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Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2014 2:58 pm
So I posted the first chapter of a little something i've been writing in my off time. Figured i'd put this thread here so people could give feedback/comment without getting lost between my posts. I'll be putting chapters up at a time, but they may not be regular. I'll post an announcement when I do though smile Tell me what you guys think.
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Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2014 3:06 pm
Wow! First the art...and now writing! Damn - you're talented! I can't wait for more!
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Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2014 7:26 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2014 6:58 pm
It's so good - I hate having to wait for more! xd I'm very curious to see what the three are since they talk about her like she's a creature
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Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2014 7:01 pm
Nia Phoenix It's so good - I hate having to wait for more! xd I'm very curious to see what the three are since they talk about her like she's a creature Oh good it came across right. That's what I as going for razz
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Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2014 7:03 pm
Ryokuzen Shadowstealer Nia Phoenix It's so good - I hate having to wait for more! xd I'm very curious to see what the three are since they talk about her like she's a creature Oh good it came across right. That's what I as going for razz It's great! you should think about publishing - I'm sure this isn't the first thing you've written.....might help with that tuition!
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Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2014 7:59 pm
Nia Phoenix Ryokuzen Shadowstealer Nia Phoenix It's so good - I hate having to wait for more! xd I'm very curious to see what the three are since they talk about her like she's a creature Oh good it came across right. That's what I as going for razz It's great! you should think about publishing - I'm sure this isn't the first thing you've written.....might help with that tuition! Actually it is >///< Idk about publishing xD I have ideas of where I want the story to go but I haven't got an anding plannedd
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Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2014 8:01 pm
Ryokuzen Shadowstealer Nia Phoenix Ryokuzen Shadowstealer Nia Phoenix It's so good - I hate having to wait for more! xd I'm very curious to see what the three are since they talk about her like she's a creature Oh good it came across right. That's what I as going for razz It's great! you should think about publishing - I'm sure this isn't the first thing you've written.....might help with that tuition! Actually it is >///< Idk about publishing xD I have ideas of where I want the story to go but I haven't got an anding plannedd I guess we'll just have to wait and see...
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Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2014 8:06 pm
Ryokuzen Shadowstealer Nia Phoenix Ryokuzen Shadowstealer Nia Phoenix It's so good - I hate having to wait for more! xd I'm very curious to see what the three are since they talk about her like she's a creature Oh good it came across right. That's what I as going for razz It's great! you should think about publishing - I'm sure this isn't the first thing you've written.....might help with that tuition! Actually it is >///< Idk about publishing xD I have ideas of where I want the story to go but I haven't got an anding plannedd Publishing's a rather arduous process, if you don't have an agent nine times out of ten the publishing house will toss your manuscript in the garbage without even reading the first page. You can PM me if you'd like, my dad published a book and I might be able to give some pointers if it's something you're seriously considering.
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Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2014 8:09 pm
scuttlefish Ryokuzen Shadowstealer Nia Phoenix Ryokuzen Shadowstealer Nia Phoenix It's so good - I hate having to wait for more! xd I'm very curious to see what the three are since they talk about her like she's a creature Oh good it came across right. That's what I as going for razz It's great! you should think about publishing - I'm sure this isn't the first thing you've written.....might help with that tuition! Actually it is >///< Idk about publishing xD I have ideas of where I want the story to go but I haven't got an anding plannedd Publishing's a rather arduous process, if you don't have an agent nine times out of ten the publishing house will toss your manuscript in the garbage without even reading the first page. You can PM me if you'd like, my dad published a book and I might be able to give some pointers if it's something you're seriously considering. O.o uh thanks...I'm honestly still designing the whole story at the moment. Kinda one of the reasons I post it in here. So you guys can say what you do/don't like. Give me ideas etc..
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Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2014 8:41 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2014 9:58 pm
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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 9:09 pm
Sorry it's taking a while to upload these. I know where i'm going with it, but still working it out.
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