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Amandelie

PostPosted: Thu Jul 31, 2014 2:31 pm


Hey there, just looking for a quiet place to post my works in progress where a few people will see it but I wont be overwhelmed with too much feedback right away. I do appreciate any comments or critique though. :3

This first one I'm going to be doing a redraw of a drawing I did last year. It's of a young witch and her cat...in the sketch for the new one I like to think she's been at school for awhile and they've both grown up a little, she's gotten achievement ribbons on her hat and she knows a little magic maybe? (I felt like it was a cop out of me originally hiding her other hand so I tried to add it back in somehow.) It's not an exact copy, just a rejuvenation of this idea but still similar enough I can say 'yay I've improved!'

Drawing from last year (September):
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Sketch for what I'm currently working on:
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 31, 2014 3:48 pm


Amandelie


Oooooh I likey

Momo Kisarragi

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HitokiriChibi
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 01, 2014 1:49 am


Hi Amandelie!

Gotta say I love your painting style and how you've done the face of your in the first painting!

Now with the redraw your doing I can't help but feel like the hat isn't really sitting on her head very well. Generally when you have a hat band, that part is what fits snug to the head to keep it in place and the rest sort of goes on from there. This is a tute that kinda goes into a simple way of drawing hats on heads to give you a better idea of what I mean XD

And I can already see a huge improvement just in the sketch of the cat between this new version and the last one! Can't wait to see more progress done on this biggrin
PostPosted: Thu Aug 07, 2014 8:20 am


@ Momo: Thank you! : D

@ Hitokiri: Thank you as well! : D And oh gosh you are so right about that hat..unfortunately I did not see your comment until today but I wrote myself a note for later to fix that before I continue. It's probably not properly placed in the first one either now that I look at it.

I've been slacking a bit here but I laid down the first bit of colouring on this piece last night right before bed - so it is less than perfect but gives me the direction I'm going in and a push to keep going and make it better and more refined.

Before I really continue colouring though, I'll take care of that hat. 3nodding
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Amandelie


LadySnark

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 07, 2014 8:50 am


I really love that hat and how its all spindly and crooked with fabric creases. whee
PostPosted: Fri Aug 08, 2014 2:54 pm


@ defineunique: Thanks! I guess she doesn't take much pride in keeping her witching hat properly ironed. xD

Ohmygosh, Hitokiri's advice helped so much in regards to the hat..it's not perfect but it's a bazillion times better looking I think. Spent some time working on this and refining a little more before it's dinnertime here. :3

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Amandelie

PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2014 12:15 pm


Just a practice today to see what I can do without a warmup and under the pressure of knowing that whatever I'm doing is going to be done in an hour (give or take 5~10 minutes because my self control is.. -,-) Right now most of my speedpaints are portraits and I think they tend to come out quite well so it was a challenge to see how much of an actual posed full figure I could get to look somewhat decent I guess? Needs more practice I think.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 12, 2014 2:33 pm


Working on the witchy girl some more today~
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Amandelie


HitokiriChibi
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 12, 2014 4:02 pm


Yay she's coming along very nicely!

I'm glad the hat tutorial was able to help you and you've changed it again since the last picture too - I was going to say it seemed the hat was 'straight' on her head but you've since tilted it to match the angle properly so it looks heaps better!

I love her eyes - so shiny and glittery looking!

Obviously this is still a WIP so I'm sure there's still heaps more you'll be doing with the hair but at the moment it still seems too evenly lit - from the light shine in her eyes I expect the light to be coming from our left so I'm imagining the inner parts of her hair falling on our left will be darkened as will the hair towards the back right to bring more contrast and get us really focusing on her face. Here's a tute on hair too seems you seem geared in going for the realistic approach.

Keep us updated - it's great seeing your progress in this one!
PostPosted: Wed Aug 13, 2014 9:07 am


Amandelie
Working on the witchy girl some more today~
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wow, the shading of her skin turns stunning! I really like that light stroke on her cute nose whee
after what Hitokiri mentioned about the hair I'd only say that her eyes may not be quite in line. I'd grab her right one a little down and closer to her nose... maybe even rotate left a little. But actually, the colors of her eyes seem so tasty! It was a good idea to add some pink after shades and lights... I should try mixing colors too! emotion_dowant

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Amandelie

PostPosted: Wed Aug 13, 2014 6:41 pm


HitokiriChibi

Thank you! Oh my gosh I spent like all day working on that hair today! @.@ ... #.# I skimmed the tutorial yesterday before bed and was like 'oooh this is going to be fun!' and it was but that many steps was exhausting! x3 I learned a few things and it turned out great even though I did have to fight myself to follow it completely sometimes. x3;;; I started over completely on the hair for the tutorial and I think it was worth it, but next time I will use what I learned and condense those many steps a lot. x3 (Yay for playing with spackled brushes a lot too! Also I actually really liked the smudging advice in there, it helped with softening a lot o.o Also lol at using a realistic tutorial for purple hair, I thought that was humourous cus I'm a dork xD)
kabatt

Thank you! ^^ Yea the eyes did look off..I think I fixed it a little better but I still don't think they're aligned perfectly so I guess I'll keep going and I've got each of them on their own layer now for future realignment attempts. x3;; I love colouring eyes and making them super colourful - you should totally try using unexpected colours! ^^

Anyways oh gosh does my neck hurt, here's the progress after today~ (time to go play some mario kart then head to bed for me!)
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 13, 2014 7:57 pm


Omg its coming along great! This is fantastic!

With tutes I tend to skim and take away parts - and then my style becomes a mix of things I've taken from various tutorials XD

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Amandelie

PostPosted: Thu Aug 14, 2014 7:04 pm


Thanks! I tend to be obsessive with tutes and follow them nearly exactly until the end. x3 They're great though for trying new things and learning about things you aren't as comfortable with or just doing cool effects...cool effects tutorials are awesome. *_*

Bedtime seems to come way too soon when I'm drawing at night. D; Still got some more work to put into this, but that will have to wait until tomorrow~

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 15, 2014 12:57 pm


I think I'm going to call this done for the most part. o.o If anyone sees anything that's really off or weird still feel free to point it out to me still! I feel like this has come a long way, not only from last year but since I started working on it, and I'm really thankful for the motivation and advice I've gotten in this guild. smile Thanks guys and I'm really excited to start something new and see where that goes and how much farther I can push myself. ^^

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Here's the meme cus it was important to me when I started to do this. x3;
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HitokiriChibi
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 15, 2014 5:04 pm


I think it looks great Amandelie!

Such a great improvement in just one years time since the last version you did of it too!
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