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Emma Sweets

PostPosted: Mon Sep 29, 2014 6:45 pm


Just decided to start doing this as a way to kick myself in the backside and start progressing. Will mainly be a art dump of Jocelin my OC and her evolution, maybe some comments about her too.

Any and all constructive criticism is appreciated.
PostPosted: Mon Sep 29, 2014 6:51 pm


First things first is Jocelin's reference image, the first reall digital work I've completed.
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I was rather pleased with the majority of this image personally, save for the face as it looks flat and hair is something I've always struggled with. Getting used to a tablet is a gap I'm still trying to over come and this image certainly had my hand glue to ctrl + z but it eventually came together, even if I cheated a little by copying pasting and horizontal flipping certain parts. *cough* Legs. *cough*

Total time was around 5 hours, Although broken up over the course of a week and a half thanks to work and general tiredness. xp

Emma Sweets


Emma Sweets

PostPosted: Mon Sep 29, 2014 7:03 pm


This was an image that came up after trying to get used to my tablet by sketch and trying out different brush settings in photoshop.

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A little rough and not quite the right shape for Jocelin but I liked the pose enough to work on it some more and try and develop it further. ~ 30 minutes of sketching to come to this pose.

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Many minutes later and several late nights (Dunno why but I always feel more creative the more tired I am) I manage to come up with a rough sketch and get everything into a place where it looked like it should belong. ~ 2 hours of tweaking and refining.

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Finally got a chance to put some real work in this weekend thanks to a day off and not having net access for a day. Yay no distractions! Refined redrew and decide to alter her original costume slightly by remove the section of pink from her shoulder armour as it was starting to look crowded and awkward. Rather pleased with the lines so far, though fearing the hair and glasses, not to mention the rose hilt of her sword. Image is at 25% in order not to stretch the page.
~ 4 hours in so far on final lines.
PostPosted: Mon Sep 29, 2014 10:52 pm


She's coming along great Emma!!! Keep up the good work - and you certainly seem to be getting the hang of your tablet really quick!

The only thing I can think of right now to comment on would be the top of her leg where it goes into the ruffles is super straight - she's a curvy lady and your thigh is really a big muscle that curves.

The way I think about it is that the top of the leg really is a socket that follows the line of your underwear, but here's a photo - you can see that the front of the thigh isn't really straight at all and curves/tapers towards the knee.

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Emma Sweets

PostPosted: Tue Sep 30, 2014 6:25 am


HitokiriChibi

Thank you for the tip Chibi, will definitely get to work on that next time I get a chance to sit down and do some work on her.
PostPosted: Thu Oct 02, 2014 6:36 pm


Some sketches done during my break at work, of Jocelin and maybe a future hunky Icelandic giant of a baker boyfriend? Plus another of her dancing about in her underwear from a week or so ago that will probably be the next digital piece I attempt of Jocelin.
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HitokiriChibi
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 02, 2014 6:55 pm


OMG I'm loving how you're capturing their body types so well in these sketches!
Them shoulders on buff Icelandic boyfriends~ Mmhmm

And then the cute apron XDDDD

Ahhh it'll be great to see him develop Emma! I look forward to seeing how you go with him!

I also love that first sketch of Jocelin with her arms flung out, such a great energetic pose.
PostPosted: Thu Oct 02, 2014 7:02 pm


HitokiriChibi

Was in a rather happy mood on break today which helped with that pose, not to mention that girls just wanna have fun came on the radio too.

The unnamed and faceless BF still needs work, but he's taking a bit more shape with each scribbling. Dunno why I though to have him baking naked save for a ruffled apron. Maybe a surprise romantic breakfast. whee

Emma Sweets


HitokiriChibi
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 02, 2014 7:05 pm


Emma Sweets
HitokiriChibi

Was in a rather happy mood on break today which helped with that pose, not to mention that girls just wanna have fun came on the radio too.

The unnamed and faceless BF still needs work, but he's taking a bit more shape with each scribbling. Dunno why I though to have him baking naked save for a ruffled apron. Maybe a surprise romantic breakfast. whee


Perhaps being Icelandic he's really used to cold weather and finds a kitchen with an oven on too warm for his liking? He could be really temperature sensitive XD
PostPosted: Thu Oct 02, 2014 7:09 pm


HitokiriChibi
Emma Sweets
HitokiriChibi

Was in a rather happy mood on break today which helped with that pose, not to mention that girls just wanna have fun came on the radio too.

The unnamed and faceless BF still needs work, but he's taking a bit more shape with each scribbling. Dunno why I though to have him baking naked save for a ruffled apron. Maybe a surprise romantic breakfast. whee


Perhaps being Icelandic he's really used to cold weather and finds a kitchen with an oven on too warm for his liking? He could be really temperature sensitive XD
It's terrible how much that made me laugh. xp

Emma Sweets


Emma Sweets

PostPosted: Sun Oct 05, 2014 6:52 am


Well finally decided to get an idea out for a possible partner for Jocelin. I like the idea that sparked from an couple items here on gaia but felt a bit lost with the design of her outfit so she looks very stripperish. sweatdrop THose gangly hands need to be fixed too.

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Thankfully it's very rough so nothing set in stone and she may just get scrapped all together. Need to find a way to inject some personality into her if I want to save it.

Edit: Decided I'm not fond of the body type so will have to revise it to a more lean and less bosomy, probably something closer to a gymnast. And with more coverage because the stripper outfit is bothering me far too much the more I look at it.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 07, 2014 8:43 pm


Latest WIP. ~ 2 hours on fixing and finishing the rest of the lines save for the three parts I fear doing the most. The sword's rose hilt, her glasses because I've spent a half hour already and still haven't gotten close to making them look right, and lastly the hair because it's the bane of my existence when it comes to drawing. So to distract myself I threw in some of the base colours. Ta-da!

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Looking at it now though I think I need to change the colour of the soles of her shoes, the pink looks too jarring. Still looking up so reference for hair though.

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Latest update in the image of Jocelin. Tackled the hair today and content with the hair, not overly happy but pleased enough to move of to the next challenge which will be the rose detailing of her sword and head piece.

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Went back and redid the hair after recieving some very helpful advice and input from HitokiriChibi. heart

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OMG I hate drawing glasses far too much, especially in perspective. Noted for something to practice in the future.

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Was playing about with gradients and opacity for the wings and lenses of her glasses and feel they're a bit flat still will definitely have to try and make 'em pop while shading.

Don't know how many hours deep I am now, stopped counting after a while.

Just the rose hilt left to go and then it'll be on to shading. Woo! It's finally coming together.

Emma Sweets

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