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xxxxName : Sydney “Scarlet Sid” Ansho
xxxxGender : Female
xxxxHeight : 5’ 10”
xxxxWeight : 154 lbs.
xxxxReiatsu Color : Sea Green
xxxxReiatsu level : Immense
xxxxAppearance : User Image
xxxxPersonality : Sid is a very direct person, often to a fault. If she thinks someone isn’t worth her time, she will say so. This attitude has helped cement her reputation as “a massive b***h”. She is crass and open, having no patience for people who put on airs. Sid has a very thick skin for verbal insults; she believes that if you can’t take it, you shouldn't dish it out. Those who manage to tolerate this tactless attitude and befriend her will find that she is talkative, always having anecdotes or good natured jabs. She can be counted on to have the back of anyone she calls her friend. She is also VERY protective of children, especially hers. More than one body has had to be fished out of a ditch after harming one of her kids.

xxxxBiography : Sid remembers little from her time as a human. The most vivid memories she has from that time are walking along white, sandy beaches in the sun, hearing the waves crash on the shore, the call of seabirds, sometimes the creaking of wood, and very rarely. . . explosions. She doesn’t remember exactly how she died, but she suspects that she fell off a ship and drowned.

She spent some time as an unattached soul, lost at sea before being turned into a hollow. She has suspected that the reason for her hollowfication was because of the previous fall of Seireitei. According to the report filed when she was finally purified, she had been stalking the seas for a very long time. Mercifully, she did not remember any of this when she entered Soul Society.

Ending up in the 45th East Rukon district, she survived as best she could. She tended fields, mended garments, made and sold reed sandals, anything to get a square meal. When she had worked her way to the broken down shack she still holds today, she began taking in orphans, offering them a safe place to rest and a meager meal in exchange for helping contribute to the home and family. She had married a young member of the 4th division 150 years ago. His mild personality and calm mannerisms seemed to help temper her firebrand demeanor. Their son Tani was born six years later. Life was relatively pleasant for the next 125 years, their small house was always filled with the laughter of children and their relationship remained strong. Sid had calmed down a great deal over the years, embracing her new life as a mother, she still had a great deal of the spark she had before, but it was tempered by maternal caring and a little bit of patience.

The death of her husband hit as hard as a runaway train. She tried to remain strong for her children, but she still couldn’t stop crying. Without his salary, the family was at risk of losing what they had. One night she called the children together, every fiber in her body wanted to find the Hollow responsible and destroy it. Rikichi, the first child she adopted, now old enough to have a famly of his own, spoke up. He urged her to become a Shinigami; he would look after her family while she was away.

She would become a Shinigami, she would find the hollow responsible for her husband’s death. She would have her revenge. She attended the academy and was assigned to the 11th division after graduating. With the recent turmoil, Sydney has stepped up to try and give some semblance of order to the leaderless division. The division is now reorganized with proper, if not terribly modern or sophisticated facilities.


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xxxxReiatsu Shape : A large mouth with sharp teeth
xxxxLikes :
xxxx • Sashimi
xxxx • Fiddle music
xxxx • Rubies
xxxxDislikes :
xxxx • Maggots
xxxx • Bland foods
xxxx • The smell of burnt hair
xxxxRelationships :
xxxx • Ansho, Ryobei: Husband (deceased)
xxxx • Ansho, Rikkichi: Son (adopted)
xxxx • Ansho, Haruna: Daughter (adopted)


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xxxxRank : Captain
xxxxSquad : 11th
xxxxSquad ability : Adrenalin Rush (for now)


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xx z a n p a k u т ō ι n f o r m a т ι o n
xxxxZanpakuto Name : Senba (Thousand Teeth)
xxxxInner World Appearance :
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A tropical island, the weather is directly tied to her mood, ranging from a placid paradise to a storm battered nightmare.
xxxxSpirit Appearance :
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A 20 foot long female tiger shark. While manifested it is able to move through the air as if it were water.
xxxxSealed Appearance :
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A relatively plain weapon, the blade itself is the size of a normal katana. It is housed in a simple shirasaya. The handle is wrapped in shark skin to keep it from slipping out of her hand. The scabbard is made from simple wood with no decorations.


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xxxxRelease Type : Stand alone
xxxxRelease Phrase : Rend, Senba
xxxxAppearance : The blade grows to 7 feet long and widens to 8 inches, the edge of the blade changes into a row of curved teeth, steel simulacra of those found in the maw of her Zanpakuto spirit.
xxxxInstant Effect : Upon release, the sound of a crashing wave can be heard.
xxxxPassive Ability : Sid is able to make the teeth run along the edge of the blade at great speed, turning the weapon’s edge into a parade of razor sharp steel. It is more than capable of ripping through flesh, bone, and hollow mask.
xxxxTechniques : Do not type on this line
xxxxBlood in the Water: Sid takes one post to lick some of the blood off her Zanpakuto (There is usually plenty of blood on it after a good hit). By doing so, she gains a small measure of the victim’s Reiatsu. This can then be used to boost (increased reiatsu level for one post) or replenish her own Reiatsu.The amount of Reiatsu gained from this technique is directly proportional to how powerful the victim is. However, her body is less efficient at processing the denser Reiatsu of more powerful foes, leading to diminishing returns as the foe becomes more powerful. The she gets no boost from weaker enemies. The boost from moderately more powerful opponents (up to Great) is considered one level less than the victim. The most powerful opponents (Immense and Vast), give a boost of 2 levels lower than the victim (if she can even draw blood on them). Should her body reject the reiatsu, she can launch it back at her opponent in a blast similar to a Bala.
xxxxFirst bite: Sid swings her blade an launches 10 teeth towards her foe. The teeth fly in a straight line and spread out like a shotgun blast at a rate of one inch per two yards traveled. It is easier to dodge up close, but much more damaging. The effective range of this attack is about 60 yards, any further and the spread will be too wide to cause significant damage. (5 uses before needing to regrow teeth, 1 kido to regrow 10 teeth, teeth regrown by next post)
xxxxScourge of the Sea: Spending two kido uses, the teeth of her Zanpakuto disengage and form along a rope of reiatsu extending from her weapon. This flexible rope extends 14 feet from the tip of her released weapon. She uses it like a whip, capable of cutting and snaring opponents if hit.
xxxxOath of Blood: the Zanpakuto spirit demands blood in exchange for its power. If she draws the weapon and sheathes it without drawing blood, the spirit will be less cooperative. If she does it too often, she could lose her shikai techniques. Any blood will do initially, thus cutting herself in a nonvital area will usually appease spirit. Should she ignore this for too long (10 consecutive sheathings without blood), the spirit will require much more of her, manifesting and taking what it believes is owed. The spirit will rip a sizable chunk out of Sydney before moving onto the closest other target. (friend or foe)


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xxxxRelease Type : Progressive
xxxxRelease Phrase : Stain the tides a crimson red, Senba no Akunaki Kuchi (Insatiable maw of a thousand teeth)
xxxxAppearance :Her Bankai causes the blade to split into two independent blades the same size as her shikai. These blades are attached to the same hilt. The teeth on the blades become longer and sharper. Her eyes turn completely black and her teeth sharpen.
xxxxInstant Effect : The sound of thrashing in water can be heard. Her pupils dilate until her eyes are completely black and her teeth sharpen.
xxxxPassive Ability : In addition to being able to make the teeth run along the edge of the blade (like a chainsaw), she is also able to manipulate the orientation of the two blades in a 120 degree arc. If she can ensnare an opponent between the two blades and drive them into the vertex were the steel teeth on the blade do their best work.
xxxxTechniques : Do not type on this line
xxxxThe Predator's Maw: A more powerful, and significantly more grotesque form of Blood in the Water. This technique involves tearing a chunk out of an opponent with her teeth and eating it. Much like Blood in the Water she can use this to replenish spent reiatsu (2 kido uses regained for victims below her level, 3 for victims of equivalent level or higher.)
Should her body reject the reiatsu, she can expel it at an enemy in a blast equivalent to a cero at her level.
xxxxBond of Blood: If she releases her Bankai and does not draw any blood, the spirit will block access to one of her techniques for each time it happens. Should it happen again after running out of techniques, the spirit will manifest long enough to take what it believes is owed, likely amounting to half of a limb (forearm, everything below one knee, etc.)
xxxxFeeding Frenzy: Spending 20 kido uses, Sydney swings her weapon several times launching 450 teeth from the weapon. After the attack, the kido use regrows the teeth on the weapon by the next post. She is able to control this swarm of teeth within a 75 meter radius at will for an initial 3 posts, but can spend 5 kido to extend the duration for an additional post. She can use this technique to attack opponents at range or to form a small shield which can reduce the effectiveness of an enemy projectile attack by half (consuming the shield in the process). If need be she can launch the teeth beyond her control radius, but they are then unguided and cannot be controlled anymore, even if she moves towards them. It goes without saying that all attacks do not automatically hit.


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Hado:

1. Shō (衝, Thrust)

2. Panpan (ぱんぱん,Slap)

3. Tanki-sha (短気者, Spitfire)

4. Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning)

5. Yuki no tama (雪の玉, Snowball)

7. Howaitorikiddo (ホワイトリキッド, White Liquid)

9. Tōketsu (凍結, Frozen)

10. Yakedo (火傷, Burn)

11. Tsuzuri Raiden (綴雷電, Bound Lightning)

12. Fushibi (伏火, Ambush Flare)

13. Shimo bōkō (Frost Assault)

14. Sōshū (Frost Fall)

15. Mahō no Misairu (魔法のミサイル, Magic Missile)

20. Chi no ame (血の雨 , Rain of Blood)

30. Denji wa (でんじは Electromagnetic Wave)

31. Shakkahō (赤火砲, Red Fire Cannon)

42. Sutikkī shuryūdan (スティッキー手榴弾 Sticky grenade)

56. Gurren Yari Doriru (真紅槍ドリル Crimson Spear Drill)

58. Tenran (闐嵐, Orchid Sky)

59. Shīdomashingan (シードマシンガン Seed Machine Gun)

60. Iwa no haka (岩の墓 Rock Tomb)

63. Raikōhō (雷吼炮, Thunder Roar Sear)

64. Yami Arekuruu (闇荒れ狂う, Raging Darkness)

68. Tsubasa no Kumo (翼の雲 Cloud of Blades)

70. Bakuhatsu Parusu 爆発パルス, Explosive Pulse)

72. Gaki Rekkō (牙気裂光, Raging Light Fang)

73. Sōren Sōkatsui (双漣蒼火墜, Twin Lotus Blue Fire, Crash Down)

74. Tsurara yari (Icicle Spear)

75. Ryūsei sutoraiki (流星ストライキ Meteor Strike)

Bakudo:

1. Sai (塞, Block)

2. Kaze no myaku (風の脈, Pulse of Wind)

3. Kiiro no rōpu (黄色のロープ Yellow Rope)

4. Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope)

5. Hikari Parusu (光パルス, Light Pulse)

6. Hikarinorokku (光のロック, Light Lock)

7. Seki (斥, Repulsion)

11. Bōra (ボーラ, Bolas)

14. Shingōenkan (信号炎管 Signal flare)

23. Dokueki-yō Konomi (毒液用好み, Venom Taste)

26. Kyokkō (曲光, Bent Light)

27. Suchīrugādo (スチールガード, Steel Guard)

61. Rikujōkōrō (六杖光牢, Six-Staff Light Prison)

62. Hyapporankan (百歩欄干, Hundred-Step Rail Parch)

63. Sajō Sabaku (鎖条鎖縛, Chainlink Chain Bond(s))


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PostPosted: Fri Oct 03, 2014 12:55 am


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Hello, my name is Youroka Kage. I had a quick question. Did you want a judge to look at this RPC, or were you still working on it? cat_sweatdrop

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 03, 2014 7:41 am


Youroka Kage
Hello, my name is Youroka Kage. I had a quick question. Did you want a judge to look at this RPC, or were you still working on it? cat_sweatdrop


I would like a judge to look at it so I know what (if anything) to change.
PostPosted: Sat Oct 04, 2014 7:51 pm


Please render unto me thy words of divine judgement.

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 04, 2014 8:15 pm


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Please render unto me thy words of divine judgement.

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HAHAH. You got it buddy . Judgement incoming.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 05, 2014 4:18 pm


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Yo, my name is Angel, and I will be your judge today.

First things first. Soldiers start out at Capable, and with training, move to average. ^.^

Ok, I have read your biography, and I have some slight issues with it. First off, this is a post-apocalyptic bleach guild. We are about 300 years after the last destruction. In these destruction, almost all life in the Seireitei is wiped out. However, you can state that this is the time that she spent as a hollow. The other issue I have is that it states that you have gained Bankai. Sadly, a soldier level character does not get bankai, and this will need to have a strike out on your RPC. However, I can judge the bankai, so that when you are given a higher rank, it makes the judging process easier. This would mean that you have 3 shikai techniques total.

Ok, onto Shikai itself

Quote:
• Appearance : The blade grows to 7 feet long and widens to 8 inches, the edge of the blade changes into a row of curved teeth, steel simulacra of those found in the maw of her Zanpakuto spirit. Sid is able to make these teeth run along the edge of the blade at great speed, turning the weapon’s edge into a parade of razor sharp steel. It is more than capable of ripping through flesh, bone, hollow mask, and (rarely) the zanpakuto of lesser shinigami. Should any of the teeth become detached, the wielder can replace them by expending a small amount of Reiatsu.


As you can see, in the ability I have bold and italicized somethings. The bold would work better for the passive ability. However, it seems more like if it touches you, then the minimum that can happen is the skin being ripped off. The part that I italicized, violates our guild's rules. We do not allow the breaking of another's Zanpakuto. I do understand that it is a canon ability, but we are based on Canon, but we are not canon. I also believe as a soldier, it should take a lot more than a small amount of Reiatsu. I would that instead, it uses the kido usages as a way to replenish. For example, it uses two of your uses of kido to regenerate 10 of them. The Kido does replenish after you use all 20 uses of it as a solider.

As previously stated, I believe that where I have mentioned is good for a passive ability. The way the that current one is, it is an auto kill ability.

With your Shikai's first ability, why don't we change it to depending on the Reiryoku level higher than you. If it's lower, then it decreases in size. That way, it corresponds with the fact that people of higher level's are stronger. However, I do believe the stronger it is, the harder it should be to control. This is just some food for thought.

The way that the Shikai second ability is worded, it always hit. Words like "attempt", and "can" are better to convey that it is not. Also, how big is the arc that these teeth fly, and how far away do they go before either falling or dissipating?

As stated before, until you are promoted to officer, you may not use the fourth shikai tech, but I would like to still address them as one. With only saying enhanced speed and enhanced durability, we do not know to what extent. I would like to state, that the flicker step that you get as soldier and officer is the same speed as Shunpo, however there is a difference of how far you can go. With durability, we don't know how many its you can take without getting hurt or anything like that. At this point, you are untouchable.

Ok, with Bankai being stand alone, you will have no access to your enhanced speed, or durability. or any other Shikai moves. With our progressive we do allow people to have a new physical appearance and instant effect, however, the concept has to stay the same. I would say your concept is based off a sharks power to rip through things.





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PostPosted: Mon Oct 06, 2014 12:14 pm


And thus did the heavens open up to reveal the divine truth. . .

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Large parts of this character may or may not have been copypasta'd from a previous rp. sweatdrop

Anyways, I wasn't too clear on how to classify the passive ability. I was tempted to write "Giant (censored)ing chainsaw" (which on reflection would probably have been better received). I used the Zanjutsu/Kido/Elemental designations. I figured Zanjutsu was enough of a passive ability (because the sword is based around hitting stuff). The "hot knife through butter" and "Satan's flaming chainsaw" thing was meant as an exaggeration.

I didn't quite understand the difference between stand alone and progressive releases. I now realize what that difference is and I agree, it should be progressive. But Bankai stuff can wait until I have the rest in order.

So let's work on Shikai first.

Shikai revised:

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ѕ н ι k a ι •
xxxxRelease Type : Stand alone
xxxxRelease Phrase : Rend, Senba
xxxxAppearance : The blade grows to 7 feet long and widens to 8 inches, the edge of the blade changes into a row of curved teeth, steel simulacra of those found in the maw of her Zanpakuto spirit.
xxxxInstant Effect : Upon release, the sound of a crashing wave can be heard.
xxxxPassive Ability : Sid is able to make the teeth run along the edge of the blade at great speed, turning the weapon’s edge into a parade of razor sharp steel. It is more than capable of ripping through flesh, bone, and hollow mask.
xxxxTechniques : Do not type on this line
xxxxBlood in the Water: Sid takes one post to lick some of the blood off her Zanpakuto (There is usually plenty of blood on it after a good hit). By doing so, she gains a small measure of the victim’s Reiatsu. This can then be used to boost (increased reiatsu level for one post) or replenish her own Reiatsu, or launched back at an enemy in a manner not unlike a bala blast. The amount of Reiatsu gained from this technique is directly proportional to how powerful the victim is. However, her body is less efficient at processing the denser Reiatsu of more powerful foes, leading to diminishing returns as the foe becomes more powerful. The she gets no boost from weaker enemies. The boost from more powerful opponents is considered 2 tiers less than the victim (or her own power).
xxxx • First bite: Sid swings her blade an launches 10 teeth towards her foe. The teeth fly in a straight line spread out like a shotgun blast at a rate of 2cm per meter traveled. It is easier to dodge up close, but much more damaging. The effective range of this attack is within 50 meters, any further and the spread will be too wide to cause significant damage. (1 kido to use)
PostPosted: Tue Oct 07, 2014 4:19 am


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(Just letting you know while he's offline, all edits you make to your rpc WILL need to be put in the first post as well once he has confirmed it! ! *disappears so Angel can do his thaaannng )

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 07, 2014 8:02 pm


I have made some revisions to the OP (major revisions in bold).

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Okay. History looks better now. While I don't mind the cross out just make sure to fix it or change it when something happens.

For Zanpakuto:

Blood in the Water is fine, but do remember. Some reiatsu will reject each other (I.E. Arrancar and Shinigami) and much more powerful Reiatsu (I.E. Immense and Vast) will create a greater toll on the body since you're not mean to have that power.

First Bite: Explain how many teeth is on the blade to begin with and how long it takes for teeth to grow back.

Oath of Blood: Interesting, but you need to put of the spirit attacks her or anyone around when it manifests itself.


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PostPosted: Wed Oct 08, 2014 4:19 pm


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Edited
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You don't need to old your edits XD get rid of the bolding and you'll be fine.


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PostPosted: Wed Oct 08, 2014 8:03 pm


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I figured bolding would help you out. Bolding removed now.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 08, 2014 8:17 pm


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I figured bolding would help you out. Bolding removed now.


Forgot one little thing. Fix the title so it only says name, race, and squad. The other things aren't needed.


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Forgot one little thing. Fix the title so it only says name, race, and squad. The other things aren't needed.


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