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sabreworg
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 16, 2015 3:37 pm


{{Forgive me, I was just offset by the fact that I have nothing but villains. I want to make a hero type as well so here he is.}}

Username: Sabreworg
Name: Marcus Berathorn
Nickname(?): The Holy Flame
Gender: Male
Age: Young 25
Sexuality: Straight
Kingdom that you call home: Lux
Element(s): Light and Fire


Appearance:
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Height: 6'0"
Weight: 200
Hair Color: Golden Blonde
Eye Color: Bright Blue
Skin Color: Fair
Extra Information on Appearance: His right arm is always covered.
If Marked, where is the mark? (You may also provide a picture if you want): Right arm is marked, whole arm has white flames along starting from his wrist up to his right shoulder blade.


Family/friend(s)/allies with: Family is dead/ technically the queen/ Lux
History: Marcus didnt start with a nice life. His family were simple farmer folk who had a meager living when he was born. Seeing the mark upon his arm caused his father to go into a rage, but his mother loved him all the same. As Marcus grew, he too learned the skills of a farmer and his father even came to accept him a little bit. But one day while tilling the fields they were struck by Ignis soldiers. It started with the fields, they lit on fire and burned so brightly that the night seemed like day. By the time Marcus had roused himself, it was now the house on fire. Marcus's father took him out of the house, his mother was already dead though his father didnt tell him that. When they got far enough away, his father hid him in an alcove and told him dont leave until morning. Marcus was scared but accepted it as his father left. Little did he know that his father was to be a decoy to get them away.
Alone and now homeless Marcus wandered. He was now smart enough to keep his arm hidden, but the times it was found out he was beaten and cut. He was robbed and near death when he saw the queen of Lux at the time. She was being pursued and was surrounded by Ignis forces. Marcus, while he was hurt had always been pure of heart. So taking a sword from a fallen soldier he charged at the men. He caught the first one unaware, but the others eagerly attacked him. Marcus being young and untrained was easily enough beaten back. But he had had enough, and that was when his power fully manifested. The sword as well as his body lit with white flames as power flowed into him. This set them back as they werent expecting it, nor were they expecting the vicious attack the child released against them. The queens soldiers were rallied and they helped fight them off. But as they were beaten back, they moved to dispatch Marcus. The Queen demanded to know what they were doing and they told her simply taking out the marked trash. The Queen looked upon Marcus with a soft expression and had her soldiers leave him alone, she then took him in. He has faced many more hardships from guards and such but he also devoted his service entirely to the Queen. To live for her, to die for her, to slay her enemies should they arise. And any Queen that shall rise will be under his protection as long as he is able to hold a sword. Overtime he has garnered the respect of others and even earned his nickname The Holy Flame, due to the nature of his power. Light mixed with Fire.
Personality: Marcus is warm and very friendly, going out of his way to help others and willing to defend the weak. Though he holds a darker side, he keeps it at bay easily enough.


Weapon(s): (optional) A Fire forged greatsword
Strengths: Fast, strong and capable with the blade, also his power over fire and light
Weaknesses: Women, its hard for him to attack a woman and he becomes a nervous wreck if flirted with enough.
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You are signing this as an agreement, I .. sabreworg promise to try my best not to OP, God Mod, Autohit, or anything else that would break the rules of Gaia and the guild. I also understand that what the Captain and her VCs say is law. Any trouble, especially after given any warnings, may result in being kicked from the guild. I am here to have fun, so after acceptance.. I'm going to unleash the awesomeness that is my character!


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PostPosted: Fri Mar 20, 2015 8:35 am


sabreworg

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Am surprised am not quoted here.

Anyway, I'll need to discuss your profile with Dreamatic, you should probably send her a PM too since, this is a character closely related to the queen/her character before I can give it an approval.

Your story seems plausible enough, though I must admit the effect with this will raise suspicions with the queen sparing someone who is the very taboo of this kingdom.

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sabreworg
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 20, 2015 3:38 pm


Reishella

I am surprised and ashamed that I havent quoted you. I must have missed something. Either way I have written a pm to Dreamatic to ask her if its alright with her and to inform her that I made a character. If it isnt workable I will delete this char without a problem...I am sorry to...irritate you.
PostPosted: Fri Mar 20, 2015 4:21 pm


Reishella
sabreworg



My apologies for not being hasty in my reply here, I was on Gaia from my phone up until now so typing a proper response would have been harder. But I actually really like the back story the character has and I think it fits in really well with my character's history too. Although the only thing is even if she did order them back, she probably wouldn't have done so in an angry way, since she isn't really the type to get angered easily.

I am aware that it may arise suspicions, but if he has proven as a loyal and valiant warrior to the kingdom which is sounds like from the description, then those particular suspicions may perhaps have been lessened. Since fire and light are both close enough, it does seem possible to me that if the people of Lux did hear the story and suspicions started arising, that the story could be managed by Syrena, only so it seems as though he used only light powers instead of flames.

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 21, 2015 10:06 am


Dreamatic

Although the only thing is even if she did order them back, she probably wouldn't have done so in an angry way, since she isn't really the type to get angered easily.


This, add this slight change and we should be good.
PostPosted: Sat Mar 21, 2015 8:12 pm


Reishella


Done and done. ^^

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 22, 2015 9:44 am


sabreworg
Reishella

I am surprised and ashamed that I havent quoted you. I must have missed something. Either way I have written a pm to Dreamatic to ask her if its alright with her and to inform her that I made a character. If it isnt workable I will delete this char without a problem...I am sorry to...irritate you.


Dot. Dot. Dot. Yup. I see what happened here. You used the old skeleton. XD We changed the skeleton to quote our new staff. HAha, the information is still the same, but the alerting is different. Thank you Reishella for handling another profile. I was replying on my phone, but it obviously didn't go well. You suggested exactly as I would. ^-^ Saki would be so proud of you!
PostPosted: Sun Mar 22, 2015 9:46 am


sabreworg
Reishella


Done and done. ^^


The change has been accepted. She sounds like her character now. XD Also, you got acceptance from Dream. We are all good then. Have fun!

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