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PostPosted: Sun Mar 29, 2015 8:30 am


Hello! Likylee here. I am a 17 year old artist. I like to do traditional and digital. I just wanted some feedback on my work. Also, do you think it would be worth it for me to open up a shop?

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 29, 2015 10:04 pm


i quite like the tiger even though it doesnt look finished
the faces though need a few touch ups...
the first face (i think it was picture 3) looks sorta half human half avatar (the nose and eyes keep reminding me of them blue people from the movie avatar) haha and the elf girls mouth/lower jaw dont suit the rest of the face.
i guess the best was to put it is they all look good but they look like you have tried to combine 2 faces into 1 (most obvious in the 2 coloured pictures the black and white 1 sorta works).
as for the dinosaur it looks awesome all it needs is some colour.
also are the 5 little pictures below the tiger picture digital or paint (they look digital to me haha)
sorry if this has come across like im just picking on all the areas you have stuffed up on but i couldnt think of another way to type it haha

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 29, 2015 10:10 pm


also i just noticed the background in picture 5 it suits the picture perfectly i reckon but im not quite sure what the colours that have been slapped on it are for (green, yellow, red) im asuming its light coming from where the picture was "TAKEN" haha which if it is the yellow and green work well they sorta have a party lights look but the red to me just looks like blood stains on the wall.
PostPosted: Mon Mar 30, 2015 7:55 am


Monkie_Oner
i quite like the tiger even though it doesnt look finished
the faces though need a few touch ups...
the first face (i think it was picture 3) looks sorta half human half avatar (the nose and eyes keep reminding me of them blue people from the movie avatar) haha and the elf girls mouth/lower jaw dont suit the rest of the face.
i guess the best was to put it is they all look good but they look like you have tried to combine 2 faces into 1 (most obvious in the 2 coloured pictures the black and white 1 sorta works).
as for the dinosaur it looks awesome all it needs is some colour.
also are the 5 little pictures below the tiger picture digital or paint (they look digital to me haha)
sorry if this has come across like im just picking on all the areas you have stuffed up on but i couldnt think of another way to type it haha


Thank you! The tiger face was a 10 min doodle I did at the end of a class. Maybe I will work on it some more <3 And most of the faces were just pratice sketches but what you said does help direct me. I do need to work on noses. And in general faces. But I did not use a ref for the faces so I am guessing theyd improve greatly with one! And yes, the collage was digital.

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