xxc н a r a c т e ɾ • ι n f o r m a т ι o n xxxx • Name : Clement "Doc" Pickett xxxx • Gender : Male xxxx • Height : 2 meters xxxx • Weight : 84 kilograms xxxx • Appearance : xxxx • Personality : A strong, persevering type of person. He tends to be very calm and collected most of the time. He is known for his motivating words. xxxx • Biography : Clement grew up in a small town in rural West Virginia, his parents were often too busy to give him proper attention when she was growing up, so he often acted out to try and get them to notice him. This misbehavior reached a boiling point when he entered high school. His uncle, a prison guard, was called in to try and straighten him out. Through conversations with his uncle, he learned of his Quincy heritage. He also found his drive, an affirmation of self and purpose.
It was this drive that helped him power through one of the toughest training regimens in the world, Pararescue training. He was assigned to the United States Pararescue in 2003. He served for ten years, saving stranded pilots and helping out with humanitarian aid. Perhaps one of his most important jobs was helping protect the many pluses that the war created until they could be buried. He wholeheartedly believes that this alliance can and should work. Quincy cannot guide souls to the afterlife, and shinigami cannot be everywhere.
He has now retired from active military duty, due to his disposition towards the shinigami and previous experience saving lives led his superiors to assign him to Soul Society. His experience with healing and willingness to help others led him to try and join the 4th division. He hopes to show that both groups can work together.
xxa d d ι τ ι o n a l • ι n f o r m a т ι o n xxxx • Reiatsu Color : Subdued Green xxxx • Reiatsu Shape : A cross xxxx • Likes : xxxx • Chocolate xxxx • Coffee xxxx • Stout beers (clearly he has a thing for dark, bitter liquids) xxxx • Dislikes : xxxx • Feeling helpless xxxx • Light beers xxxx • Overly sweet things. xxxx • Relationships : xxxx • General George E. Pickett: distant relative (long deceased) xxxx • Donovan Pickett: Uncle xxxx •
xxr a n k ι n g • ι n f o r m a т ι o n xxxx • Reiatsu level : Capable (for now) xxxx • Rank : Bügeln (for now) xxxx • Etch : Zeta (for now) xxxx • Rank : Soldier (for now) xxxx • Squad : 4th xxxx • Squad ability : Soothing Songs Song can completely heal minor burns (Up to first degree) and bruises, relatively quickly. 30 (1 post count) seconds per wound. For major wounds, open wounds, burns, and broken bones and bruises, A song sung for 3 post counts/(3 minutes) will heal 25% of the injury, soothe mild anxiety and mild depression temporarily.
xxB ü h n e • E i n • ι n f o r m a т ι o n xxxx • Cross Name : Charlene xxxx • Cross Location : On a necklace. xxxx • Weapon Type :
A compact Carbine xxxx • Cross Appearance :
xxxx • Passive Ability: It is designed for short range battle, emphasizing rapid fire brought to bear quickly. The weapon is compact and easy to maneuver. It is capable of mounting a Seele Schneider on the barrel like a bayonet. Shots do not automatically hit. xxxx • TechniquesDo not type on this line xxxx • Semi-auto: up to 2 shots per post, however, twice the fire means half the time before fatigue sets in. Alternatively, he can launch a mounted Seele Schneider. xxxx • Plunging fire: the shot arcs, giving him the ability to shoot over walls and without line of sight. It is significantly less accurate than a normal shot. The range is limited to about 200 meters. xxxx • Burst fire: 5 shots in a post, Cooldown: 1 post.
(Not available at the moment, but still want it to be judged) B ü h n e • Z w e i xxxx • Name : Vera xxxx • Appearance :
A short Assault rifle with mounted shotgun. The shotgun can hold up to 3 ginto canisters. Reloading takes 2 posts to fully load, or 1 post to load a single canister to be ready by next post. xxxx • Techniques : Do not type on this line xxxx • Full auto: 20 shots in a single post. Cooldown: 3 posts, unable to fire normally during cooldown. xxxx • Drachenodem (Dragon’s Breath): A ginto canister provides the focus to concentrate the energy of Full Auto into a blast of flaming, liquid reiryoku. The technique is similar in function to a Shinigami's Shakkaho. The attack is fired out of the shotgun and consumes the canister. The flaming reiryoku can stick to a target, feeding off of a living target’s reiatsu and causing burns. These flames can be extinguished by starving the affected areas of reiatsu. Stop, drop and roll is also effective at stopping the fire, but takes more time. This technique requires 1 post to prepare (loading the launcher). Cooldown: 3 posts, restricted to single shots for 2 posts. xxxx • Granate (Grenade): The energy of Full Auto is concentrated into a ginto canister, which is subsequently launched out of the shotgun. It explodes on impact with a blast radius of 5 meters. The projectile travels in a ballistic arc with a maximum range of 100 meters. The technique requires 1 post to prepare (loading and aiming the launcher). The technique cannot be used immediately after Burst Fire. Cooldown: 4 posts, restricted to single shots for 2 posts.
xx A R C • xxxx•Rank: Zeta xxxx•Details: Don't know
xx G i n t o • xxxx• Wolke xxxx• Gritz xxxx• Stechen xxxx• Bombe
xx B l u t • xxxx•Rank: Zeta xxxx•Abilites: xxxx• Blut Artierie xxxx• Blut Verne
xx M o b i l i t ä t • xxxx•Rank: xxxx•Abilites: Hirenkyaku - God Step (Half Speed) Perron - Platform
xx e q u ι p м e n т • xxxx• Combat Lifesaver Kit, Similar in contents to the kit Doc used during his time in Pararescue, it is used to treat battlefield wounds on the spot, or stabilize a patient so they can be evacuated. xxxx• Combat webbing: Doc is well trained with the MOLLE webbing system, he prefers using it instead of the standard issue medical pouch. The webbing usually carries his medkits, ginto canisters and Seele Schneider. xxxx• Ginto Canister x16 xxxx• Seele Schneider
Posted: Sun Nov 02, 2014 5:57 pm
And lo, did the child of Lord Puffansnuff II raise his hands in supplication to the great judge for a second time.
Sorry. I got sick, and Gaia has refused to work for me lately. It takes me all day just to be able to load a few pages. I'm not sure if thats my net or gaia. but kage said she'll get it done if I can't manage. hopefully I can.
Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2014 4:01 pm
Lord Puffandsnuff III
✿✿✿Assessment✿✿✿
Okay sweety! Sorry it took so long. Life has stopped screwing with me so hard for a while, so I have tiome to do this!
Okay. Your bio looks great. The following things I'd like to see happen.
• Plunging fire: the shot arcs, giving him the ability to shoot over walls and without line of sight. It is significantly less accurate than a normal shot. The range is limited to about 300 meters.
After doing some researching, I found out most average compact combines can only shoot about 200 yards, which in actuality is 184.9 meters. The reason why I'm asking is because 300 meters is almost a 1000 feet, and yeah. ^^;
• Full auto: 20 shots in a single post. Cooldown: 2 posts, unable to fire normally during cooldown.
That is an awfully strong attack, for only 1 post cooldown... I'd like to see that raised to at least 3 post cool down with the same consequence.
• Drachenodem (Dragon’s Breath): A ginto canister provides the focus to concentrate the energy of Full Auto into a blast of flaming, liquid reiryoku. The blast reaches approximately 30 meters ahead, spreading about 3 meters wide at its widest. The attack is fired out of the shotgun and consumes the canister. The flaming reiryoku can stick to a target, feeding off of a living target’s reiatsu and causing burns. These flames can be extinguished by starving the affected areas of reiatsu. Stop, drop and roll is also effective at stopping the fire, but takes more time. This technique requires 1 post to prepare (loading the launcher). Generally he loads the launcher before battle, meaning that the first use can be brought to bear immediately. Cooldown: 3 posts, restricted to single shots for 2 posts.
I'm seeing the potential of God modding for this. If tis launched before battle, that means his arc would need to be summoned out before hand, and meaning to be prepared for this, he'd have to have his weapon out all the time. Which would be draining.
I hope you understand, but I'm going to have to ask you to get rid of this sentence.
• Granate (Grenade): The energy of Full Auto is concentrated into a ginto canister, which is subsequently launched. It explodes on impact with a blast radius of 5 meters. The projectile travels in a ballistic arc with a maximum range of 100 meters.
I feel this should be better explained. Right now, without knowing if its launched from the gun, or if its thrown, I'm tempted to ask you to lower the distance it can be launched from. Detail this up, so I can better judge this. heart
Okay sweety! Sorry it took so long. Life has stopped screwing with me so hard for a while, so I have tiome to do this!
Okay. Your bio looks great. The following things I'd like to see happen.
• Plunging fire: the shot arcs, giving him the ability to shoot over walls and without line of sight. It is significantly less accurate than a normal shot. The range is limited to about 300 meters.
After doing some researching, I found out most average compact combines can only shoot about 200 yards, which in actuality is 184.9 meters. The reason why I'm asking is because 300 meters is almost a 1000 feet, and yeah. ^^;
• Full auto: 20 shots in a single post. Cooldown: 2 posts, unable to fire normally during cooldown.
That is an awfully strong attack, for only 1 post cooldown... I'd like to see that raised to at least 3 post cool down with the same consequence.
• Drachenodem (Dragon’s Breath): A ginto canister provides the focus to concentrate the energy of Full Auto into a blast of flaming, liquid reiryoku. The blast reaches approximately 30 meters ahead, spreading about 3 meters wide at its widest. The attack is fired out of the shotgun and consumes the canister. The flaming reiryoku can stick to a target, feeding off of a living target’s reiatsu and causing burns. These flames can be extinguished by starving the affected areas of reiatsu. Stop, drop and roll is also effective at stopping the fire, but takes more time. This technique requires 1 post to prepare (loading the launcher). Generally he loads the launcher before battle, meaning that the first use can be brought to bear immediately. Cooldown: 3 posts, restricted to single shots for 2 posts.
I'm seeing the potential of God modding for this. If tis launched before battle, that means his arc would need to be summoned out before hand, and meaning to be prepared for this, he'd have to have his weapon out all the time. Which would be draining.
I hope you understand, but I'm going to have to ask you to get rid of this sentence.
• Granate (Grenade): The energy of Full Auto is concentrated into a ginto canister, which is subsequently launched. It explodes on impact with a blast radius of 5 meters. The projectile travels in a ballistic arc with a maximum range of 100 meters.
I feel this should be better explained. Right now, without knowing if its launched from the gun, or if its thrown, I'm tempted to ask you to lower the distance it can be launched from. Detail this up, so I can better judge this. heart
✿Status✿
Changes made:
Reduced range of Indirect fire to 200m.
Lengthened cooldown of Full Auto to requested 3 posts.
Revamped the description of Drachenodem, it is now basically a "reskinned" Shakkaho, with the added effect of sticking to the target and burning. By the time he has access to this technique, a Shinigami of comparable power has access to shakkaho.
Specified that Granate is launched from the underslung shotgun. Kept the range of 100 meters, which is roughly half the range of a conventional grenade launcher.
