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PostPosted: Tue Sep 30, 2014 6:00 pm


Please let me know what you think. I've never done much character building or writing that I've shared with anyone and so this experience is relatively new for me. Still a work in progress with the personality and history but here's what I have so far. Hope you like it. 3nodding


CAMPER FORM


Name: Mary Mistletoe
Alias: Misty
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Powers: Empathy
Aura: main color - Purple, high frequency, secondary color - green

Appearance:

Height: Height: 5’3" Misty is a scrawny girl in the middle of a growth spurt. She has long slender arms and legs with knobby knees and elbows.

Physical: She has waist length wavy hair an autumnal hue of orange. Normally she wears two braided pigtails with big bows at the end. Her favorite being the sea-green bows she got from her Aunt Eddie on her 11th birthday. She has a slender oval face covered in the same small soft brown freckles that speckle her entire body. Her dark almost forest green eyes, are a piercing contrast from her pale white skin. She is often seen in some variation of a knit cap (usually made by her mother), cream tee-shirt, blue jean overalls, and her kitten printed snow boots (her favorite ensemble). When Misty is outside she loves to wear big puffy snow suits that repel the wet and cold of her wintery hometown.

Posture:
She often slouches to hide her height as she's not used to being taller than others her age and she doesn’t like to draw other people’s attention. Her parents constantly tell her to "sit straight" and "stop slouching".

Body Language: Still a bit clumsy in her everyday actions she is slowly getting used to having longer limbs than she has ever hand before. Her hands usually stay in her pockets when she's walking about and slip behind her when she's talking to someone. She doesn't make much eye contact when talking to people because she finds it intensifies the emotions she feels from them (something she finds quite distracting). Usually she'll focus on their mouth instead which inadvertently has provided her with passable skill at reading lips.

Her eyes appear to glaze over altogether if and when she gets lost in thought. During conversation this can freak people out that already feel as though she isn't invested in the conversation due to her lack of eye contact because after her eyes glaze over she'll then begin to ramble on about where ever her thoughts have taken her. Most often nothing to do with the topic that was at hand. Her parents have taken to snapping or clapping at her to regain her attention during these interludes in her concentration.

Personality:
Her mind goes a mile a minute and she over thinks everything. Quick witted, like her father David, Misty processes information very fast and rarely needs things explained to her twice. This said she tends to think steps beyond an idea and people can get lost in a conversation with her that aren’t used to her jumps from one idea to the next - something her father does regularly. Her mother Sandra sees this as just another thing to love about her daughter. Sandra is used to a conversation about the day’s chores turning into Misty’s monologue about the perplexities of being 12. At which point, Sandra just moves on knowing her daughter has the information she needs or will draw Misty’s attention to the next matter at hand.

What Misty thinks - Misty speaks. Which usually translates to: she’s not afraid to speak her mind (because her thoughts move to fast for her filter to catch up). However, when she’s nervous, uncomfortable, or scared it means she rambles uncontrollably.

Being empathic from an early age Misty often taps into people’s emotions and tries to use that to show she understands them. However this tends to backfire because she instead tends to unsettle people. Her empathy coupled with her quick wit means she’s able to deduce the heart of an issue well beyond her emotional IQ(and her age) to comprehend; Her unabashed honesty often brings to light details other people don’t want to admit to themselves let alone other people. In her small town this has caused her to ostracize herself to many because there are always secrets and people who don’t want to be confronted with thoughts and ideas that challenge their self-made bubbles.


History:

Misty is an only child. Her parent’s names are Sandra and David Mistletoe. Her mom, Sandra, was diagnosed with Endometriosis just after her marriage to David and learned that she couldn't conceive.

Sandra and David were crushed because they had wanted to have a big family. They had talked about having 5-6 children for as long as they had been together, which was nearly a lifetime. At one point the knowledge that they would never conceive threatened to shatter their marriage. That’s when Sandra’s best friend (Eddie Myst) offered to be a surrogate for her and David.

At first Sandra and David couldn’t believe Eddie would offer to have their child. They were touched but declined the offer feeling that it wasn’t meant to be and that they would work something else out. Adoption was discussed but eventually dismissed because the fees were so high. One day Eddie sat down with them both and explained why she wanted to do it. Sandra and David had been her best friends since grade school and she’d never seen them so torn up as when they learned they couldn’t have kids. She, Eddie, didn’t see anyone in her future and since she was clairvoyant that said a bit.

However she did see them with a kid, the one she gave them. So to Eddie it was already decided. She couldn’t help them afford to adopt a child but she could give them a child. Her only condition was that she , Eddie, continue to be in the little boy or girls life as an Aunt. (She knew it was possible for her child to have powers like she did and wanted to be there for the child if those powers happened to develop).

The house Mary lives in has been in the Mistletoe family for generations and when her parents inherited the place they turned it into a Bed and Breakfast so they wouldn't have to sell it. It's a huge 8 bedroom home nestled in a town called WayFar in the mountains.

WayFar sprung up around a hunting lodge in the 1840's that was famed for it's hot springs. Now the town serves as a ski resort and nature retreat as well.

When Mary was 9 years old she got stuck on a ski lift by herself for half of a day. Ever since she's been terrified of heights. So much so she wont look out of windows higher than the ground floor and she clings to the banister whenever she uses the stairs.





PostPosted: Sat Oct 11, 2014 11:01 am


since she lives in what i assume is a cold/snowy area, isn't she cold in just her t-shirt? she has snow boots but no other outerwear. o vo

how does her way of thinking and over-thinking influence her relationship with her parents/friends? she tries too hard/rambles which pushes neighbors away, but you could explain how her fast paced thoughts influence her other relationships. Does she realize that she does this?

does she help with the family business? does she enjoy doing so?

is she good at sports? maybe not after her ski lift incident, but before was she good at skiing or snowboarding?

lastly, you can go more into depth about her relationship with her parents, how she discovered her powers, and how she got to camp. o vo)b

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 11, 2014 12:04 pm


yeomso
since she lives in what i assume is a cold/snowy area, isn't she cold in just her t-shirt? she has snow boots but no other outerwear. o vo

how does her way of thinking and over-thinking influence her relationship with her parents/friends? she tries too hard/rambles which pushes neighbors away, but you could explain how her fast paced thoughts influence her other relationships. Does she realize that she does this?

does she help with the family business? does she enjoy doing so?

is she good at sports? maybe not after her ski lift incident, but before was she good at skiing or snowboarding?

lastly, you can go more into depth about her relationship with her parents, how she discovered her powers, and how she got to camp. o vo)b


Thank you. I'll work on it.
PostPosted: Sat Oct 11, 2014 3:12 pm


Hello there! Hopefully I can be of some assistance. I like her and I can't wait to see her fleshed out a little more.

Looks:
Personally I love codes and examples. There are lots of different shades of orange, so maybe to help the artist show more what you mean either with a color code to the color orange or a link to a picture where someone has that color hair (this goes for the eye color as well and skin). That's just a suggestion though, it's not really necessary.

I'd like to know more about her body. She is scrawny, but how are her hands/arms/legs/body? Are they propertionate to her height, or are her arms a little longer than normal? Does she have long slender fingers, or shorter ones? Does she only have freckles on her face?

I was wondering if when she isn't looking at people does she look to the ground, or around the area of the person, or at their face and just not their eyes?

Personality:
You have in her body language that her eyes glaze over when she is lost in thought, and you also have here in the personality that when she thinks she speaks. I was just wondering if her eyes glaze over when talking to people, or are there times when she is lost in thought and she doesn't speak about what she is thinking.

What happens when she over thinks things? How does she react to people not wanting to be friends with her? Is she prone to be sad about it, or does she just shrug things off. How does she react to rejection, or even bullying by people that doesn't like her rambling? Also what happens if she is told to be quiet (either by an adult or kids her age.)

Is she the kind to stick up for herself if people are making fun of her rambling and the fact that she says things she shouldn't, or just kind of slink away.

What kind of friend is she? Loyal, friendly, needy, possessive? Does she have enemies, or she doesn't care about the people she doesn't like and ignore them?

What are some of her hobbies? Does she like to watch television, play out side, ski, etc.

History:
I'd like to see more on the whole surrogate process. Did Mistie's mom always know that she couldn't have kids? Was her father okay with the decision to have a surrogate or did he have to come around to the issue, same for Eddie. I think this part is very interesting and it would be cool to say more.

Where in the mountains? Is it a two story house or just a very large one story house? Is it busy, and if so what kind of people has Mistie met there? Are there a lot of kids around the town of WayFar? Are there houses close to Mistie's or are they all far away? Does she help out at the bead and breakfast or does she stay behind the scene?

Why was she on a ski lift by herself? What happened while she was up there, did she cry or just freeze in terror? How did her parents react to this? Do they understand her fear of heights, or have they tried to break her out of it?

You need to put something in there about her discovering her powers along with how she found out about the camp. I'd like to see more on her relationship with her parents and how their day to day lives were as well as how they react to her being a physic.

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