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PostPosted: Tue Feb 10, 2015 2:11 pm


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Name: Mizuki Yukimura
Alias: Zuki or Tsuki
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Powers: Empathy, Photokinesis, Scrying
Aura: #FBCFCF pink, low frequency, #79BD9A teal
Appearance: Mizuki has grey eyes (#A7AFA4) that are in the monolid style. Her hair is pure black and straight. If left down it reaches her mid back, but she normally wears it up like this. She has straight bangs that come right above her eyes. Her skin is very pale, she burns easily if in the sun, and has grey freckles the color of her eyes dusted all over her body (the biggest clusters are on her shoulders/clavicle). She has a long torso and long limbs to match it, giving her a very slender body shape. She is a little on the tall side for her age, standing at 5'7", though she hopes not to grow any more. Her face is oval shapes and she normally has an easy going smile on her face. She likes to look cute in her clothing, rarely ever wearing jeans and only wearing sneakers if she is forced to do so. She loves dresses, and has gotten pretty good at wearing heels in the last few years thanks to her older sisters. She also has a love of tall socks. (here are some examples of outfits for her)

Personality:
polite

having or showing behavior that is respectful and considerate of other people
Mizuki was raised to be polite, especially to ones elders or those with authority over her. Please and thank yous are a must, as are little head bows when meeting someone for the first time. For the most part Mizuki is polite to everyone, even if teased about it. The only time she isn't polite is when she is extremely angry, and even then a few polite words might make an appearance. This trait has been taught to her from a young age, and she finds it very strange that not everyone is as polite as she is.
soft spoken
speaking or said with a gentle, quiet voice
Sometimes when she speaks you have to strain your ears to hear what Mizuki is saying. This is especially true when she is feeling embarrassed or around new people. As she gets to know the people she is with she will get a little louder, but even then her voice is typically much quieter then most people. Her voice also doesn't really have a shape edge to it, even when she is angered. It's something she doesn't like very much, especially since when she's mad she doesn't really sound like it.
easily pleased
to be able to be pleased or made happy easily
It doesn't take much to make Mizuki happy. A good book, sweets, interesting conversation, coloring pages, just about anything can bring a smile to her face. It doesn't take much effort to keep her happy. And once she is in a good mood it takes a lot to bring her out of it.
obsessive
a person who is affected by an obsession
When Mizuki takes a liking to something she often goes over board with it. She doesn't seem to just like something, often she loves it. Sailor Moon would have to be her prime example, since although she isn't a child anymore she still has many memorabilia and even dresses like Sailor Moon every Halloween. Although she has yet to form a crush, it's very likely she will become obsessed with the person when she does.
sheltered
protected from difficulties or unpleasant realities
Until her mother died nothing bad had ever happened to Mizuki. She lived a sheltered and privileged life, as did many of the people that she knew. To her the world was a wonderful and safe place where you could do pretty much whatever you wanted. Although after her mother died she realized that the world wasn't perfect her father has made sure that she is still as sheltered from the evils of the world as possible.

Likes:
The moon
Coloring books
Books
Reading
Sailor Moon
Sweets
Dislikes:
Scary masks
Pranks
Rudeness
Fire
Sickness
Math
Studying

History: Jiro Yukimura and Chikako Yukimura met when they were in lower secondary school. They were paired for a project and became fast friends. As they grew their friendship did as well, with Chikako harboring a crush on Jiro for some time. It wasn't until their last year of upper secondary school that he asked her out, much to her delight. The two of them dated for a while and eventually got married. A few years after their wedding they had their first daughter, Seiko. A year later Chikako was pregnant again with twins Akio and Taro. The couple were done with having children, happy at the size their family was at, but accidentally got pregnant with Mizuki four years later.

Still the family was happy. Her father worked as a CEO for a business firm and made enough money that her mother was able to be a stay at home mom. Things were pretty much perfectly normally growing up. Occasionally she would feel things that other people did, but when she told her mother about these occasions her mother just chalked it up to her being an empathetic person and urged her not to worry about it. At twelve things began to change for Mizuki. Her mother was diagnosed with cancer. Within a few months she went from being upbeat and always on the move to being in bed most of the time. Her siblings and her tried to make things easy for her mother and do chores around the house, but it wasn't the same.

Two months after Mizuki turned thirteen her mother passed away. The family was distraught. Things slowly turned into chaos, and when her older sister Seiko left to America for college it only got worse. After a year of turmoil her father decided that he was going to move all of them to America. His job was expanding and he saw it as a good opportunity for his family to start all over.

Everything was still hard, but adjusting to life in America wasn't impossible. People found Mizuki nice and she joined a Sailor Moon fan club in her school. It was two years later during one of those meeting that she was extremely excited and caused a light bulb to exploded a light bulb. The room had gotten very bright, with the light bulb being the source, before it blew up. Luckily for her one of the other girls in the room happened to be the daughter of a psychonauts and she was alerted about Majesco Psychic Academy. After talking to her father about he agreed that it might be best for her to be around people like her.

Chikako means clever
Jiro means second son
Seiko means success, achievement 22 years old
Akio means bright boy 20 years old
Taro means strong boy 20 years old
Mizuki means beautiful moon
PostPosted: Sun Jul 05, 2015 1:26 pm


Name: Luna
Age: 2 years old
Aura: Yellow (#EDE574), Purple (#48004 cool
Species: Bombay Cat
Powers: Telepathy
Owner: Mizuki Yukimura

Appearance: Luna is an all black cat with a white mark on her forehead. Although Mizuki swears it looks like a crescent moon not everyone thinks so. She has blue eyes that always seemed to be closing. She's pretty average sized for a her breed.

Personality: Like most cats, Luna is a bit of a brat. She's prone to knocking over things or generally just doing whatever she wants. She doesn't listen very well when she doesn't want to, and is prone to just walking off or hissing when told she did something wrong. Although she does love Mizuki, and shows it quite often, she typically doesn't care much for other humans or animals. You have to be something special to get her attention, or have treats.

History: When the Yukimura family came to American Jiro thought it would be a good idea to allow his children to each get a pet. Although the twins got a snake and a dog, Mizuki didn't pick one. It wasn't until months later that she spotted a kitten on the street that looked like Luna from Sailor Moon that she got her pet. Although at first her father was hesitant about bringing a stray kitten into the house, Mizuki persisted and eventually he gave in. The two have been together ever since, with Mizuki taking Luna everywhere with her.

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 20, 2015 12:49 pm



          Hello! Well to start of I love Sailor Moon, and I love this character.

          I think you did good with her appearance, the only thing I would suggest is maybe put something about her posture. That's just for her, for when the artist draw her. Also I'm not sure if the outfits are appropriate for school, but that's more something I think the staff would let you know about. They are super cute though. My suggestion would be to add some more outfits that are school appropriate, but like I said that's more for the staff to say because I'm not sure.

          Although I like the style you have the personality written out in, I think it would be better in paragraph form. Just that way allows the reader to see how the character traits go together. But that's a personal choice. I think you should talk more about sheltered and what that means. Is she allowed to watch movies/TV shows with gore? Has she never seen a bully? Does she not watch the news and know of the bad things going on in the world? I'd like to know what kind of things make her angry, what things pull down her politeness or make her less soft spoken. Although you have obsession and sheltered there I mostly see positives in her. Maybe add something that makes her less perfect seeming?

          As for her history I think you should add Luna into it. Just so it doesn't look like you just threw Luna's profile in to have a pet. I don't know how Mizuki feels about her, or if she even finds her important? Why did she bring her to camp? Also how does her siblings and father feel about her going to camp? Are any of them jealous, scared? What do they think about her powers? What about her friends from school? Has she told them anything? Do they know that she has powers (aside from the girl who's mother told her about the school). Does she have a best friend, either from Japan or in America?

          As for Luna maybe a little more for her personality, but other then that she looks good!

          Hope this is helpful!
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