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PostPosted: Sun Feb 08, 2015 8:02 pm


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Name: Queen Syrena Avalon of Lux
Nickname: Syrena, Rena to those who knew her closely, though if for whatever reason she uses a disguise then she goes by an alternate name
Gender: Female
Age: 24
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Kingdom that you call home: The Kingdom of Lux
Element(s): Light and Water
Height: 5'3
Weight: 100 lbs
Hair Color: A light shade of blonde, appears golden in the sunlight but silvery in the moonlight
Eye Color: Cerulean blue
Skin Color: Porcelain
Extra Information on Appearance (Mark): Syrena's mark is located on the back of her neck, though because of this she has used her long hair to hide it for many years. It is shaped of both the sun and moon.
Family/friend(s)/allies with: The rest of her Kingdom, however her adviser Lilith is the only one who knows of the fact that she is Marked

History: Syrena was the first born child to the King. She had never known her real mother. Her mother was actually a woman from another Kingdom, whom the King had fallen in love with during his travels. However soon after having Syrena in secrecy, she knew she had to return back to the duties of her own Kingdom, and death befell her during battle. It was then that with no other choice, the King had his most trusted adviser, Lilith, go to get Syrena to bring her back to the Kingdom of Lux. The King agreed to raise her on his own.

Upon Syrena's arrival, the Kingdom had many questions. However, the King was able to answer them all with a single lie. He told the people of Lux that Syrena's mother was a commoner who lived among them, and that shortly after Syrena's birth, she had fallen ill and passed away. Though this side of the story was still somewhat looked down upon due to the fact that it involved her mother being a commoner, and her father a royal, the King knew that he would be overthrown if he told the truth. It was not long after, that the King soon discovered the mark on the back of Syrena's neck.

The King knew how the people of Lux felt about those who were Marked, and over the years, he had had felt the same, until now. Since Syrena was his child, he loved her and wanted to protect her. The King could not bear the thought of sending her away, or killing her like the people of Lux had done to those who were Marked for so many years. Instead, the King bound Syrena's life to one of secrecy. He did not allow her to leave the castle walls, and he was careful to make sure that she always hid her mark. The King even hid this from all his staff, all except for his adviser, the woman who had brought Syrena to the castle in the first place. Syrena was to spend her entire childhood living alone in a separate tower of the castle, which only the King and his adviser had access to. As the years passed, eventually the talk of Syrena's existence throughout the Kingdom faded so that it was all but a distant memory.

Since Syrena was Marked, although the King loved her dearly, he knew that because of this she would not be able to reign as Queen after him. A year after Syrena was born, the King married another woman from Lux and had a second child, who was named Emillia. For the following years after, Syrena did not meet her half sister or her stepmother, who was now Queen of Lux. The Queen knew of Syrena's back story due to the fact that the King had told it to her, but because Syrena's mother was someone else, the Queen had no interest in meeting Syrena. While Emillia spent time receiving lessons from the best of scholars that the Kingdom had to offer, training to become the next Queen of Lux, Syrena spent her time learning from the many books that were in the tower. While Syrena read about the history of the Kingdom, it soon became clear to her why her father had raised her in secrecy. Syrena now knew how the rest of the Kingdom felt about those who were Marked, and why she had to keep that a secret, something that she continued to do for all the years of her life.

Once Emillia turned seventeen, the King knew that there was one more year until she was to become the future Queen, since he was beginning to grow old. It was decided that as soon as Emillia turned eighteen, she would become the new Queen of Lux. However over the years of knowing Emillia, the King also knew of her greed and her tremendous lust for power, her ambitions that she sometimes acted upon without thinking them through. Deep down, the King knew that Emillia would not be a good leader to the Kingdom, and so he was faced to make another decision.

After spending time discussing with his adviser, it was clear to both of them that Syrena would be the right choice as Queen for the Kingdom of Lux, due to her logical and compassionate nature. Syrena agreed to the position, though she was very much aware of the fact that now it would be even more crucial for her to keep her mark a secret, something that she had already grown accustomed to doing for the years of her life. Emillia did not take the news of the fact that Syrena was to become Queen lightly. Just as the King had expected, Emillia was completely enraged.

That night, Emillia's greed for power reached a new level. In her vengeance, she murdered both the King and Queen, and attempted to do the same to Syrena. After the news spread through the rest of Lux, since Syrena was the rightful heir to the throne, she was now forced to make a choice---Either Emillia could be put to death for her actions, or exiled. Syrena made the choice to spare her life and send her into exile. Later that day, Syrena was crowned as the new Queen of Lux. She continues to keep her mark a secret, though as Queen, she hopes to one day be able to change the attitude that the people of Lux have towards those who are Marked.



Weapon(s): Her most commonly used weapon is a bow and arrows, which are enhanced with the energy of light. During the daytime, these arrows glow golden with the energy from sunlight, but during nighttime they glow silver and are instead enhanced with energy from the moonlight. Whenever Syrena is near water, she can shift the form of her bow into a trident. She also either carries either a sword on her or several daggers.

Strengths: Syrena is constantly aware of her surroundings and is good at gaining new information, as well as creating strategies. She is very strong willed and doesn't let the opinions of others get to her. Over time she has learned to be able to adapt to almost any situation. Syrena is also very swift on her feet, but is even more swift when she uses her wings that are summoned by the energy of light, which can enable her to fly. Due to her control over the elements of both water and light, she is an expert healer.

Weaknesses: Though Syrena is very logical, due to her kind nature, she may sometimes show mercy to those who wouldn't hesitate to kill her. Her mark is also something she has always kept a secret from the rest of the Kingdom, and so she does not use her powers regarding elemental control over water unless it is absolutely necessary.

Additional Information: By using the energy of the light, Syrena can make a pair of wings materialize from her back, which allow her to fly. During the daytime, her light based powers come from the sunlight, but during nighttime they come from the moonlight. Also, as Queen reigning over a Kingdom who hates those who are Marked, this has been something that Syrena has always kept hidden.



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PostPosted: Sun Feb 08, 2015 9:54 pm


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Fasanating! I don't see much problem here... The Lux people are strongly against the marked, having a marked Queen will result in many people looking at her in distaste, some men might find it shamefully for a woman to ruling alone. But I can see her holding her head high and proving many of them wrong.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 08, 2015 11:11 pm


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Thank you! In fact that's part of the reason I had chosen to make her marked in the first place. (Even though naturally her character usually tries hiding that from those in her kingdom), I felt that it would help add more depth to her character and the RP itself.
PostPosted: Mon Feb 09, 2015 1:27 am


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Some things that need clarification and edits

If she is a marked you should follow the same template for marked characters, including the indent to your character name (title) and a tattoo around her body.

If people of her kingdom have or have not yet realized she is a marked, (and were talking about a kingdom that really hates or at least forbids them like the plague at that!), it should be indicated clearly so in your history as this will impact how your citizens and anyone close to her feel about her presence and willingness. I imagine there is at least one supportive character (a best friend or such) though because this is probably the worst place a Marked has to be and endure living in, otherwise she must have incredible will to endure that stress and isolation as if her sister alone plotting some revenge scheme in the dark (pun unintended) isn't bad enough razz .

Also, usually marked are two parents of a single element but in this case you have siblings that suggests THREE elements. I'm not sure if that's a real problem though, just curious about the parents even more, you might wanna elaborate that part more in the history. The best I can imagine is one of the parents is at least a marked, yet we come again to the aforementioned problem I said earlier about Marked presence in the kingdom from one of the parents side.

Otherwise I like the uniqueness of this character, she is the first marked royal I've seen so far but I hope there's more to her than that in the actual RP.

Btw, it would probably also help to cut back the history into paragraphs (5 sentences minimum at least) because a wall of text can be very hard to read when referring to this profile.

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 09, 2015 7:12 am


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Thank you so much for taking the time to alert me of all this, my apologies for having not done that to begin with. I will be sure to make all the appropriate changes as needed, and I will completely rewrite her history. I'll notify you via PM if that is alright, once I have finished making all the changes.
PostPosted: Mon Feb 09, 2015 10:43 am


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Probably noob of me to ask but given the current events, I want to be sure, may as well be about Lux magic in general. Does she have any holy powers? I can be certain Aqua has at least the church. It doesn't have to be in profile just clarification.

Btw, being a royal is not just a matter ruling your kingdom, there is also political relations. I'll give you a straight heads up and say Nocte is your opposing kingdom (lol teh irony of this). You might also wanna go voer and check the other royal profiles to achieve this and see if you want edit a bit more detail or not.

Ignis sees you as an ally but they are also the same with Nocte.

Whether you personally know the other royals and have good/bad/or what nots is up to you. Oh on a personal note, you know the true identity of the Fire king (your dad might had told you about this). I did mention clearly he (Houjin the fire king) knows the king of lux but he may not yet have realized the king's passing yet.

The profile is very sound on its own though so I really have no qualms.

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 09, 2015 7:41 pm


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Good job, Reishella. biggrin You are also able to accept profiles now. Your checking of profiles is spot on. razz

Also, please take into the account of Lux's history. Which, you did. XD Good job.. question is.. how does Lux treat the Marked now? Does she pretend to not like Marked so the kingdom lives normally and they are still rivals with Nocte? Nocte likes the Marked.

What of Emillia? Planning to create her as an RPC? Or leave her as NPC until you decide to make her an RPC.

Note: You can still use her as NPC (didn't want to be confusing)

I'm sure so long as you keep Lux as the description:

"The Lux Royal family and it's counsel are against the marked completely. If war is a must, they will not be afraid to take the chance."

...Is still in play. You should be fine.

With everything confirmed.

you are ACCEPTED
PostPosted: Tue Feb 10, 2015 8:08 am


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Go have fun biggrin Fair warning the Villain might be attacking soon now that we have a ruler of Lux.

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 10, 2015 3:19 pm


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Thank you both so much for taking the time to give me a more in depth explanation of the current politics situation going on. ^^ As for my character being one who is Marked, she is fully aware of the rest of Lux being against them. However, as their Queen, she sees it as her job to help serve the people and to be an effective leader regarding what their wants are, even if she does not personally agree with some of them. Basically, what Syrena hopes is to slowly over time be able to change their minds regarding the Marked, though she knows this will be a very in depth and lengthy process. But as for the time being, she pretends to not liked the Marked, since saying otherwise she knows would go against the will of her people and that she could risk being overthrown.

And as for holy powers, I don't think so. I'll look into that later on. Although she does have capabilities controlling water, she's never gotten the chance to practice them, due to her hiding the fact that she's one of the Marked.

Also, later on, I'll probably make a character as Emillia (or someone else could even play her if they wanted to). I don't know when the right time to incorporate her into the RP would be, but I figured maybe in the future it could make for an interesting sub-plot.

As for Nocte, that much I did know, and it makes sense too... Since Nocte is the darkness element and Lux is light. This week I've been pretty busy with classwork buuut.... All next week I don't have any classes, so I'll be sure to be posting a lot as her then. biggrin Once again, thank you both for taking the time to tell me all this.
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