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 Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2014 7:54 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 12:07 pm
  Kiyo's Main ThemeWell I guess it's time to get going now... INSERT TEXT HERE "INSERT SPEECH HERE" So lets get things in gear
No Release:
[url=http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=23404701]Kiyo Ikazuchi Profile[/url]
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v203/jdsurfergirl597/Post Styles/KiyoI_01.png[/img][img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v203/jdsurfergirl597/Post Styles/KiyoI_02.png[/img]
[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_l722DNRb9g&list=PL52A05F02B9F034E7&index=32&feature=plpp_video]Kiyo's Main Theme[/url]
[align=left][i]Well I guess it's time to get going now...[/i][/align]
[center][color=darkblue]INSERT TEXT HERE [b]"INSERT SPEECH HERE"[/b][/color][/center]
[align=right][i]So lets get things in gear[/i][/align]
Shikai Release:
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v203/jdsurfergirl597/Post Styles/KiyoI_01.png[/img][img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v203/jdsurfergirl597/Post Styles/KiyoI_02.png[/img]
[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lfrYkpa3770&feature=BFa&list=PL52A05F02B9F034E7]Unleash, Bahamut![/url]
[align=left][i]Well looks like he's awake now...[/i][/align]
[center][color=darkblue]INSERT TEXT HERE [b]"INSERT SPEECH HERE"[/b][/color][/center]
[align=right][i]Do try not to die.[/i][/align]
Bankai Release:
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v203/jdsurfergirl597/Post Styles/KiyoI_01.png[/img][img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v203/jdsurfergirl597/Post Styles/KiyoI_02.png[/img]
[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2uKakdA_PU8&feature=bf_next&list=PL52A05F02B9F034E7]BANKAI! Doragon Kokuou Bahamut![/url]
[align=left][i]This is the fury of the King of Dragons[/i][/align]
[center][color=darkblue]INSERT TEXT HERE [b]"INSERT SPEECH HERE"[/b][/color][/center]
[align=right][i]And I am his chosen Warrior![/i][/align]
Vizard Mask Geared:
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v203/jdsurfergirl597/Post Styles/KiyoI_01.png[/img][img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v203/jdsurfergirl597/Post Styles/KiyoI_02.png[/img]
[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rAH1AFzsmdc&feature=BFa&list=PL52A05F02B9F034E7]Bear witness, to the beast within.[/url]
[align=left][i]No turning back now.[/i][/align]
[center][color=black]INSERT TEXT HERE [b]"INSERT SPEECH HERE"[/b][/color][/center]
[align=right][i]Face the fury of a Hollowfied Dragon Warrior![/i][/align]
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Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2014 11:38 am
Still waiting -.- its been nearly 2 weeks here
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Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2014 9:29 am
Ultima228 Still waiting -.- its been nearly 2 weeks here Never fear, Laurie is here! Alrighty, I'll start off by informing you that Hope and the other judges will be discussing Vast rieatsu tonight. All (and I do mean all) the images and/or image links on your RPC need to have at least two accompanying descriptive sentences apiece. Include the squad ability description in your RPC. Tone down the weight requirement of your shikai instant effect as most characters' wieght clock at 150-190 Describe in exact terms the ways in which your passive can be applied and what are the limits? all of your techniques need to have a cooldown rate. Not just one. Officers don't have Shunpo and it's speed is the same for every rank. Bankai instant has the same problem as Shikai. Tone down the weight. How durable are the weapons and shields you can make with your Bankai Passive? Not everyone has played FF7 Koudo Katana Kousen needs an ammo count to show the number of times you can use it. No cutting off limbs without permission from your opponent. Mid-Air: how does reiatsu enhancement affect this attack? Jinshin Tsunami: this attack needs better description. How do the walls inflict damage? Where do they start? How much damage is 'staggering'? An attack of that magnitude can not move at Shunpo speed. Dirt and Ground are the same thing. 
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Posted: Tue Apr 15, 2014 4:06 pm
Quote: Alrighty, I'll start off by informing you that Hope and the other judges will be discussing Vast rieatsu tonight. Results of that being? I am fine with him just being Immense, but considering he is a former captain who has trained no less than 3 other captain class characters and a lieutenant, I thought that ya know it might make sense him being Vast and all. Quote: All (and I do mean all) the images and/or image links on your RPC need to have at least two accompanying descriptive sentences apiece. That I will (hopefully) get done over the next couple of days, need to replace some links as well to get the right one Quote: Include the squad ability description in your RPC. He's captain class so would the ability be captain class or soldier class (corresponding with his rank) Once I know that answer I can do that. Quote: Tone down the weight requirement of your shikai instant effect as most characters' wieght clock at 150-190 Done. Quote: Describe in exact terms the ways in which your passive can be applied and what are the limits? Um, not sure what you mean on that, would you kindly clarify for me? Quote: all of your techniques need to have a cooldown rate. Not just one. Good of you to notice, unlike how it went un-noticed in 2 other guilds. That is fixed. Quote: Officers don't have Shunpo and it's speed is the same for every rank. Its all been converted into feet per second. Quote: Bankai instant has the same problem as Shikai. Tone down the weight. Fixed. Quote: How durable are the weapons and shields you can make with your Bankai Passive? All weapons and shields are a "One time use" object that will break after making or deflecting an attack Quote: Not everyone has played FF7 Now included is a Youtube link, I can attempt to describe it if it is an absolute must Quote: Koudo Katana Kousen needs an ammo count to show the number of times you can use it. Done. Quote: No cutting off limbs without permission from your opponent. This of course depends on the opponent on where it hits and the kind of damage it inflicts. Just because something can potentially cut off a limb, does not mean that it will this was added into the RPC to specify that "While yes it can, it is up to the opponent to determine if it does" Quote: Mid-Air: how does reiatsu enhancement affect this attack? Enhancing the edge, making it more of a cutting tool Quote: Jinshin Tsunami: this attack needs better description. How do the walls inflict damage? Where do they start? How much damage is 'staggering'? An attack of that magnitude can not move at Shunpo speed. Dirt and Ground are the same thing. It is fixed, I think. How do you think the walls do damage? By slamming into you obviously, if you get hit by them what kind of damage would you think that a character would take? This will vary from character to character, some will be broken in ways that are unimaginably painful, others might get out with a twisted ankle or something. Also lets not forget the crippling weak point of this technique only being effective when someone is on the ground, Air walking of any kind basically screws it over.
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Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2014 6:45 am
Born-of-Shadow Describe in exact terms the ways in which your passive can be applied and what are the limits? Ultima228 Um, not sure what you mean on that, would you kindly clarify for me? Well you say that he can control the earth element to attack or defend or defend. Just describe how he can attack or defend with this ability and what limits your ability has. In other words, what can you do and what can you NOT do?
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Posted: Fri May 02, 2014 8:33 am
It took me ages to get back that inspiration to work on the character again, and I had to replace the human form since I didnt like the old one. But the character is now complete and waiting secondary round of judgment.
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Posted: Fri May 09, 2014 8:35 am
Its been a week here and I have heard nothing, can I hear something on this profile please? I would actually like to be able to use a character that isnt reliant on someone else at the moment.
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DJ Hope 1990 Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu May 15, 2014 8:57 am
✿✿✿Assessment✿✿✿ Because it's been a ridiculious amount of time I am taking over.
I see you fixed the things Laurie spoke to you about...
I just wanted to make sure that you knew that "vast" was tlaked about between the head judge/vice captains/head captain of the guild - and it was agreed upon that we would keep you at immense.
Also your bankai Passive ability. It seems to me that you have a technique in there.
Quote: urther manipulation and control over earth and earth based reiatsu to the point where Kiyo can now form physical objects out of the ground that he touches with his palm. He can only create barriers in the form of slabs of rock and earth, as well as close to mid range combat weapons if they are simplistic in their nature. (IE, Swords, Daggers/Knives, Lances and Axes) these can serve as a projectile weapon if they are thrown or as an off hand weapon. He is limited to having two weapons at a time formed. All weapons and shields are a "One time use" object that will break after making or deflecting an attack
You really have Urther instead of Further btw. razz
Uhm. So yes. We're gonna have to make that so that it's not read as a two timey passive ability. Either the passive ability is "further manipulation of the earth which could include making barriers/earth bending awesomness OR being able to form the weapons out of earth.
I would think however if he has more control over the earth he wouldn't exactly need to shape it into weapons, more like make it just do what he wants... Other then that we're looking good.
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Pending(Cuxz I'm to lazy to back and find the damn sticker cuz its 2 am and i'm tired but getting this done as promised)
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Posted: Thu May 15, 2014 9:12 am
The only remaining question i have is the Squad Ability, would it be Captain Class due to his Captain Class status, or Soldier Class to coincide with his rank?
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DJ Hope 1990 Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu May 15, 2014 9:18 am
Ultima228 The only remaining question i have is the Squad Ability, would it be Captain Class due to his Captain Class status, or Soldier Class to coincide with his rank? If his Reiryoku is at Immense it would be at captain class.
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Posted: Thu May 15, 2014 9:34 am
DJ Hope 1990 Ultima228 The only remaining question i have is the Squad Ability, would it be Captain Class due to his Captain Class status, or Soldier Class to coincide with his rank? If his Reiryoku is at Immense it would be at captain class. Okay, with the edit in then everything will be done, thankies Hope ^^
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DJ Hope 1990 Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu May 15, 2014 4:02 pm
✿✿✿Assessment✿✿✿ Hi! I'm Hope! And I approve this RPC heart ✿Status✿ 
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Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2015 6:23 am
] ✿✿✿Assessment✿✿✿ Okay!
For your changes to your bankai. I am going to remind you, you're not allowed full body zanpakuto metal armor. It states in the rules. So if we can create some kind of opening, or go into deal if it is vulnerable and how and to what... yep. Even if it's not zan metal, it still cannot be full body armor. I'm not sure if it is, the picture and lack of explantion other wise kind of states that it is.
Also I have a question. The energy levels for the instant effects of both of your releases... why is it attributed to physical weight? How it is this going to effect people of a higher reiatsu level? For instance, both of my vast levels are small in stature, but they're reaitsu strength is ...well. of the strongest. Why are they being effected when they're pressure is stronger than his?
I'm just looking for understanding of this, and how and why and what not. ^^
Also remember, in our world, Zanpakuto is the strongest metal, it cannot break but only in it's weapon form (meaning armor can be broken. I know. Logic. But it's what works lol.)
My only problem with your zanpakuto as a whole, is I'm reading him as untouchable. His abilities are all very strong, with very high limits on all of the abilities. Even if a person is able to get close they wouldn't be able to touch him at all. And with the rate the abilities are written, it's probably not actually possible to get close to him at all without god modding.
Can we do just a bit of nerfing to some of the abilities? I won't be fussy
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DJ Hope 1990 Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2015 9:35 am
DJ Hope 1990 ] ✿✿✿Assessment✿✿✿ Okay!
For your changes to your bankai. I am going to remind you, you're not allowed full body zanpakuto metal armor. It states in the rules. So if we can create some kind of opening, or go into deal if it is vulnerable and how and to what... yep. Even if it's not zan metal, it still cannot be full body armor. I'm not sure if it is, the picture and lack of explanation other wise kind of states that it is.
Also I have a question. The energy levels for the instant effects of both of your releases... why is it attributed to physical weight? How it is this going to effect people of a higher reiatsu level? For instance, both of my vast levels are small in stature, but they're reaitsu strength is ...well. of the strongest. Why are they being effected when they're pressure is stronger than his?
I'm just looking for understanding of this, and how and why and what not. ^^
Also remember, in our world, Zanpakuto is the strongest metal, it cannot break but only in it's weapon form (meaning armor can be broken. I know. Logic. But it's what works lol.)
My only problem with your zanpakuto as a whole, is I'm reading him as untouchable. His abilities are all very strong, with very high limits on all of the abilities. Even if a person is able to get close they wouldn't be able to touch him at all. And with the rate the abilities are written, it's probably not actually possible to get close to him at all without god modding.
Can we do just a bit of nerfing to some of the abilities? I won't be fussy
For the Bankai Armor i have decided to just take it out entirely. The concept was either "full body" with that image or I'd have to find another image I liked.... which I just dont have the time or effort to do to be honest, so I've scrapped the Bankai Armor. The Instant Effects WERE originally based on Reiatsu Level but I was told by someone that it was, "To Powerful and should be changed to weight" so I changed it to Weight. Now i'm being told weight makes no sense, make up your minds! *frustrated a touch* How do you mean he is "untouchable"? can you specify please Hope? What abilities need "nerfing" you need to be more specific here cause thats vague. What needs nerfing and in what way?
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