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xxxxName : Lemiah Zeil
xxxxGender : Male
xxxxHeight : 5 feet 6 inches
xxxxWeight : 150 pounds
xxxxReiatsu Color : Dark Orange
xxxxReiatsu Level : Immense
This level of spiritual pressure corresponds to those possessing an enormous amount of spiritual power. They can easily incapacitate anyone within a lower rank - for their pressure feels like a crushing sensation for them, and trying to move through the pressure will severely drain anyone of lower rank of energy quickly. Should these individuals release their pressure - they can be felt from rather far distances.

xxxxReiryoku Level : Immense
This level of spiritual power corresponds to those possessing an enormous amount of spiritual power which is finely controlled. This level of spiritual power is reflected in its ability to enhance a user during combat as well as its ability to affect the surrounding environment on a controlled level, allowing the wielder to use it in combat to startling degrees. These presences can be felt can be felt great distances away (several squads), but only people within a 90 foot radius from their physical location can feel the discomforting and often painful effects of the full force of their pressure. Lieutenants are often able to withstand this pressure, however anyone officer ranked and below often feel as if they are drowning and being pressed down when taking the direct force of this released pressure. A visored of this Reiryoku level can be in Full Hollowfication for 9 posts.

xxxxCero Color : Flame (redish orange color)
xxxxMask Appearance : His mask covers only the front part of his face and has a red mark shaped like a lightning bolt over the right side extending from a few inches above the eye downward to the middle of his cheek. The color of the mark turns a deeper shade of red as Lemiah starts to use more of his Hollow powers such as Cero.
xxxxReiatsu Color with Mask : Amaranth (red is more dominate with mask on.)
xxxxAppearance : Normal everyday look In Lemiah's normal appearance he looks like a typical human teenager with orange hair styled short in the front and longer to his shoulders in the back. His eyes are light brown, but he wears orange tinted glasses to help filter out sunlight so very few know his true eyes color. When he is off duty he wears sneakers, jeans, teeshirts, and sometimes a coat depending on the weather. This is also the appearance he takes on while he visited the Human World.
xxxxInner Hollow Appearance : Monster In My Head His inner Hollow name Shi (death) is always dressed in white clothing from head to toe with his hair and skin also white. His eyes are a pale yellow color. He wears a mask very similar to Lemiah's when he transforms into full hollowification. On Shi's mask the lightning bolt is replaced by a straight black line as if it was slashed by a sword and the left side of the mask is slowly chipping away revealing only one of Shi's eyes while the rest of his face remains hidden.
xxxxFull Hollowification Appearance : Becoming A Monster When Lemiah transforms his hair becomes slightly longer in the front and back while his face becomes covered by a white mask with black ovals covering the eyes. See mask appearance for details. In this form Lemiah discards reason and fights only for the sake of achieving whatever goal was given to him. If he loses consciousness or runs out of Hollow Energy this form will instantly deactivate returning Lemiah to his normal appearance while also returning his Zanpakuto to it's sealed state.
xxxxPersonality : Quiet and observant since coming into the Soul Society. He remembers very little of his human life and feels it's probably for the best. He is a very rational individual seeing things from many angles to find the best course to take. This applies to both battles and relationships. In a fight he often hangs back watching the opponent, carefully judging their movements, before he counter-attacks. This often gives him too close for comfort victories with plenty of battle scars to show off to his squad mates once he is released from the hospital. He is usually energetic due to his addiction to coffee and is always optimistic that he will be helpful to his squadmates. He is very materialistic and feels everything he owns is a valued piece to unlocking his forgotten memory. When he first meets someone he is secretive about himself. He is timid around people he doesn't know well and sometimes he has described his job to be one of the most boring when he has nothing to do. To those who don't know him well he is often seen as unorganized because he has stacks of papers laying around all over the place.

xxxxBiography :

Birth: When this began I had nothing to say as I watched the time keep ticking away ~
+++Lemiah was born in ancient Egypt during the time when Khufu was Pharaoh. Khufu was a kind man that cared about his subjects and their livelihood. When a great flood put many farmers, including Lemiah's father Anehil, out of work Khufu hired them to work on constructing one of the Pyramids of Giza. The construction only lasted three months out of the year and during that time the workers were given everything they needed including food and clothing. After the construction was completed Anehil returned to his normal job as a cotton farmer. He made just enough to support his wife Marilyn, young son Lemiah, and himself. Anehil knew his family wouldn't live like royalty, but he still found pride looking up at the Pyramid he helped build.

Adolescence: Maybe it's a dream, maybe nothing else is real... Would mean a thing if I told you how I feel?
+++Lemiah was the typical nerdy type boy growing up. When it came to physical confrontations he always came out on the losing end, often coming home with new bruises and tears rolling down his cheeks. He was picked on because he was different, he could see shadows of things no one else could. Despite this he still continued to study hard and do well in all his classes. He seemed to have a knack for learning new things and enjoyed solving problems of all kinds. There wasn't an intellectual challenge he would back down from. Coming to a new school for his first year in high school was both a blessing and curse. A blessing in the sense he would start a new life here with new friends and new challenges to overcome. It was a curse because some of those ghosts of the past followed him to his new school. One of those ghosts was Lemiah's mother who passed away when he was five from a lung infection. At first Lemiah was afraid of her, but once he learned she was there to help him he accepted her and the existence of ghosts. It was at that moment Lemiah became aware of the spirits that roamed the Earth unseen to most. Some spirits like his mother's were kind and did no harm, but then there were bad spirits too who took the form of monsters like the ones in a child's nightmare. The bad spirits all had two things in common, they had a white mask over their face, and a large hole in their chest where their heart should be. Lemiah concluded the bad spirits must have done something wrong to lose their hearts and become monsters. He wondered if his mother's spirit would become a monster someday, and that thought frightened him the most.

Teenager: If I make another move, there'll be no more turning back... Everything will change and it all will fade to Black!
+++That fear had not yet come to pass as fifteen year old Lemiah entered into the school grounds. Lemiah no longer told the other students about the ghosts standing only a few feet away making funny faces and laughing at the poor souls who were blind to their existence. During classes he kept to himself, working as fast as he could to finish his assignments and go back home. Home is were he felt safe and for the next three years Lemiah's life continued this way. When Lemiah turned eighteen only months before graduation from high school a change come over him. He felt at first burning pain and then emptiness as he struggled to wake from what he thought was a nightmare. In truth his spiritual energy had awakened and it was reacting to the spirits that lingered around him. A voice in him mind told him to kill all of the spirits, but Lemiah struggled against it. Then his mother's spirit stood in front of her son as he wreathed in pain and said only two words "kill me." She could feel the transformation into a monster happening inside her and she wanted it to stop. She didn't want to hurt her child, but it was her attachment to the boy that prevented her from passing on. That attachment was fueling the transformation as her senses faded into darkness, her soul buried deep with her spiritual body, that was quickly changing into a masked beast Lemiah saw many times trying to hurt people before a black shadow came to slay them.

+++"Stop or the shadow will kill you mother!" Lemiah said running towards her, but it was too late. The monster had been born and was now in control. The monster lunged for Lemiah scratching across his chest before throwing him into a wall on the opposite side of the room. "Why did father have to work late tonight, and why did mother become like this?" Lemiah thought to himself as he staggered to his feet. His vision was already starting to blur before the 'shadow' appeared. The shadow swiftly drew a sword and with one downward strike appeared to cut the monster in half. At first Lemiah was happy to see the monster's body vanish hoping his mother's spirit would reappear when it was gone. Instead the shadow dressed in black stood alone starring up at the full moon. "You killed her...you killed my mother!" Lemiah shouted as he charged for the man in black. Lemiah was unconscious before he reached the man who muttered "You can see me boy?" Those would be the last words Lemiah would hear before his mortal life ended.

Rebirth: Am I hurting? Am I sad? Should I stay or should I go? I've forgotten how to tell, did I ever even know?
+++When Lemiah woke up he was being treated in Squad Four's Hospital. He couldn't remember anything that happened before he woke up. One of the medics told him that he got into a pretty nasty fight that nearly destroyed his soul and that it took about a month and a half to patch him up. Once Lemiah was able to walk again he was released into the care of the Academy Headmaster. His new adoptive parent told him "You will begin your new life here as a Shinigami under the guidance of this academy. Learn well and become strong." It seemed even in this strange new world Lemiah would be studying and working his butt off, but something in that man's eyes made Lemiah determined not to let him down. Over the next six years Lemiah studied from every book and attended every training session he could to learn about the Shinigami and Hollows and their endless struggle to maintain peace. A short time after graduating from the academy Lemiah was taken into Squad Two the Stealth and Assassination Squad.

+++Working with his squad gave Lemiah a sense of purpose in this new world. If he could help in even the smallest way he vowed to do so. Lemiah was sent in during difficult missions to help overcome strong foes with his battle insight. In rare instances he also participated into battle by using his Zanpakuto against the weaker hollows as he gained confidence in himself and his new shinigami abilities. Even after participating in countless battles, Lemiah still has reservations about killing the hollows. He remembered the day the shinigami came to take his mother's life after she changed into a Hollow, and it made him wonder. What if all the Hollows were lost souls attached to something or someone? Was it right to destroy them? Lemiah began to conduct research on his own trying to find a way to reverse the process known as Hollowification. If he could somehow return the soul back to the way it was before becoming a monster, maybe he could help them be freed of their attachment and rest in peace. That was his hope anyways, and to this day he continues to search for a way to return humanity back to the hollows.

Continue: If I find a way to change, if I step into the light... Then I'll never feel the same and it all will fade to White.
+++Lemiah started to see Squad Two as his home and the people within the only family he knew. He became very close with the members of his squad as he assisted them with missions and even their paperwork. Time seemed to fly by quickly as Lemiah moved up in rank and developed a new hobby to occupy his free time. He would sneak down to the Human World and gather knickknacks and trinkets then bring them back to his room and make things out of them. Some of his favorite things to bring back with him included various flavored coffees and ramen noodles. On one of those trips to the human world Lemiah was ambushed by an Arrancar. This Arrancar was a strong Hollow with the capability to think and rationalize, but more importantly it was able to match his moves and predict his attacks by simply observing him for a few moments. Lemiah had no time for hesitation as he drew his Zanpakuto to face the monster. He told himself this was no different from the other Hollows he had faced and defeated in the past. He couldn't be more wrong as the Arrancar rushed towards him Lemiah brought his Zanpakuto up aiming for the monsters mask. Small droplets of crimson filled the air around him as his body suddenly went numb. Lemiah knew this feeling and it was just like that time when he was killed by his mother who had become a Hollow. Lemiah suffered a broken leg and three shattered ribs in addition to the blood loss from the gash across his chest, but those were only his physical wounds. Lemiah would later learn that a change within himself was occurring due to the Arrancar bringing him on the brink of death for the second time.

+++Lemiah's ribs healed within a week of treatment from the medical team, however the bones in his left leg never fully mended. Lemiah wears a metal brace to stabilize his leg so he can walk and for the most part fight normally. He favors his right leg greatly though to keep the majority of his weight away from his injured left leg. He has been known to use the sheath of his Zanpakuto to protect the lower half of his body from time to time. The medical staff made light of his injuries saying things like "You didn't have to get so beat up to drop by and say hello..." and shortly after Lemiah discovered two new things about himself. He had a hole in his chest about six inches in diameter that went all the way through him from front to back although somehow he was still alive, and second a strange voice had entered into his mind almost mocking him as it spoke "The boy lives!" and from that day onward Lemiah had become a monster like the ones he was supposed to purify. He learned about the Vizards and their strange abilities that came along with their Hollowification. Lemiah decided to keep his Hollow side a secret from most people except those who needed to know about it as he returned to his duties as the new Captain of Squad Two.


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xxxxReiatsu Shape : Strongest near the feet then thins out as it moves upwards towards the head.
xxxxLikes :
xxxx • Coffee only if it has caffeine
xxxx • Eating food he secretly brings back from his trips to the Human World.
xxxx • Sparing
xxxxDislikes :
xxxx • Loud people and places
xxxx • Mornings mostly since he doesn't sleep well
xxxx • Doing things that do not interest him
xxxxRelationships :
xxxx • Mother Marilyn Zeil murdered
xxxx • Father Anehil Zeil passed away due to old age
xxxx • No other know relatives/family.


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xxxxSquad : 02
xxxxRank : Captain
xxxxSquad Ability : Cloak of the Shadows


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xxxxZanpakuto Name : Toko no Oushi (Unending Knowledge)
xxxxInner World Appearance : Old Library where Lemiah first met his Zanpakuto Spirit during his training at the academy. The library oddly enough has a living tree growing through it's center while the floors are all made of dirt with some roots sticking up here and there. The walls are made of stone bricks and the ceiling of wood. The bookshelves are made of wood and contain very old and sometimes decaying books written in various languages. His Zanpakuto Spirit seems to be the only one who can read the books once removed from the shelves.
xxxxSpirit Appearance : Toko no Oushi prefers to go by Toko. She is a mysterious young looking girl, with long light pink hair and grey eyes, that holds vast knowledge of both the human and spirit world through reading over a thousand books in her library. Despite that she still feels there is much to learn and does not feel satisfied with the knowledge she has. She decided to join with Lemiah in order to gain more knowledge about the worlds through him. Toko appears to have the body of a ten year old girl and from time to time she becomes easily flustered with Lemiah if he doesn't comply with her requests.
xxxxSealed Appearance : Sealed Appearance - In this form Lemiah's Zanpakuto is a normal katana blade with a black sheath and hilt. He is know to fight with the katana blade in his right hand and the sheath in his left. This is so he can block his lower body (especially his injured left leg) with the sheath while still being able to fight using his weapon in the right hand. This unique fighting style carries over into his Shikai and Bankai as well.


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xxxxRelease Type : Progressive
xxxxRelease Phrase : Let's begin our story Mekuriageru (Turn The Page)!
xxxxZanpakuto Physical Appearance : In this form the zanpakuto turns into a small [6x8] book with "Toko no Oushi" written on the cover. When opened the pages are all completely blank.
xxxxInstant Effect : Once the book is opened a small gust of wind spreads outward from Lemiah that has no damaging effects on the foe.The pages of the book start to turn rapidly as the wind spreads outwards.
xxxxPassive Ability : Provides a slight boost in offensive and defensive kido depending on which ability is used as describe below .
xxxxTechniques :
xxxx1. Superingukontesuto (Spelling Bee)
Desc: Lemiah places his hand over the open book for a moment then he hold his hand out towards a foe to cast a kido spell. By channeling the kido through his Zanpakuto before he casts it Lemiah is able to amplify the kido slightly.
Effect: Offensive kido do slightly more damage (10% boost) while defensive kido offer more protection (10% boost). Sealing Kido behave as they normally would even if this ability is activated prior to use.
Duration: This boost only applies during the same turn it is activated and takes 5 turns to recharge.
xxxx 2. Chigireru (Torn)
Desc: Lemiah appears to rip a page out of the book then quickly folds the page into something to be used as a weapon. Often Lemiah makes paper airplanes or paper throwing stars which he then throws towards a foe. The paper weapons behave just like paper would can can easily be diverted using strong winds or destroyed with fire. Water abilities can also stop them by turning the paper into a soggy heap on the floor.
Effect: If one of these paper weapons hits a foe it will cause a small cut with minor bleeding and minor damage as if they received a paper cut to that part of the body. Against stronger foes Lemiah adds a small amount of his Reiatsu to the paper weapon before throwing it to increase the damage against his foe equal to 20% his current strength.
Duration: Lasts for 3 turns and has a 5 turn cooldown.
xxxx 3.Shikigami (Paper Clone)
Desc: When activated several pages become detached from the book and float into the air in front of Lemiah making a human like shape which mimics Lemiah's movements while staying three feet in front of him. If used as a shield Lemiah will take a defensive stance and the clone will mimic it by crossing its arms across its chest. In this stance the clone is shield to lessen the impact of an attack, while it's offensive abilities are lacking. If used as an offensive technique the clone will take a fighting stance with one fist raised slightly above the waist and the other ready to strike a swift punch to the opponent. The clone's physical attack is equal in strength to being hit by a stack of fifty pieces of normal paper.
Effect: If used as a shield it disappears instantly after absorbing 30% of the attack while if used offensively it deals damage equal to 20% of Lemiah's normal attack power before disappearing after impact.
Duration: This is mostly used as a quick reaction either to attack or block and thus is only active for one turn. Lemiah must wait 7 turns before another paper clone can be made.
xxxx Yoseru (Send for Help!)
Desc: Used in times of peril to send a message requesting aid or support. Sometimes this is used outside combat to relay information quickly to allies. Lemiah tears a page from the book out and holds his palm down on top of it for a moment inscribing the message onto the page using his Reiatsu. When completed the page is folded up into a butterfly and sent off to the intended recipient. The person may send a reply back by placing his or her palm over the back side of the paper and thinking to themselves the words they want to be written down. This is a variation of using the Hell Butterfly to communicate, however as long as Lemiah remains conscious the paper butterfly will continue towards its intended without hesitation. It is coated with Lemiah's Reiatsu initially to help protect it along the way, but the Reiatsu will weaken over long distances.
Effect: Send a message over short or long distances to relay information or request help if needed. Does not do any damage once so ever, but it maybe destroyed if attacked by a force equal to one fourth of Lemiah's physical strength or greater. Destroying the butterfly destroys the message and/or any responses back as well.
Duration: One message can be sent per use and cooldown begins when the intended recipient reads the message or the butterfly is destroyed. Must wait 4 turns before using it again.


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xxxxRelease Type : Progressive
xxxxRelease Phrase : Story-time is over Kinshitsuaiwasu (Happily Ever After)!
xxxxZanpakuto Physical Appearance : Changes depending on the attacks listed below.
xxxxInstant Effect : When bankai is activated an orange aura begins to surround Lemiah for a few moments giving him a slight boost in confidence and strength.
xxxxPassive Ability : By saying Bankai's name it instills in Lemiah the mentality that he will overcome the challenges ahead of him.
xxxxTechniques :
xxxx1.- Kyouzou no Shikigami (Mirrored image of a paper clone)
Desc: Lemiah grips a hand full of pages from his zanpakuto in the shape of a book and pulls them out before throwing them in front of himself. Like the previous ability Shikigami the pages form a human like silhouette in front of Lemiah then it takes a taunting stance with its hands on its hips and its head slightly back as Lemiah begins an incantation. When the incantation is complete three additional Shikigami appear. Within one of them Lemiah's real body is hidden while the others are just hollow images. He is not able to attack while in this state or it would reveal him, however if his real body is struck by any form of attack the extra Shikigami will vanish leaving Lemaih revealed.
Incantation: "Seek the truth hidden right before your eyes, within your reach, unwavering and unforgiving. Soon it begins to blur, and you feel only despair, as it is slipping away."
Effect: During the start of the turn this is activated Lemiah chooses a random number between 1 and 4 (using the RNG for the post actions) to determine which Shikigami has his true body inside. At the start of the enemy turn they must pick a random number between 1 and the number of Shikigami activated to try and match the number Lemiah has. If the numbers match the ability deactivates and the enemy is able to attack Lemiah directly, but if the numbers do not match then one of the shikigami is destroyed instead. Lemiah receives less damage depending how many shikigami are activated as described below. Note that if all shikigami besides the one with Lemiah inside are destroyed then this ability automatically deactivates also.
4 Shikigami (3 fake and 1 hiding Lemiah) - All incoming damage is divided by one fourth so that each clone absorbs part of the damage and Lemiah receives the remaining. At the start of enemy turn pick random number 1-4 to determine if they find Lemiah successfully otherwise one shikigami is destroyed during that turn.
3 Shikigami (2 fake and 1 hiding Lemiah) - All incoming damage is divided by one third so that each clone absorbs part of the damage and Lemiah receives the remaining. At the start of enemy turn pick random number 1-3 (if Lees number is 3 or less) or 2-4 (if Lee gets 4) to determine if they find Lemiah successfully otherwise one shikigami is destroyed during that turn.
2 Shikigami (1 fake and 1 hiding Lemiah) - All incoming damage is divided by one half so that each clone absorbs part of the damage and Lemiah receives the remaining. At the start of enemy turn pick random number 1-2 (if Lee's number is 2 or less) or 3-4 (if Lee's number is 3 or higher) to determine if they find Lemiah successfully otherwise one shikigami is destroyed during that turn.
This has no damaging effects and Lemiah is unable to make any offensive moves while active. This is primary a defensive move to give Lemiah time to think of his next action or plan an escape if needed.
1 Shikigami (0 fakes 1 with Lemiah) If this happens the ability automatically deactivates and goes into cooldown.
Duration: Max is 4 turns but may deactivate sooner if the right number is rolled it automatically stops that turn and enters cooldown. He must wait 6 turns before using this ability again after cooldown activates.
xxxx2.- Sekigahara (Decisive Battle)
Desc: The book grows 3 times in size and becomes attached to Lemiah's right arm like a shield while in his left he wields his Zanpakuto which looks as if it has been made of paper-mache.
Effect: Lemiah uses these items to battle his foe without using any magic (kido). Physical damaged he deals to a foe is amplified by 1/4 while magic damage he receives from a foe is reduced by half.
Duration: Lasts for 4 turns with a cooldown of 7 turns.
xxxx3.- Shimaini (The End)
Desc: Lemiah sticks his sword into the ground in front of himself then he opens the larger book/shield from previous ability. Upon saying "The End" the book begins to glow gathering Lemiah's energy into itself. Once the gathering is complete a large energy blast will be shot towards the foe. This takes most of Lemiah's energy to preform so afterwards the book vanishes from Lemiah's arm and his sword returns back to sealed Zanpakuto form.
Effect: If the attack hit it will cause major damage, but the blast can only travel in a straight linear path so it can be dodged by moving out of range. Damage dealt is equal to 60% of Lemiah's physical strength.
Duration: Lasts for 1 turn and has a recharge of 10 turns.


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Hoho:
Dashing
Shunpo (normal) / Sonido (with mask on)
Air Walk - This cannot be used while the Visored mask is donned.
Utsusemi - This cannot be used while the Visored mask is donned.

Hado:
3. Tanki-sha (短気者, Spitfire)
4. Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning
5. Yuki no tama (雪の玉, Snowball)
9. Tōketsu (凍結, Frozen)
11. Tsuzuri Raiden (綴雷電, Bound Lightning)
12. Fushibi (伏火, Ambush Flare)
13. Shimo bōkō (Frost Assault)
14. Sōshū (Frost Fall)
18. Bakuhatsu Senkō (爆発穿孔, Explosive Punch)
19.Bakuhatsu-tekina kikku (爆発的なキック, Explosive Kick)
26. Raionshīrudo (ライオンシールド Lion shield)
27. Howaitobīmu ( ホワイトビーム, White Beam)
28. Saidan ( 祭壇, Altar)
29. Moeru obujekuto (バーニングチキン, Burning Chicken)
30. Denji wa (でんじは Electromagnetic Wave)
31. Shakkahō (赤火砲, Red Fire Cannon)
33. Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Fire, Crash Down)
35. Middonaitoraikou (ミッドナイトライトニング, Midnight Lightning)
36. Cheinraitoningu (チェインライトニング, Chain Lightning)
37. Sandābāningu (サンダーバーニング Burning Thunder)
40. Oni hanmā (鬼ハンマー Demon Hammer)
41. Kaenbin (火炎瓶 Molotov Cocktail)
43. Mizu no chikai (水の誓い The Oath of the Water)
44. Kasai no chikai (火災の誓い The Oath of fire)
45. Kusa no chikai (草の誓い The Oath of Grass)
49. Hi no bakufū (火の爆風 Fire Blast)
51. Nisemono Shunpo (偽物 瞬歩Fake Flash Step)
52. Kyōfu Seiji (恐怖政治, Reign of Terror)
54. Haien (廃炎, Abolishing Flames)
56. Gurren Yari Doriru (真紅槍ドリル Crimson Spear Drill)
58. Tenran (闐嵐, Orchid Sky)
59. Shīdomashingan (シードマシンガン Seed Machine Gun)
60. Iwa no haka (岩の墓 Rock Tomb)
63. Raikōhō (雷吼炮, Thunder Roar Sear)
64. Yami Arekuruu (闇荒れ狂う, Raging Darkness)
70. Bakuhatsu Parusu (爆発パルス, Explosive Pulse)
72. Gaki Rekkō (牙気裂光, Raging Light Fang)
73. Sōren Sōkatsui (双漣蒼火墜, Twin Lotus Blue Fire, Crash Down)
74. Tsurara yari (Icicle Spear)
75. Ryūsei sutoraiki (流星ストライキ Meteor Strike)
76.Ten no sōzō (天の創造 Creation of the Heavens)
80. Chikyū koramu (地球コラム Earth Column)
83. Kūfuku chikyū (空腹地球 Hungry Earth)
86. Seiki no Arashi (世紀の嵐 Storm of the Century)
88. Hiryū Gekizoku Shinten Raihō (飛竜撃賊震天雷炮, Flying Dragon-Striking Heaven-Shaking Thunder Cannon)
89: Burakku·rein (ブラック·レイン Black rain)
90. Kurohitsugi (黒棺, Black Coffin)
91. Senjū Kōten Taihō (千手皎天汰炮, Thousand-Hand Bright Heaven Culling-Sear)
92. Sen Honō no Ame (千炎の雨, Thousand Flame Rain)
93. Hyōga Seiran (氷河晴嵐, Glacier Vapor Storm)
94. Nobi Tsunami (野火津波, Wildfire Tsunami)
97. Idorafurea (イドラフレア Hydra Flare)
99. Ryūsei busshitsu Arashi (流星物質 Meteoriod Storm)

Bakudo:
1. Sai (塞, Block)
2. Kaze no myaku (風の脈, Pulse of Wind)
3. Kiiro no rōpu (黄色のロープ Yellow Rope)
4. Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope)
5. Hikari Parusu (光パルス, Light Pulse)
7. Seki (斥, Repulsion)
8. Geki (撃, Strike)
9.Hōrin (崩輪, Disintegrating Circle)
10. Hando Rokku (ハンドロック, Hand Lock)
11. Bōra (ボーラ, Bolas)
12. Kami no te ( 神の手, Divine hand)
13. Sonikku Shindō (ソニック振動, Sonic Vibration)
14. Shingōenkan (信号炎管 Signal flare)
15. Setchi (接地, Grounding)
17. Kinzoku Ito (金属糸, Metal Thread)
20. Fukkushotto (フックショット, Hook Shot)
21. Bikan (美観, Beautiful Sight)
22. Sekienton (赤煙遁, Red Smoke Flight)
23. Dokueki-yō Konomi (毒液用好み, Venom Taste)
24. Shīrurokku (シールロック, Sealing Lock)]
25.Tate Basshu (盾バッシュ, Shield Bash)
26. Kyokkō (曲光, Bent Light)
28. Fantomu (ファントム, Phantom)
30. Shitotsu Sansen (嘴突三閃, Beak-Thrust Tri-Flash)
31. Teisatsu (偵察. Spy)
32. Wana-ban (罠板, Trap Plate)
34. Shōmei (照明, Illumination)
35. Burokku (ブロック, Block)
37. Tsuriboshi (吊星, Hanging Star)
38. Suchīrubaria (スチールバリア, Steel Barrier)
39. Enkōsen (円閘扇, Round Lock Fan)
42. Īguruaizu (イーグルアイズ, Eagle Eyes)
43. Buki wando (武器ワンド Weapon Wand)
45. Sherushīrudo (シェルシールド, Shell Shield)
47. Kihō (気泡, Air Bubble)
48. Kenshutsu-ki (検出器, Detector)
49. Kurosu Kama (クロス鎌, Cross Scythe)
50. Kurippuru Kiri (クリップル霧, Crippling Fog)
58. Kakushitsuijaku (摑趾追雀, Trace-Catching Pursuit Sparrows)
60. Noren Mekuri (暖簾捲り, "Curtain Stripping" )
61. Rikujōkōrō (六杖光牢, Six-Staff Light Prison)
62. Hyapporankan (百歩欄干, Hundred-Step Rail Parch)
63. Sajō Sabaku (鎖条鎖縛, Chainlink Chain Bond(s))
65. Shōgekiha (衝撃波 Shock wave)
67. Shibireyubi (しびれ�


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PostPosted: Fri May 08, 2015 10:24 am


((Due to length of profile I have to separate this into two parts. Sorry about that. I summarized the things I changes/updated below. Let me know what you think about my two new abilities ))

Posting Format:
One █ = 10 % HP loss or 10 uses of kido

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[ -- ]
Health: [ HP: ██████████ 100% | Kido: ████████████ 125/125 uses remain | Status: Normal | Hollowification: Inactive ]
Location: [ -- ]
Talking to: [ -- ]
What am I doing: [ -- ]
Active Ability: [ -- ] [ Cloak of the Shadows used 0/4 ]
Recharging Ability: [ -- ]


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ℒℯɱɩαћ Ȥℯɩℓ - Captain Squad Two


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[imgleft]http://i42.tinypic.com/1yo2ll.png[/imgleft][align=left][size=12][color=#ED872D] [ -- ][/size][/color]
[size=11][color=#ED872D]Health: [ [/color][color=green]HP: ██████████ 100% [/color][color=#ED872D]|[/color][color=royalblue] Kido: ████████████ 125/125 uses remain [/color][color=#ED872D]|[/color] [color=olive]Status: Normal [/color][color=#ED872D]|[/color] [url=http://i57.tinypic.com/eper6g.jpg][color=crimson][u]Hollowification[/u][/color][/url][color=crimson]: Inactive[/color][color=#ED872D] ][/color]
[color=#FF8C00]Location: [ -- ][/color]
[color=#FFA343]Talking to: [ -- ][/color]
[color=#FFA343]What am I doing: [ -- ][/color]
[color=#FFA343]Active Ability: [ -- ][/color] [color=#FFA343][ [/color][url=http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=24218763][color=darkorange][u]Cloak of the Shadows[/u][/color][/url][color=#FFA343] used 0/4 ][/color]
[color=#FFA343]Recharging Ability: [ -- ][/color][/size][/align]

[imgleft]http://i58.tinypic.com/3028f2r.png[/imgleft] [align=left][size=16][color=darkorange]ℒℯɱɩαћ Ȥℯɩℓ[/color] [color=orange]- Captain Squad Two [/color][/size][/align]

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Notable Changes/Explanations

- Rank Change to Captain
- Reiatsu and Reiryoku changed to Immense
- Minor change to History to note he became Captain after recovering from his near fatal wounds on his previous mission. He spent a week in the hospital of Squad Four before learning he had become a vizard and the hollow he fought against now lived within his body and inner mind. Please let me know if history needs to be expanded more. Due to length I wasn't sure if I should add anything additional to it.
- Added additional information to Sealed Appearance description to include Lemiah fights both offensively and defensively. In sealed state he uses the sheath to protect his injured left leg while he mounts an assault wielding his zanpakuto in his right hand. This is carried over into his release states as well allowing him to either protect himself or strike his foe.

- Shikai Technique 1 Superingukontesuto (Spelling Bee) - Minor change to effect to include Sealing Kido recieves no additional effects if cast while this is active.
- Shikai Technique 2 Chigireru (Torn) - Change to the effect to include damage increased to 20% Lemiah's physical strength against strong foes by adding his Reiatsu to the paper weapon before it is thrown.
- Shikai Technique 3 Shikigami (Paper Clone) - Clarified the description of the abilities to include two possible stances. If defensive stance is taken then the clone acts as a shield to absorb 30% of the incoming damage before disappearing. If offensive stance is taken instead the clone gets into a fighting stance before striking the foe for 20% of Lemiah's physical strength before vanishing.
- Shikai Technique 4 (New) - Yoseru (Send for Help!) - This is a variation of using the Hell Butterfly. In times of peril its used to send a message requesting aid or support. Sometimes this is used outside combat to relay information quickly to allies. No damage is done by the ability and the butterfly can be destroyed to stop the message from reaching it's target.

- Bankai Technique 1 (New) - Kyouzou no Shikigami (Mirrored image of a paper clone) - Defensive ability to temporarily hide Lemiah's position among one of four shikigami (paper clones) which the enemy has to find him. He has no offensive abilities or kido accessible during this ability. Random number is chosen to determine which clone Lee is in then the enemy must match the number to reveal him. If numbers do not match a clone is destroyed instead. Damage is slightly reduced depending upon the number of clones active. Lemiah is not able to generate any additional clones beyond the four initial ones and once a clone is destroyed he can not revive it in any way until the ability recharges.
- Sekigahara (Decisive Battle) has become the second Bankai ability due to the way it links with the last ability.
- Shimaini (The End) has become the third and final Bankai ability.

- Hoho, Hado, and Bakudo updated to include abilities available to Captain level and below.

- Made a few minor changes to posing format to help with combat. Included now are active ability and recharging ability to help me remember. I have squad ability under active as it remains available for use up to 4 times (at Captain rank) until it goes into recharge.


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PostPosted: Tue May 12, 2015 1:53 pm


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PostPosted: Sat May 16, 2015 9:17 am


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Hello my name is Youroka Kage, and I will be your judge today. I only see a few things that need some edits.

Somewhere you will need to post which random number you are in the mix. (This is for the new Bankai ability)

I also waned to mention that you are using one of this Shinigami borders for the kido section. If you want to copy the image from above in the equipment section that would be perfect.

I also want to mention, that anyone above Lt does not have Furikkā because it's a training form of Shunpo. Shunpo replaces Furikkā.

Those are the only errors that I have found. Please make those changes and quote me when you are done. ^.^



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PostPosted: Sat May 16, 2015 8:02 pm


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It will be different each time I use the ability. When Lee uses the ability he will use the RNG to determine which of the numbers 1-4 has his real body inside so I will have to do the RNG under post actions first then edit my post content in after the number is determined. So say I roll 3 then the 3rd shikigami will always carry Lee's real body inside until it is attacked by the foe which will disable the ability and destroy all remaining shikigami (if there are any). The next time I use it I'll have to reroll again at the start of the ability to determine which number is the real body. I hope that helps clarify it better.

I edited the border for kido and also removed Furikkā from the HoHo list.
PostPosted: Sun May 17, 2015 8:30 am


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It will be different each time I use the ability. When Lee uses the ability he will use the RNG to determine which of the numbers 1-4 has his real body inside so I will have to do the RNG under post actions first then edit my post content in after the number is determined. So say I roll 3 then the 3rd shikigami will always carry Lee's real body inside until it is attacked by the foe which will disable the ability and destroy all remaining shikigami (if there are any). The next time I use it I'll have to reroll again at the start of the ability to determine which number is the real body. I hope that helps clarify it better.

I edited the border for kido and also removed Furikkā from the HoHo list.


I understand that, I only mentioned that you would need to mention it someone in the post, whether it is before or after. We just want to make it fair for others to fight against that. ^.^

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PostPosted: Sun May 17, 2015 8:37 am


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Anyhoo, this is approved.





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