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 Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 11:22 am
Username: DaMetaEX Name: Skye Autumn Nickname(?): Phantom Gender: Female Age: 18 Sexuality: Bi-Curious Kingdom that you call home: Nocte Element(s): shadow, Lux Appearance:  Height: 6"5' Weight: 120 lbs Hair Color: silver Eye Color: emerald Skin Color: white Extra Information on Appearance: If Marked, where is the mark? (You may also provide a picture if you want): inner thigh and has gone unnoticed. Family/friend(s)/allies with: Family History: Skye was born into a poor family. She had to work most of her life on the farm. The farm she lived on was outside the town walls, and would constantly be attacked. if it wasn't for her Father, and Grandfather they would have lost there farm years ago. when she became 8 years old her grandfather passed away. Her father decided to start training her as her grandfather's last request. During her training she had gotten a grasp of her one of her abilities. Her power would soon earn her the nickname Phantom. Her power could summon up a strong mist so strong that light itself cant penetrate it. She continues her training till her 18th birthday where everything went wrong. a small rouge group of Lux bandits attacked there farm. Skye and her father did there best to kill teh bandits, but the damage was done. The farm was completely destroyed nothing left but ruined crops and splinters. Her family was alive,but forced to live in the town unable to pay for a new farm. Skye works night and day as a mercenary in an attempt to give her family the farm back, And has a deep hatred for anyone with Lux powers because of what hapened. Personality: Strong, Free spirited Weapon(s): (optional) Family sacred sword (was enchanted back when her grandfather used to wield it) Strengths: observent, Silent Weaknesses: a bit of a temperment when it comes to people with Lux ablities, Fear of Death, Fear of spiders. Additional Information: The Family Sacred Sword was enchanted on a Blood Moon the wielder can offer a small amount of blood and the sword will be surrounded in a powerful aura giving the blade an even sharper edge. (ability can be used only during night. a small offering of blood must be given. the sword will then be able to slice through half inch steel armor plating as if it was leather. She has the ability use Lux powers but due to her hatred she is unaware of it.
You are signing this as an agreement, I .. DaMetaEX promise to try my best not to OP, God Mod, Autohit, or anything else that would break the rules of Gaia and the guild. I also understand that what the Captain and her VCs say is law. Any trouble, especially after given any warnings, may result in being kicked from the guild. I am here to have fun, so after acceptance.. I'm going to unleash the awesomeness that is my character! All staff please let the Captain know when you accept someone. Thank you!
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Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2015 3:26 am
While not so important, you might want to consider correcting your grammar, mostly around your history portion. Rectify your family/friends/allies, you ACTUALLY have them on your history. Sword enchantment is rather redundant for a Nocte; all Nocte possess the ability of night vision, with possible exception to marked, unless this sword can be passed on someone who is not Nocte, Your profile technically is sound and passable but you might be undermining yourself some things.
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Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2015 7:49 am
Reishella While not so important, you might want to consider correcting your grammar, mostly around your history portion. Rectify your family/friends/allies, you ACTUALLY have them on your history. Sword enchantment is rather redundant for a Nocte; all Nocte possess the ability of night vision, with possible exception to marked, unless this sword can be passed on someone who is not Nocte, Your profile technically is sound and passable but you might be undermining yourself some things. ok i made tweeks is that better?
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Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2015 10:05 am
Quote: If Marked, where is the mark? (You may also provide a picture if you want): inner thigh and has gone unnoticed. I just noticed recently you're actually making a Marked character. and here is my slight confusion. Are you actually making a marked character? Marked are people with 2 elements. You currently only specializing in only one but you do seem to have made you char with the ☻ indent, so either change to remove the indent (if you're a single element wielder) or your make your elements two. After that your profile should be okay.
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Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2015 11:09 am
Reishella Quote: If Marked, where is the mark? (You may also provide a picture if you want): inner thigh and has gone unnoticed. I just noticed recently you're actually making a Marked character. and here is my slight confusion. Are you actually making a marked character? Marked are people with 2 elements. You currently only specializing in only one but you do seem to have made you char with the ☻ indent, so either change to remove the indent (if you're a single element wielder) or your make your elements two. After that your profile should be okay. i realized that as well and i just went with it. but she is not aware of her mark as it was hidden on her inner thigh and it has gone unnoticed. as she is unaware of her second power. i was thinking of making it Lux since she hates Lux she wouldn't be too eager to learn how to control it. unless the RPing makes her change her mind.
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Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2015 11:18 am
DaMetaEX i realized that as well and i just went with it. but she is not aware of her mark as it was hidden on her inner thigh and it has gone unnoticed. as she is unaware of her second power. i was thinking of making it Lux since she hates Lux she wouldn't be too eager to learn how to control it. unless the RPing makes her change her mind. Whether she is aware of her secondary power or not, or use it or not, please add the Element data for it; you can make the later happen anyway by acting it out of the actual roleplay or even add it with the additional information section that she is not aware of this. As of now it is only shadow, it needs to be mentioned in the profile nonetheless.
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Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2015 11:26 am
Reishella DaMetaEX i realized that as well and i just went with it. but she is not aware of her mark as it was hidden on her inner thigh and it has gone unnoticed. as she is unaware of her second power. i was thinking of making it Lux since she hates Lux she wouldn't be too eager to learn how to control it. unless the RPing makes her change her mind. Whether she is aware of her secondary power or not, or use it or not, please add the Element data for it; you can make the later happen anyway by acting it out of the actual roleplay or even add it with the additional information section that she is not aware of this. As of now it is only shadow, it needs to be mentioned in the profile nonetheless. alright i have made the tweeks. again.
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Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2015 11:34 am
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