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PostPosted: Sun Mar 15, 2015 8:15 am



~~~~~~~~~~~~JAY XERATOR~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Personal Stuff

Name: Jay Xerator
Age: 17
Gender: Boy
Race: Human
Height: 6 feet tall
Weight: Whatever a healthy weight is for a 17 year old at 6 feet. (I dislike trying to find out a good weight.)
Eye Color: Blue... like, a light blue.
Hair Color: A neon blue? Probably the right colour choice.
Extras: The image is of him before his incident. You’ll know what I mean...

About Me

Favorite Color: Cyan
Weapon of Choice: Rectification
A large robotic arm that takes the place of Jay’s left arm, with a backpack-like attachment on the back. Whilst it is meant to be for combat use only, the claws can retract to the joints of the fingers. The claws are approximately the same size as a humanoid middle finger. The entire arm reaches down to around the knee-thigh area.
Can transform his hand into an .50 BMG cannon, with a blast shield near the front that at best, covers his shoulder and at worst his hand area. He can store up to 36 .50 BMG rounds in his backpack attachment. The recoil is powerful enough for minor adjustments in midair but not powerful enough to launch him thanks in part to recoil reduction and also due to the fact it isn't a giant cannon.
Auras:
Semblances: Electric Teleportation Jay siphons off electricity from his general environment and uses it in order to teleport to another location using electrical power cables. The greater the amount of energy or the higher the amperage, the greater the space teleported. E.g. Jay can teleport further and quicker using external power lines due to their greater amperage, but can teleport the same distance siphoning energy for longer.
This ability takes a toll on his nervous system however, with noticeable symptoms beginning at distances greater than or cumulative to 0.8 miles, and distances greater than a mile or cumulative to, will cause Rectification to malfunction. Teleportation greater than 1.5 miles can turn him comatose. Any damage to the nervous system will slow him down, as well as reaction speed.

Likes: Coca Cola, video games, fighting, Monopoly
Dislikes: Pepsi, other cola derivatives, for some reason Cluedo, attempting to flirt
Bio Jay was an aspiring Hunter to be, just like you. But then when he got too adventurous, after his parents were killed by unknown means, a Grimm lopped off his arm and nearly killed him. Not fun.
Before all that though, he was a happy fun kid, always joking around and always messing with his Weapon. He even managed to rig a fusion reactor for ammunition, although after a while he got tired of it and feared it might cause problems later on, deigning to leave it for bigger designs. Not many kids could do that though... could they? Eh.
His family were alright – he never learned what had happened to his sister... – and were rather supportive which surprised him. He ended up passing his school and moving on, despite his disability. He reworked his turret and turned it into an arm he could use as a fully functioning weapon.
He wouldn’t be stopped from obliterating the Grimm. Although he did also promise not to let such a promise consume his life...

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 15, 2015 8:28 am


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Personal oppinon. it sounds like your giving him alot of power with hardly any drawbacks. also claw arm that changes into a 80mm Tank cannon is a bit strange. i will let PairOSocks or Crystanis decide that.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 15, 2015 8:47 am


Meta's right. That semblance is WAY to powerful for such a small drawback even if you couldn't really use it as you only put one semblance. Also, I'm gonna have to say infinite tank shells are a bit op as well. I like the idea behind it, but hot damn, if you went against students they'd get obliterated.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 15, 2015 9:47 am


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Always tends to be a habit of mine to go overboard, heh... Sorry about that.
So change the second form to something a lot weaker than an 80mm cannon, a lesser Semblance (although considering it's his only Semblance it's meant for team use primarily) and place a limit on tank shells. Alrighty then. Time to get to work.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 15, 2015 10:16 am


The Assassin of Chaos
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Always tends to be a habit of mine to go overboard, heh... Sorry about that.
So change the second form to something a lot weaker than an 80mm cannon, a lesser Semblance (although considering it's his only Semblance it's meant for team use primarily) and place a limit on tank shells. Alrighty then. Time to get to work.

i noticed you did put a limit but the thing is a M1 Abrams has an 80mm cannon and when it fires it litteraly rocks the tank you only have your arm and backpack. i see potental of dismemberment by using it. i might sgest a 10-20mm gatling the packpack is still there and you have limited amunition but the recoil is much less. just a sugestion.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 15, 2015 2:38 pm


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Always tends to be a habit of mine to go overboard, heh... Sorry about that.
So change the second form to something a lot weaker than an 80mm cannon, a lesser Semblance (although considering it's his only Semblance it's meant for team use primarily) and place a limit on tank shells. Alrighty then. Time to get to work.

i noticed you did put a limit but the thing is a M1 Abrams has an 80mm cannon and when it fires it litteraly rocks the tank you only have your arm and backpack. i see potental of dismemberment by using it. i might sgest a 10-20mm gatling the packpack is still there and you have limited amunition but the recoil is much less. just a sugestion.



I pretty much thought of that instantly. The comparison of energy between the two alone though. xD
It's still a 20mm firearm, but it's still a cannon. It has a blast shield now for defensive capability and potentially for a sniper situation.
Also changed the Semblance.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 15, 2015 2:52 pm


ok the gun is better. but the ability...i feel needs looking into. your focused on Electrcity for teleportation. that means in an area with no power of any kind he cant use it. unless its a thunder storm. but that would most likely kill him. IDK
PostPosted: Mon Mar 16, 2015 3:22 pm


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ok the gun is better. but the ability...i feel needs looking into. your focused on Electrcity for teleportation. that means in an area with no power of any kind he cant use it. unless its a thunder storm. but that would most likely kill him. IDK



It's a major drawback but given the fact it's teleportation, wouldn't you consider it worth it?

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 16, 2015 3:36 pm


The Assassin of Chaos
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ok the gun is better. but the ability...i feel needs looking into. your focused on Electrcity for teleportation. that means in an area with no power of any kind he cant use it. unless its a thunder storm. but that would most likely kill him. IDK



It's a major drawback but given the fact it's teleportation, wouldn't you consider it worth it?


hard to say...it depends on how its used. but otherwise i dont see much issue for it to be broken.
PostPosted: Mon Mar 16, 2015 3:41 pm


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ok the gun is better. but the ability...i feel needs looking into. your focused on Electrcity for teleportation. that means in an area with no power of any kind he cant use it. unless its a thunder storm. but that would most likely kill him. IDK



It's a major drawback but given the fact it's teleportation, wouldn't you consider it worth it?


hard to say...it depends on how its used. but otherwise i dont see much issue for it to be broken.



Also, even if Jay were to spam it, his nervous system would eventually give up and send him into a coma. Something to keep in mind.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 16, 2015 4:04 pm


like i said it depends on how you RP it. most people give themselves a downside but forget to actual RP with it.
PostPosted: Wed Mar 18, 2015 1:32 pm


DaMetaEX
like i said it depends on how you RP it. most people give themselves a downside but forget to actual RP with it.



I'll keep it in mind. Normally in combat, I bring up profiles anyway so I don't forget anything. That, or I can make a post layout on BetterGaia with all the things on there. (like the Weapon and the Semblances.)

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 22, 2015 12:56 pm


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like i said it depends on how you RP it. most people give themselves a downside but forget to actual RP with it.


Sooo... should... I... change it...?
PostPosted: Sun Mar 22, 2015 1:05 pm


ask crystanis
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 22, 2015 1:27 pm


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Is my profile OK to RP with, or...?
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