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What You Are to Me

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Petite Fleur Noire

PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2014 8:01 pm


There are time's when we fight, and time's when we argue,
Time's when all seem's lost and it seem's like I don't love you.
We do seem to have our differences, and we never really seem to fit,
But just so you know, I wish to say to you this:

As cliche's go, you are the Yang to my Yin, the core of my world.
You are my flame on a candle, that flickers so bright through the dark,
My gravity when I feel lost and want to float away from this world.
My energy boost when I can endure no more.

You mean more to me than you think, and more still when you try to guess,
You are everything I hoped to find, and everything I never knew I was looking for.
I hope to someday show you how much I really do care about you,
To someday show you how lost I would be without you.

You are my One and only, My other half of the puzzle.
You are my true love, my guidance for what's wrong and whats right.
You are my Everything, My inspiration for life.
 
PostPosted: Tue May 20, 2014 10:54 pm


I loved the first verse since it totally rhymed, but then...you lost it at line 6.

"As cliche's go, you are the Yang to my Yin, the core of my world"

Now you should find a word that rhymes with world.

As a suggestion how about...

"The ribbons and bows, and all things that are curled."

Then say your next line...

"You are my flame on a candle, that flickers in the dark"

Then you should find a word that rhymes with dark.

Suggestion for this might be...

"The angel in my heaven, one playing on a harp"

Then go...

"You are my compass in the woods, when I feel nothing but lost
My energy boost like a soda can, but without all of that cost
You simply are my everything more than life is worth
You mean more to me than family, and even my own birth.

You are my one and only, the one I will not share
No one else can have you, no time, no place, no where.
Call me selfish if you want
I only speak my mind

Because you are my one true love, you are simply one of a kind."

This poem would be great for like a Valentines day card or even a wedding/anniversary card.

empress dee

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