who broke into the house, she was beaten before the villager took out her right eye and slit her throat. She was the only casualty, as her husband returned from the battle to their home in ashes with hardly any of the young bride's remains left. She was buried only a few weeks after she had been married.

Rebirth
Sutekina awoke in the Soul Society, though her memory was fractured due to the trauma of her death, she remembered her first name, and the principals instilled within herself by her birth family. However, when she was reborn one of her eyes was a different color, whenever she looked into a mirror and saw her right eye as a dismal grey she couldn't help but feel somewhat ashamed of it. It was like it didn't belong there at all, that feeling was forgotten when she decided to dawn an eye patch. For a few months she only went by her first name, despite being taken in by and elderly woman who owned a small flower shop. She finally took a new sir name after seeing roses in bloom for the first time since being reborn. Even though she did not remember she was of noble birth in life, she carried herself as if she were one and felt like she belonged on a higher realm of society than just working in a flower nursery. Sutekina soon realized that she had strong enough reishi to get into the shinigami academy and began her training to be an official Shinigami. During her time to become a shinigami she did her best to strengthen herself in all ways, despite having great reishi, and potential, she hadn't had any formal training to be a fighter. Still, she trained for countless hours in order to make herself stronger in body and mind. Over time, she grew to become one of the best in her class, even though she avoided any kido that involved fire. For some reason being too close to a flame for too long gave her an irritating headache. Sutekina proved that she had the iron will and the unwavering heart that qualified her to join squad two and she has spent her time training to become even stronger and more refined in her skill to prove her worthiness. Sutekina is content with her position as an officer for the most part, but there is still a part of her that wants to be a bit more than that. In her spare time she likes to try and catch up on things going on in the world of the living, she takes some time off to find new tips on gardening and buys puzzles to keep herself busy between missions.


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xxxxReiatsu Shape : A large rose that is in bloom all around her, almost like it will fold her back into itself.
xxxxLikes :
xxxx • Puzzles
xxxx • Gardening
xxxx • Traditional Japanese Dancing
xxxxDislikes :
xxxx • Bright Colors (they irritate her right eye)
xxxx • Fire
xxxx • Her Own Mismatched Eyes
xxxxRelationships :
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xxxxRank : Second Officer
xxxxSquad : 2
xxxxSquad ability : Cloak Of Shadows


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xxxxZanpakuto Name : Kanpeki
xxxxInner World Appearance : Kanpeki's world is a relaxed world with a distant view of the mountains in a not too far distance. The ground is water but Kanpeki is able to walk along it making elegant ripples through the tranquil space that is bathed in an eternal twilight.
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xxxxSpirit Appearance : Kanpeki sports long brown hair that lands in several varying layers. Her eyes shift from being brown towards the top of the iris and fading to a bright yellow towards the bottom of the iris. She holds a blue umbrella and she is usually barefoot, her feet being seen at the bottom of her red kimono that has a small train with the sleeves reaching down to her feet as well.
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xxxxSealed Appearance : A nodachi blade with a purple hilt and sheath. It might be a bit flashy in it's dormant state but Sutekina enjoys it's beauty.

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xxxxRelease Type : Stand-Alone
xxxxRelease Phrase : Kossetsu Kanpeki(Literal Translation : Fracture Perfection)
xxxxAppearance : The blade shifts to the form of a glaive, the base is a deep royal blue color and the blade shines almost like silver. When it's ability is used, the blade itself will glow a pale blue color and a small rose appears in the open space between the blades.
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xxxxInstant Effect : The blade emits a bright silver light to temporarily blind an enemy.
xxxxPassive Ability : Lonely World: creates a an invisible sphere around herself, about ten feet in all directions. This becomes the range that she is able to use the other abilities and the space where her other powers will be the most effective. In addition, the Lonely World will move about with Sutekina as she moves around a battle space and will remain constant as long as Kanpeki is in her shikai state.
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xxxxWave of Solidarity: This ability manifests in the form of a stream of deep blue rose petals, emitted from the blade of the glaive as it glows a faint blue color. These petals are distributed with about 60 petals per square foot at a maximum of 300 petals per use. Any organic material a petal lands on will begin to turn to stone. The range of the petal is about twice it's size (about 0.7 inch for each petal) and the material affected will remain affected as long as the person/animal is within the Lonely World. When those affected leave the Lonely World the stone will begin to fade taking about two posts for it to fully vanish. The petals are concentrated in whatever direction Sutekina slashes her blade and they can extend to the limits of her Lonely World and no farther. The petals can be burned in fire, the goal of this ability is to encase something in stone, be it a limb or a whole person, once it is over-taken with Sutekina's stone she is able to slice it off with her blade. (Initial cool down would be three posts)
xxxxPiercing Bloom: This technique is similar to the Wave of Solidarity but much weaker. In this version instead of rose petals being formed, there would be stone thorns of the same size (0.7 inches) with sharp tips. These thorns would be centered in a concentrated stream from the glavie, only having a 6 inch diameter in range and they will break once they hit the extent of the Lonely World. This stream will move with the direction of where the glavie is pointing and the are distributed at about two per inch. These thorns only are meant to cut skin with about the same force as throwing a knife. (cool down, two posts)
xxxxReturn to Innocence: Due to the petals used in Wave of Solidarity being made up of Sutekina's own reishi, it is vital she not waste a single petal. This ability is centered through the rose at the end of her hair piece (as shown in her image) this rose opens up and the petals that have not been used will return to Sutekina and will meld back into her own power to be reused upon her next attack. (Cannot be used in the same post as Wave of Solidarity but can be used immediately after)
xxxx Penance of Peace: This ability is centered at the rose that appears when this ability is activated. It is a white as opposed to the blue that everything else unifies to, and it blooms. When this ability is activated the rose blooms and releases a powerful stream of white rose petals, only 30 per square foot and the stream is about 3 feet in diameter, having a maximum of 600 petals per use. These petals are the only ability that can go beyond the Lonely World and cannot be returned with the Return to Innocence ability. The stream can go about five feet beyond the Lonely World before they will fade away, anything caught in this stream, be it a piece of clothing, to an arm, will turn to stone and the stone will begin to spread rapidly to grow ten times the size of the initial hit. Stray objects caught within the range of Penance of Peace will then shift to be under Sutekina's control. To be either crushed or to be used as a projectile. This is Sutekina's 'Ace in the Hole' ability and she does her best to never have to use it as it takes a great amount of strength from herself. (Initial cool down would be five posts)


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1. Shō (衝, Thrust)
As the practitioner points at their target with his/her index finger, a small amount of energy is dispelled from the tip of the index fighter with enough force to thrust a considerable amount of kinetic force at a target, which is pushed back a few feet from the practitioner

2. Panpan (ぱんぱん,Slap)
The practitioner moves their hand in a slapping motion. Their reiatsu hardensthe air hitting the target in the direction the hand moved. The amount of damage done depends on how hard a person moves their hand. If it's light, then it will feel more like a tap, if they swing it hard, then it can leave a red hand print on the selected target. The hardened reiatsu can only go out about 10 feet in front of the practitioner.

4. Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning)
The practitioner gathers high-density spiritual energy, which they discharge from both hands which can be used to shock a target. The power is dependant on the reiatsu of the practitioner. It ranges from slight (Average) to piercing with it the piercing power of a standard sword.

7. Howaitorikiddo (ホワイトリキッド, White Liquid)
A white hot liquid that comes from the tip of the finger. At first it is a straight liquid, but after a minute, it becomes semi clear and sticky. It tastes salty and smells musky. Upon contact it burns the flesh the way the melted glue of a hot glue gun would, and immediately becomes very sticky and gooey - should you try to wipe it off, it will make your hand or whatever you used to wipe it, stick to the surface of it. The only material that seems to get rid of this substance without consequence is a Kleenex tissue, or warm water.

11. Tsuzuri Raiden (綴雷電, Bound Lightning)
Electric current flows through any object the practitioner touches that is able to conduct electricity, damaging any target that is in contact with the object the current runs through. After two posts of continuous skin to skin contact this causes repeated shocks like a taser would and can incapacitate an opponent should the contact not be broken. This spell’s effects last for three self posts and can be cancelled at any time.

12. Fushibi (伏火, Ambush Flare)
A Kidō net fired from the hand that can entangle the practitioner’s opponents resulting in a small explosion around them. These explosions are like small firecrackers going off within the next, and only lasts for a single post but can do a lot of damage. Once it touches an object, it sticks to them. However, the projectile net is slow, and therefore easily dodged and it must contact the intended target in order to engage the explosions.

16. Reinbōkyanon (レインボーキャノン Rainbow Cannon)
The practitioner shoots a beam of rainbow colored light from their hand, to strike at the foe. The spell produces heat, as these are light waves, as such, upon contact, the victim can suffer 2nd to 3rd degree burns. This shoots in a straight line, goes for one post, and passes through several enemies. Its reach extends to a fifty feet in front of the practitioner.

23. Akarui Furea (明るいフレア Bright Flare)
Some regard this hado as more of a utility spell because its main use is to create a large bright light that the practitioner themselves do not see. For an opponent in close range, it makes the caster’s body suddenly glow a very bright yellow to the enemy, causing their eyes to burn and become blinded to the practitioner for one post - it also generates a heat that flows outwards and can cause minor burns and discomfort to an enemy should they be holding onto the caster. This spell does not effect allies, as it is enemy target specific.

25. Saidan ( 祭壇, Altar)
User must chant: “Mother earth, lend me your power, and let me bring blood to your altar. Hado, number 25, Saidan!” The practitioner then presses their hands to the ground as they chant this spell. Stone javelins shoot forth from the ground, surrounding the opponent. They all come down on the person, stabbing them. It starts out with four javelins increasing by two javelins per rank increase of the caster. Each javelin appears ten feet from the target, they are all about one yard in length and four inches in thickness.

27. Howaitobīmu ( ホワイトビーム, White Beam)
A beam of white energy comes out of one of the practitioner’s fingers, piercing the enemy and attaching them to whatever is behind. If there is no object within 10 feet of the point origin (aka where you finger is), then the spell fails. Imagine this as a projectile nail. This nail cannot pierce bone however so your aim must be precise.

30. Denji wa (でんじは Electromagnetic Wave)
The caster creates a wide wave of electromagnetic energy that surges towards the target. This spell causes sporadic system shocks over the course of 5 posts. These system shocks can range from something major, like 1 full post of paralysis in the arms or legs to something minor like a charlie horse in the thigh when your trying to move.

35. Middonaitoraikou (ミッドナイトライトニング, Midnight Lightning)
The practitioner will focus their energy into the palm of their hand, and fire a concentrated bolt of black lightning from the their index finger. This spell not only electrifies its target, it generates a black fog that once picked up by any person on the field (or the person the lightning struck), it clings to them and makes their way to their face and clings to their eyes for three posts. This does not completely blind the victim, but rather ‘hinders; their eyesight. This causes their vision to be blurry, shapes, details and colours to blur together.

37. Sandābāningu (サンダーバーニング Burning Thunder)
A blast of crimson red reiatsu is fired off at high speeds the equivalant to Shunpo. In addition this spell can cause 2nd degree burns to any unprotected skin.

42. Sutikkī shuryūdan (スティッキー手榴弾 Sticky grenade)
A green orb that fits in the palm of your hand. It is thrown, and lands, it sticks to the surface. It is impossible to use force to remove it. They won't find this. The only way to unstick it is to release a tiring amount of reiatsu. The amount of time that it takes to explode is determined by the user, however, it can not explode on the same post that it is summoned, and the longest that it can be out after being summoned is 5 posts.


47. Ryū no kiba (龍の牙 Fang of the Dragon)
This is a channeled spell that forms a bladed shaped reiatsu, almost like a fang, over the casters hands. These fangs specialize in cutting reiatsu, and they are used mostly to counter other Kido Spells lower in rank than itself, and some reiatsu based zanpakuto attacks energy/magic attacks no higher than shikai. These fangs last for 5 posts and can also be used offensively for slashing or even piercing attacks. This spell can be cancelled any time. The Kido cool down does not begin until the spell has been deactivated one way or another.

1. Sai (塞, Block)
The practitioner points his/her index and middle fingers at the intended target(s), causing the target's arms to lock behind their back. The spell is usable on a single target or a significantly large group of people

4. Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope)
Binds enemies with a Reishi rope to stop their movement. Generating a crackling yellow energy rope within his/her hand(s), the practitioner throws it toward the opponent. The energy winds around the opponent's arms and body, immobilizing them

8. Geki (撃, Strike)
As the practitioner draws the symbols of the spell in the air, his/her entire body permeates a red energy, which engulfs the body of the target, causing complete paralysis for one post.

11. Bōra (ボーラ, Bolas)
Three small balls of light form in front of the casters hand, and they are connected each by a thread of reiatsu. These are meant to trip a fleeing opponent. Its max range is 10 feet in distance before fading from existence. If this the end balls of the energy bola wrap around the person's feet three times - binding them for an entire post. Because it’s made of Reiatsu, it cannot be unwound by hands, however infusing a zanpakuto with reiatsu may potentially cut it.

13. Sonikku Shindō (ソニック振動, Sonic Vibration)
By aiming the palm of the hand towards an enemy, the practitioner can create a soundless noise at 127 decibels. This white noise will cause a ringing in an opponents ears and cause a sudden headache. This is a single target spell, only the person this spell is directly aimed at will experience the painful effects of this silent noise.

20. Fukkushotto (フックショット, Hook Shot)
A rope shoots out of the caster’s palm, and attaches itself to whatever it was thrown at, provided it can either hook or wind around the object. Then the caster can use this rope to pull themselves up.

21. Bikan (美観, Beautiful Sight)
A flexible spell, designed to sharpen the vision of the caster, by enabling the recipient to "see" speed. Bikan increases the ability to process images moving at a rapid pace. In essence, this makes fast moving objects or people appear to be moving slower than they are, only to the caster. This also does not change reaction time, meaning the objects are not actually moving slower. This spell lasts for 10 of the Caster’s posts.

23. Dokueki-yō Konomi (毒液用好み, Venom Taste)
This spell allows the practitioner to detect poison in food. It is cast by a flick of the tongue with no outward signs, and no incantation needed.

26. Kyokkō (曲光, Bent Light)
Hides the target from sight, by bending light. The spell has the ability to totally hide the presence and reiatsu of the practitioner or specified object. This however does not stop the signs of smell, sounds, nor hide steps in the grass.

28. Fantomu (ファントム, Phantom)
The practitioner creates a phantom of themselves which can only stand in place.. This phantom generates on top of the original position and pose in which the caster was standing leaving the caster to be able to move stealthily or obviously from that pose. Mostly used to appear that you took an attack, while you escape. This is intangible and enemies will fall through it like a ghost. Will disappear after two posts. Can only use this once per battle.

37. Tsuriboshi (吊星, Hanging Star)
Creates a star-shaped cushion of Spiritual Energy, which anchors it to nearby objects with "ropes" of spirit particles. It can stop falling objects and people from falling. Substances such as water, lightning, fire, will not be affected by this net like a literal net.

39. Enkōsen (円閘扇, Round Lock Fan)
Using either both hands or his/her Zanpakutō in a blocking motion, the practitioner generates a dull yellow energy, which takes the form of a large spinning disk of condensed Reiatsu, in front of themselves, blocking an opponent's attack up to officer level. Can be used three times in battle.

42. Īguruaizu (イーグルアイズ, Eagle Eyes)
This spell grants the practitioner increased vision in the sense of making them hyper observant for one post. This allows the user to be able to pick out small details that they would not normally see.

44. Yoku Hibiku Oto (よく響く音, Booming Voice)
This spell allows the practitioner to speak in a wide area, without the need for extra volume. It increases the range of one’s voice, without increasing the volume. It is useful for both announcements and emergencies.

45. Sherushīrudo (シェルシールド, Shell Shield)
This spell creates a barrier around the practitioner, shaped like an egg. It is cast just before the practitioner goes to sleep, and is used to protect the practitioner from any one attack while they are asleep. It then shatters, and jerks the practitioner awake. This spell lasts until the practitioner wakes up, either by it being shattered, or an outside source waking them.

47. Kihō (気泡, Air Bubble)
This spell creates a barrier around the practitioner’s head. This barrier will not protect from any attack, but it instead filters the air in which the caster is breathing of anything harmful. This spell lasts for five posts. This can be used to breathe under water, or to defend from attacks that create poisons in the air.

49. Kurosu Kama (クロス鎌, Cross Scythe)
This spell creates two blades from a scythe (No handles) that fly at the victim, attempting to pin them to whatever surface is behind them in an X shape. These blades are easily breakable, however, there is a high chance of cutting yourself while doing so.


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Russian_Heartless_Fox

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Youroka Kage
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Devoted Guildswoman

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 22, 2015 2:26 pm


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✿✿✿Assessment✿✿✿


Hello, my name is Youroka Kage and I will be your judge today. I do appologize for how long this has taken. I have been having issues in my personal life that have really changed how I do everyday things.

I have checked with the captain of squad 2, and he accepts you as an officer.

One of the things that puzzles me about your RPC is the passive ability. It seems like the entire shikai depends on Lonely World being active. I would not be able to pass it as is, since Lonely World is a Technique, it would have to have a cool down for how long it could be up, how long the cool down is once it is down, and what can block it, and what completely shatters it. I would suggest making it the passive ability, since it is required for the entire Shikai.

I have a question about the petals. are they able to be deflected by air, are they effected by heat/fire? I mean in any of the abilities. This is important so that I can judge how strong the abilities are.

In Wave of Solidarity, you mention that there are "60 petals per square foot." You never mention how many petals that you have. This is important to judge how fair this ability would be for your opponents. Once your opponents are outside of Lonely World, how many posts until their skin/clothing goes back to normal? The only other issue I have with this ability is that the cool down is one post. I would like to see it a little longer. If you do make Lonely World your passive, you would be able to add another ability that possibly goes with the glaive.

Penance of Peace is an ability that I like to call "Good for anime, bad for Role play." It does have some parts that are salvageable. It would make it a little weaker, however, it would be fairer for the people that you encounter in role play.

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This ability is centered at the rose that appears when this ability is activated. It is a white as opposed to the blue that everything else unifies to, and it blooms. When this ability is activated the rose blooms and releases a powerful stream of white rose petals. These petals are the only ability that can go beyond the Lonely World and cannot be returned with the Return to Innocence ability. The stream can go about five feet beyond the Lonely World before they will fade away, anything caught in this stream, be it a piece of clothing, to an arm, will turn to stone and the stone will begin to spread rapidly to grow ten times the size of the initial hit. Stray objects caught within the range of Penance of Peace will then shift to be under Sutekina's control. To be either crushed or to be used as a projectile. This is Sutekina's 'Ace in the Hole' ability and she does her best to never have to use it as it takes a great amount of strength from herself. (Initial cool down would be five posts)


If you are asking what I have taken out of the quote, it is the drawing of Reiastu/Reshi. This is because we do not allow reshi/Reiatsu absorbing abilities, this would work better if we had a percentile system for Kido/Cero. I also removed the Stamina demand from the end of the ability, as we don't have a way to measure that, in a way, it makes the ability stronger as well.

The other thing with this ability that I would like to know is how big is the stream of white petals? I ask this because the only other measurement that we have had is the "60 petals per square foot." I am only assuming that you are using the same measurement since there are no measurements here.


The only other issue that I see on the RPC is the items on the RPC. We do allow non-powered items of any type to be on the RPC, however, if you would like an item that has an ability, you must get it from squad 12. That is because they make sure that each item is Role play friendly. The request thread for that is here.

Please make the necessary changes to the RPC.




Do note, that with this acceptance, you are agreeing to not godmod with the powers that have been passed. If there is a case of godmodding, the head judge and her second in command has the right to open up your profile and you will have to fix it.

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 22, 2015 10:11 pm


Youroka Kage


I completely understand, don't worry about a thing!

I made the changes you said, extending the cool down time for the Wave of Solidarity as well as giving a limit to her petal amount, moving the Lonely World into the passive ability, made a more specific setting for the Penance of Peace, and I took out the two added pieces of equipment, I may or may not have them made later. Who know.

I also added another ability Piercing Bloom and I did try and keep this one as simple as possible!

I hope it is acceptable, thank you for your time.

~Russian

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 24, 2015 9:15 am


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Thank you so much for understanding, not many people do when I ask them to make changes ^.^;

This RPC is almost passable, there are only two things I need to be changed.

On Piercing Bloom, the only thing that I see that needs a little changing is the cooldown on it. A cool down of 2 posts should be good. ^.^

On Penance of Peace, I need to know how many petals there are in it. I do thank you for adding the concentration of them.

With those changes, I should be able to approve the profile.



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PostPosted: Wed Jun 24, 2015 3:41 pm


Youroka Kage


Alright, I added the limit of 600 petals for Penance of Peace, I figured for a smaller blast radius would equate to double the petal maximum, at least that's my rationalization behind it. If it doesn't work I can reduce it.

The cool down for Piercing Bloom has also been extended to two posts!

Again, thank you for your time.

~Russian

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Everything looks good ^.^

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