xxc н a r a c т e ɾ • ι n f o r m a т ι o n xxxx • Name: Shiro Makigawa xxxx • Gender : Male xxxx • Height : 5'12" xxxx • Weight : 185 xxxx • Reiatsu Color : Blue xxxx • Reiatsu level : Strong xxxx • Appearance : He's medium build, brown eyes and short black spiky hair, wears black fingerless gloves, and carries a katana and short sword like samurai on his left hip. xxxx • Personality : He's a strong strategists on the battlefield, but tone it down when his captain or other high ranking officers to avoid label who questions authority, man of few words to friends and comrades, When his friends are in trouble then he would be the first to help, assistant swordsmanship instructor in the dojo, and great using various weapons and combat skills. He likes challenging different squad division to sparring to perfect his own combat abilities or help them their own. xxxx • Biography : He's an orphan raised at tan ancient temple with others orphans in the worst district trying to stay alive buy infighting between the residents. The temple specialize orphans having an education, combat and survival training, and weaponry. Then the Hollows attack them without warning almost eliminating everybody, but a Soul Reaper squadron intervenes to stop them. He was in awe with Misako's sword dance fighting, rushes toward her to defeat a Hollow attacking behind her by doing so activate his Soul Reaper's abilities his swords given by his master, and she adopted him into her family. She started him training for the Soul Reaper Academy.
xxo p τ ι o n a l • ι n f o r m a т ι o n xxxx • Reiatsu Shape : xxxx • Likes : xxxx • helping his friends xxxx • swordsmanship and combat training xxxx • photographer and drawing xxxx • Dislikes : xxxx • seafood except for fish xxxx • other Soul Reaper who are lazy to perfect their skills. xxxx • xxxx • Relationships : xxxx • Miyuki -younger sister(twin) xxxx • Rasa - younger brother(twin)
xxr a n k ι n g • ι n f o r m a т ι o n xxxx • Rank : Soldier xxxx • Squad : 11 xxxx • Squad ability : Adrenaline Rush
Adrenaline Rush boosts the users strength, speed, reflexes, and physical durability. This technique also has a few extra bonuses: animistic senses and insatiable blood lust. Each attribute is strengthened equally among different ranks, the duration and resulting exhaustion is different depending on rank of the user. Each boost will be fully detailed on how it affects your body.
Strength: The hyper adrenaline push allows you to go beyond your normal limits, from pushing a 200 pound boulder down a hill to pushing that same boulder uphill without being out of breath. Physical attacks have more force behind them, allowing normally strong defenses to be pushed through easier.
Speed: Your body seems to reach its intended destination faster. Sword slashes are faster, you move smoother through motions, and over all have more grace and speed. Cannot move faster than a Shunpo.
Reflexes: Your mind sees time move ever so slightly slower, allowing your body move reactive almost on instinct. Attacks that would usually be direct hits, now can be parried, or even dodged.
Durability: What you are unable to dodge, you will likely be able to shrug off physically speaking. Flames still burn your skin, acid still dissolves your flesh, but your skin, muscles, and bones seem and react more resiliently against physical assault.
Animistic senses: Your eyes see further, and sharper, and more clear. Every sound is crystalline and pure. You could smell and almost taste everything nearby, and you can feel the dirt beneath your feet, even through your shoes.
Insatiable blood lust: Activates your killer instinct, allowing you to spot where your enemies may strike before hand, and likely set your spiritual pressure on a far heavier level, smothering lower powered enemies, and possibly terrifying equal or even higher powered foes.
Adrenaline Rush can be used ONCE per battle. The duration of the ability, and resulting exhaustion from the physical exertion are dependent on your rank within Squad 11. The exhaustion weakens you equal to the boosts from activating the ability. So if you could cut through a 12 inch thick tree before, you could barely scratch it after.
Soldier: 3 posts, with a 2 post exhaustion
xxz a n p a k u т ō • ι n f o r m a т ι o n xxxx • Zanpakuto Name : Valkyrie xxxx • Inner World Appearance :
It is floating island overlooking lush vegetation, two waterfall falling off the island, other’s a castle on top of mountain, and a cave entrance in the middle.
xxxx • Spirit Appearance : She is 6' 1'', have long raven hair half way down her back, piercing brown eyes, has black short kimono with fishnet knitting in the middle, calf high leather boots, metal plated gloves, twin stiletto daggers in the small of her back, and sword strapped behind her back. xxxx • Sealed Appearance : It's a wind and thunder katana
xxr e l e a ѕ e • ι n f o r m a т ι o n ѕ н ι k a ι • xxxx • Release Type : Stand Alone xxxx • Release Phrase : The goddess of Heaven and Earth strike down thee enemies Valkyrie xxxx • Appearance :She has red bodysuit with black amour gauntlets and spiked shin guards on her boots, dark chest plates, and lower face steel mask. Included two holders for her light sabers on the hips.
twin light sabers that can joined together to create a Bo staff or use separately
xxxx • Instant Effect : the sky rumble with thunder and lightning in a distance. xxxx • Passive Ability : He have no control of the lightning and the lightning randomly xxxx • Techniques : Do not type on this line xxxx • Horizontal Lightning Slash- She leaps in the air with her light sabers over right shoulder to build up a massive charge then throws the charge toward her opponent down the middle of their body. The damages depends on levels of the enemy to leave them stunned or unconscious. It slashed every two post and rest period of two post.xxxx • Lightning Pulse Blast- Lightning Pulse Blast- the twin light sabers are joined together to form a Bo Staff that hold with both hands, it takes about five minutes to charge the blast and fired at the their opponent. It fired every three post with a two post rest period.xxxx • Rapid Lightning Pulse Strike- it is ultimate version of the Lightning Pulse Blast that fire three blasts instead of one. It takes about ten minutes to build up the charge then fired three blast in unison. It fired blast every four post and a three post rest period.xxxx • (officer only)
в a n k a ι • xxxx • Release Type : xxxx • Release Phrase : xxxx • Appearance : xxxx • Instant Effect : xxxx • Passive Ability : xxxx • Techniqued : Do not type on this line xxxx • xxxx • xxxx • (captain only)
xx e q u ι p м e n т • xxxx• Testing xxxx• Testing xxxx• Testing
xx k ι d ō • Copy And Paste The bolded dot - add in as many spells you get per rank •Furikkā (Flicker step) .
Hello, sorry that we didn't notice that this needed to be judged. ^.^; To us, it doesn't look completed.
So, the first few things that are needed, is that we need you to copy the coding at the bottom of this thread for this RPC. We have separators that are needed, along with coding to get rid of those x's.
For your Reiatsu level, you will need to join a squad, so that it matches your rank, as you are a new member. This will also help you find out your squad ability ^.^
For the appearance, can we get a little more detail? I'm having a hard time picturing what this guy looks like ^.^
I'm sorry, but I can not permit the ability to see the into other's Zanpakuto worlds, also we do not permit others to use other Zanpakuto spirits. When someone dies in this guild, their Zanpakuto spirit goes with them as they are linked.
Ok, in the Biography, who is Captain Misako? Currently squad 10 does not have a captain. Also, who are the Wandering Soul Reapers?
Ok, onto Zanpakuto release information. Really there is not a lot here. As I can see, he has no abilities to do anything but swing his sword. As far as I can see, this RPC doesn't really need a shikai or bankai, never mind constitute for a Constant Release.
When I can get some more detail on this profile, we can take another look at it ^.^
Starfighter34
Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2014 4:06 pm
Starfighter34
If this RPC has not been edited and completed by 11/24/14, it will be archived. After being archived it can be retrieved by request.
xxc н a r a c т e ɾ • ι n f o r m a т ι o n xxxx • Name : Shiro Makigawa xxxx • Gender : Male xxxx • Height : 5'12" xxxx • Weight : 210 xxxx • Reiatsu Color : xxxx • Reiatsu level : xxxx • Appearance : He's medium built, brown eyes and short black spiky hair, wears black fingerless gloves, and carries a katana and short sword like samurai on his left hip. xxxx • Personality : He's a strong strategists on the battlefield, but tone it down when his captain or other high ranking officers to avoid label who questions authority, man of few words to friends and comrades, When his friends are in trouble then he would be the first to help, assistant swordsmanship instructor in the dojo, and great using various weapons and combat skills. He likes challenging different squad division to sparring to perfect his own combat abilities or help them their own. xxxx • Biography : He's an orphan raised at tan ancient temple with others orphans in the worst district trying to stay alive buy infighting between the residents. The temple specialize orphans having an education, combat and survival training, and weaponry. Then the Hollows attack them without warning almost eliminating everybody, but a Soul Reaper squadron intervene to stop them. He was in awe with Misako's sword dance fighting, rushes toward her to defeat a Hollow attacking behind her by doing so activate his Soul Reaper's abilities his swords given by his master, and she adopted him into her family. She started him training for the Soul Reaper Academy. xxo p τ ι o n a l • ι n f o r m a т ι o n xxxx • Reiatsu Shape : xxxx • Likes : xxxx • helping his friends xxxx • swordsmanship and combat training xxxx • photographer and drawing xxxx • Dislikes : xxxx • seafood except for fish xxxx • other Soul Reaper who are lazy to perfect their skills. xxxx • xxxx • Relationships : xxxx • Misako - older sister xxxx • xxxx •
xxr a n k ι n g • ι n f o r m a т ι o n xxxx • Rank : xxxx • Squad : xxxx • Squad ability :
xxz a n p a k u т ō • ι n f o r m a т ι o n xxxx • Zanpakuto Name : Valkyrie xxxx[/color • []Inner World Appearance : xxxxhttps://i1369.photobucket.com/albums/ag225/wildstar38/veronica_lightsabers_by_jnetrocks-d4eopss_zps9a2d9bcc.jpg" />Sealed Appearance :
xxr e l e a ѕ e • ι n f o r m a т ι o n ѕ н ι k a ι • xxxx • Release Type : xxxx • Release Phrase : xxxx • Appearance : xxxx • Instant Effect : xxxx • Passive Ability : xxxx • Techniques : Do not type on this line xxxx • xxxx • xxxx • xxxx • (officer only)
в a n k a ι • xxxx • Release Type : xxxx • Release Phrase : xxxx • Appearance : xxxx • Instant Effect : xxxx • Passive Ability : xxxx • Techniqued : Do not type on this line xxxx • xxxx • xxxx • (captain only)
xx e q u ι p м e n т • xxxx• Testing xxxx• Testing xxxx• Testing
c н a r a c т e ɾ • ι n f o r m a т ι o n xxxx • Name : Shiro Makigawa xxx • Height : 6 feet tall xxxx • Weight : 150 xxxx • Reiatsu Color : Blue xxxx • Reiatsu level : Strong xxxx • Appearance : He's medium built, brown eyes and short black spiky hair, wears black fingerless gloves, and carries a katana and short sword like samurai on his left hip. xxxx • Personality: He's a strong strategists on the battlefield, but tone it down when his captain or other high ranking officers to avoid label who questions authority, man of few words to friends and comrades, When his friends are in trouble then he would be the first to help, assistant swordsmanship instructor in the dojo, and great using various weapons and combat skills. He likes challenging different squad division to sparring to perfect his own combat abilities or help them their own. xxxx • Biography : He's an orphan raised at tan ancient temple with others orphans in the worst district trying to stay alive buy infighting between the residents. The temple specialize orphans having an education, combat and survival training, and weaponry. Then the Hollows attack them without warning almost eliminating everybody, but a Soul Reaper squadron intervenes to stop them. He was in awe with Misako's sword dance fighting, rushes toward her to defeat a Hollow attacking behind her by doing so activate his Soul Reaper's abilities his swords given by his master, and she adopted him into her family. She started him training for the Soul Reaper Academy. xx o p τ ι o n a l • ι n f o r m a т ι o n xxxx • Reiatsu Shape : xxxx • Likes : xxxx • helping his friends xxxx • swordsmanship and combat training xxxx • photographer and drawing xxxx • Dislikes : xxxx •Brussels sprouts xxxx • other Soul Reaper who are lazy to perfect their skills. xxxx • xxxx • Relationships : xxxx • Misako - older sister xxxx • Miyuki -younger sister(twin) xxxx • Rasa - younger brother(twin)
xx r a n k ι n g • ι n f o r m a т ι o n xxxx • Rank : Soldier xxxx • Squad : 11 xxxx • Squad ability :
Adrenaline Rush
Adrenaline Rush boosts the users strength, speed, reflexes, and physical durability. This technique also has a few extra bonuses: animistic senses and insatiable blood lust. Each attribute is strengthened equally among different ranks, the duration and resulting exhaustion is different depending on rank of the user. Each boost will be fully detailed on how it affects your body.
Strength: The hyper adrenaline push allows you to go beyond your normal limits, from pushing a 200 pound boulder down a hill to pushing that same boulder uphill without being out of breath. Physical attacks have more force behind them, allowing normally strong defenses to be pushed through easier.
Speed: Your body seems to reach its intended destination faster. Sword slashes are faster, you move smoother through motions, and over all have more grace and speed. Cannot move faster than a Shunpo.
Reflexes: Your mind sees time move ever so slightly slower, allowing your body move reactive almost on instinct. Attacks that would usually be direct hits, now can be parried, or even dodged.
Durability: What you are unable to dodge, you will likely be able to shrug off physically speaking. Flames still burn your skin, acid still dissolves your flesh, but your skin, muscles, and bones seem and react more resiliently against physical assault.
Animistic senses: Your eyes see further, and sharper, and more clear. Every sound is crystalline and pure. You could smell and almost taste everything nearby, and you can feel the dirt beneath your feet, even through your shoes.
Insatiable blood lust: Activates your killer instinct, allowing you to spot where your enemies may strike before hand, and likely set your spiritual pressure on a far heavier level, smothering lower powered enemies, and possibly terrifying equal or even higher powered foes.
Adrenaline Rush can be used ONCE per battle. The duration of the ability, and resulting exhaustion from the physical exertion are dependent on your rank within Squad 11. The exhaustion weakens you equal to the boosts from activating the ability. So if you could cut through a 12 inch thick tree before, you could barely scratch it after.
xx z a n p a k u т ō • ι n f o r m a т ι on xxxx • Zanpakuto Name : Valkyrie It's a wind and thunder katana
xxxx • Inner World Appearance :
It is floating island overlooking lush vegetation, two waterfall falling off the island, other’s a castle on top of mountain, and a cave entrance in the middle. xxxx • Spirit Appearance :
She is 6' 1'', have long raven hair half way down her back, piercing brown eyes, has black short kimono with fishnet knitting in the middle, calf high leather boots, metal plated gloves, twin stiletto daggers in the small of her back, and sword strapped behind her back.
xx r e l e a ѕ e • ι n f o r m a т ι o n twin light sabers that can joined together to create a Bo staff or use separately.ѕ н ι k a ι •xxxx • Release Type : Stand Alone xxxx • Release Phrase : The goddess of Heaven and Earth strike down thee enemies Valkyrie xxxx • Appearance : She has black bodysuit with black amour gauntlets and spiked shin guards on her boots, dark chest plates, and black and gold half face mask. Included two holders for her light sabers on the hips. xxxx • Instant Effect : the sky rumble with thunder and lightning in a distance. xxxx • Passive Ability : He have no control of the lightning and the lightning randomly xxxx• Horizontal Lightning Slash- She leaps in the air with her light sabers over right shoulder to build up a massive charge then throws the charge toward her opponent down the middle of their body. The damages depends on levels of the enemy to leave them stunned or unconscious. It has a two post rest period xxxx • Lightning Pulse Blast- the twin light sabers are joined together to form a lance that hold with both hands, it takes about five minutes to gain massive adequate charge depends on opponent power level, and release a energy bolt straight at the enemy. It has three post rest period. xxxx • Rapid Lightning Pulse Strike- it is ultimate version of the Lightning Pulse Blast that fire three blasts instead of one. It takes about ten minutes to build up the charge then fired three blast in unison. It has a four [post rest period. xxxx • (officer only)
в a n k a ι • xxxx • Release Type : xxxx • Release Phrase : xxxx • Appearance : xxxx • Instant Effect : xxxx • Passive Ability : xxxx • Techniqued : Do not type on this line xxxx • xxxx • xxxx • (captain only)
User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. click to show. xx e q u ι p м e n т • xxxx• Testing xxxx• Testing xxxx• Testing
Edited by Kage so that the thread not stretch as much, and added other RPC to this.
Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2014 2:29 pm
Starfighter34
Hi, I see that you posted in here! Please make sure to make all edits in the first post ^.^
Can you please judged this? I want to apply to a squad
Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2015 5:58 pm
Starfighter34
Can you please judged this? I want to apply to a squad
Hi, I wanted to let you know that all changes must be made to the first post. Also, you have the ability to apply to a squad before this is approved. In fact, we can not approve the profile unless we know what squad you are in. ^.^;
Hello my name is Youroka Kage and I will be your judge today.
I do know that I had mentioned in the past that all edits do need to be made to the first post. I also do know that you were accepted into squad 11 as a Soldier. This and the RPC format do need to be placed in there. If you need help with that, I would be more than willing to help you with it.
Ok, so for the title on this RPC it should be [11] Shiro Makigawa l Soldier l Shinigami. This will change with your ranks as you rank up. ^.^
Now I will be going in between the first post and the second one, because I do see that their are some differences between them. Not many, but some. Please do not forget to add in the information about the squad.
Ok, from here, I do have to look at the first post, as there seems to be some errors in the coding of the pictures. I am sorry to say, for the sealed zanpkauto, those will have to change, as all sealed blades do have to be not only a sword, but have to be a Katana, Wakizashi[/url, Nodachi, Tanto.This site here has a lot of different Katana types and sizes, and even some pictures for Katanas.
For your Shikai appearance, you may want to alter the current description of it so that it is good for your character, and not for Erza of Fairy Tail. ^.^;
Ok, so Instant effects are just that, instant. These are mostly cosmetic, or a simple, instant effect. If you want the instant effect to have Thunder shake the ground, that would work, but that would only happen once. If you want something that would have a lasting effect, you will want to put that into the passive ability.
For your passive ability I would like some more detail on it. For example, how far is your control of the lightening? Also does the lightening automatically render them unconscious?
For all of the techniques, I will need more detail in all of them to see exactly what you are trying to do with them.
Horizontal Lightning Slash- This one is not too bad. I will need you to say that it does attempt to do the damage. This will make it less of an Autohit.
Lightning Pulse Blast- With this one, I have to mostly guess what is happening, there is not a lot of clear detail for me to be able to say what exactly is happening. Also, we do not use minutes in the guild as a time source. However, you would be able to change this into posts, so there is a cooldown of 10 posts.
Rapid Lightning Strike- This one also needs more detail as well. Mostly because we are unable to tell what the size of this is, and it does say "to destroy the opponent." This will need to be changed. As it is currently worded, it is an auto kill ability. I would also like to know how many strikes you get and if there is a cool down for this.
If you need any help, you can either pm me or I am available almost all the time on skype. If you need my skype name, you can pm me on Gaia for it ^.^
Please make the requested changes.
Starfighter34
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Posted: Sat Mar 28, 2015 10:42 am
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Ok, I was sent a PM saying that this was edited and ready to look at again. I did send you another PM with something in it, so if you want to edit that with these changes, that will work as well.
Ok, when I was copy things over I noticed a few things in the top part. Now this isn't too important, but it should be noted.
Five foot 12 inches (5'12") is six feet tall. Also 220lb for a 6 foot man puts him at the borderline of Obese for his height. Here is where i have my reference. It would also be nice if we knew what color your reiatsu was. ^.^
Also, I normally don't mention likes and dislikes, however, Seafood except for fish is Shell fish really ^.^; This is coming form someone that doesn't like seafood at all, lol
Ok, now onto the more important parts. Ok, so next to the name of your Zanpakuto, there is a picture. Is that your Spirit's appearance, or just a left over picture? I ask this because I see a completely different description under the spirit appearance.
For the new Shikai appearance, do you mean that they can become a Bowstaff instead of a lance? It couldn't really make a Lance unless one part of the light saber. The other confusing thing for me is that you refer to the appearance as a she. I know that your character is a male from the second post. Are you saying that your Zanpakuto spirit comes out, or is that a mistake?
Ok, so the passive ability sounds more like an auto hit than a passive ability. It also seems to automatically find the opponent even if they are concealed, which is a no no.
Horizontal Lightning Slash- With this one, we would need to know the levels that it would harm the opponent in order to know anything about it. However, right now your character is at the lowest reiatsu level, so do keep that in mind. When you level up, you can change this. ^.^
For both Lightning Pulse Blast and Rapid Lightning Pulse Strike I would like to know how much damage they can do.
I also noticed that you have not picked any kido, are you going to use Kido, or you haven't looked at them yet?
It's a wind and thunder katana 
