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MoonKnightIV

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 10, 2014 2:29 pm


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BASIC-
Name: Saemon Kimura
Age: 21
Birth Day: July 23 (Leo)
Height: 5ft 9in
Weight: 160lbs
Family: Father (Unknown) , Mother ( Jun Kimura)
Skills: Master Martial Artist ( Judo, Taekwondo, Parkour, Wrestling..etc), Expert Marksmen (with a Bow and Arrow), painting, Herculean Strength/Endurance/Agility.

PERSONALITY-

Saemon is calm and cool headed, though he will not hesitate to fight or defend others. He loves the opportunity to meet and make new friends, always yearning for more travel and adventure.

BIO-

Growing up without a Father figure in his early life, Saemon had a hard time as a young child. Constantly being picked on verbally and physically he was tormented by the other children, until one day while he was walking home from his Junior High, he was ambushed by one of his childhood bullies. Angered and annoyed a rush of adrenaline coursed through Saemon's vein's as he picked the other boy up and slammed him crashing into the ground with such great strength.
The ground shook and a huge dent was left in the concrete from where the now dead bully lay. Horrified Saemon ran until he happened to run in to a older gentleman; curiously Saemon thought he had never seen this man before and the clothing he wore was defiantly foreign. The old man asked Saemon why the boy was running but Saemon was too scared to say why.
The old man just smiled and told him all would be fine, and asked would Saemon like to meet his father? Now Saemon knew that most people in his home town knew he did know his father but this man was a complete stranger how did he know his story?
But then Saemon thought if anyone could explain how or why Saemon had this strength it would be his father. So he said yes to the old man, and with a gentle rush of the wind Saemon appeared in front of his home, his mother furious as she knew who the older man was; told Saemon to go upstairs to his room. Saemon could hear his mother arguing, and yelling at the older man but as hours pasted, she calmed and told Saemon to come down. She told him she loves him, and that what she is doing is what is best for him. Tears in her eyes she told the older man to take Saemon. And with a blink of his eyes he was whisked away.

Young Saemon awoke in a very different setting: mountains, forests, oceans and the thin air. He asked the old man who was he and where are they? The old man smiled and laughingly told Saemon he could refer to him as "Gramps" and then told him they were at the base of the world famous Mt. Olympus. The boy Saemon asked puzzled when would he meet his father, to which "Gramps" responded at the Olympics, but in order to do so Saemon most prove himself by winning a Gold medal in at least one of the martial competitions ( Judo, Taekwondo, Wrestling, Boxing, Archery, and Fencing ).
Saemon knew hin his heart he was afraid, what if he failed? What if he hurt another person? "Gramps" put his hand on Saemon's shoulder he reassured the boy that his father would be very proud of him once all of Saemon's "labor's" were complete, and that he would teach Saemon these arts, how to control his strength and much more that he would need in life.
Saemon showed some relief and asked enthusiastically "How long will this take ?" "Gramps" laughed and responded "how ever long it takes you."

Ten long and rigorous years past as Saemon grew and went from boy to man. He mastered the his mighty strength, along with many martial skills, and even learned much academic knowledge. The time had finally came he could feel it, and so could "Gramps". His finally test was while he rested one evening a wild mountain lion, so huge and great one of likes Saemon had never seen before, came out and charged at him. With no weapons available he brawled and wrestled the lion. Long hours pasted, scar's were inflicted on Saemon's body, the Lion was bruised and bloodied but there was much fight left in both of them. Then right as the Sun was rising Saemon and the Lion charged at one another using his great strength and martial techniques he managed to grab and slam the Lion then grapple it to death. Tired weary and exhausted he sat on top of the dead beast breathing..
Suddenly "Gramps" came congratulating Saemon and told him it was time the Olympics were soon to have open try outs. Saemon wounded, tired, and confused ask how he would get there ? "Gramps" told him not to worry and just rest for today as all would be taken care of. Saemon laid down and closed his eyes for a second when he opened all his wounds were healed, he had a wallet with cash and a bank pin, a Olympic team trial invitation, and he was where he had not been in so long...home.

His mother shocked to see her boy now a man rushed into his arms hugging him and crying. Saemon was glad to see his mom, but he had so many questions he wanted to ask. When his mother was calm he explained to her what he had to do, she told him she was very proud of him and gave him a medallion to wear bearing the seal of his father "a man with a club wrestling a lion" with that she kissed her sons forehead and wished him luck tomorrow.
Saemon rested that night and in the morning arrived at the Olympic trials, like a Cinderella story he came out of nowhere and beat all other competitions in the martial sports. The American Olympic Teams were shocked that he accomplished such a feat, but were also shocked to hear that no only did Saemon want to be on the team but he wanted to compete in all six of the martial sports, which was allowed but ill advised and never heard of ?!
The American Olympic Association quick to make a star out of this unknown Athlete quickly spread his name and titled him a "Young Heracles!"

Like that Saemon was at the Olympics, on the world stage the roar of the crowd was thrilling. Knowing perhaps his father was out in the crowd watching and knowing that his son was at the greatest event in human history.
With a speed of lightning and strength like that of a god; Saemon tore through the other countries competitors. Back to back exhausted, tired, injured, but always pulling through with shear technique and a will to win. Never giving up until his hand was raised and finally the gold medal lay around his neck. The arena's roof roared when they heard why Saemon was asked why he did what he was doing, going through so much for just a few nights..? He responded so he could find his father.!

Finally after winning every event he was instructed to, Saemon rested. Suddenly awoke with a message on his phone telling him to go back to the Arena. Saemon arrived and found a tall and mysterious figure. Which then extended its hand and Saemon shook it. "I am so proud of you my ..son!"
Saemon hugged his father with tears in his eyes this was the moment he had wanted since he was a child, he wanted to ask his father so many questions but his father told him he would answer all his questions and he need not worry now that Saemon was an Olympian he could never be separated from him or his mother again.

Saemon's father gave him a map and a passport to a place called Half-Blood Academy. There his father promised Saemon all would be answered
PostPosted: Mon Mar 10, 2014 6:06 pm


Saemon Kimura has been claimed by Ares

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 11, 2014 12:44 am


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Saemon Kimura has been claimed by Ares


Wait I have a question am I classified as weak, medium, strong child?
PostPosted: Tue Mar 11, 2014 10:59 am


Were working on a new claim system at the moment, so youll see announcements about that soon!
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Saemon Kimura has been claimed by Ares


Wait I have a question am I classified as weak, medium, strong child?

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 11, 2014 12:39 pm


Hi! just wanted to toss in my two cents c:

I sort of agree on the claim, although I think that profile should be looked over once more just for some minor issues that are easily fixable. I understand that we currently do not have any indication of rules or guidelines set up and I personally apologize for that. I will be working on them today and hopefully get at least something up by tonight. These suggestions are totally up for debate and I urge you to contact me or the captain for questions, comments or concerns!

-As for your skills, they seem a tad bit much, and are on the brink of godmodding. I can deal with him being a black belt and CLOSE to mastering martial arts, but please pick one or two specific genres, because him knowing and mastering all of those in only twenty one years is HIGHLY unheard of. Also I would try and choose between the weaponry of Bow and Arrow or Martial arts when it comes to him being particularly skilled at. If you still would like to keep the bow and arrow I would suggest putting it down as a recently learn skill that he can work and improve on.

-Sliding into his 'Herculean Strength/Endurance/Agility', I really do not feel comfortable allowing a child to have this before claim, and I'm still working out the Ares children basic powers and the powers system which I will explain in an announcement along with the new claiming system. I would advise that you remove that from your skill set ALONG with some parts in your bio that are showing signs of demigod powers before he was officially claimed. Like how he KILLED a kid at a young age as he ' picked the other boy up and slammed him crashing into the ground with such great strength.
The ground shook and a huge dent was left in the concrete from where the now dead bully lay.' I'm sorry, but that is NOT cool. We try to be as realistic and humble as possible when it comes to our characters. Him going to the Olympics is actually a wonderful plot, but I feel that it is a bit to kitchy and a bit 'Gary Sue' if you catch my drift. Him having the 'Cinderella Story' and blowing through his opponents as an underdog isn't that interesting and is quite predictable. Try and spice that up a bit with him maybe getting second? Injuring himself mildly? Just something other than him being the best at basically everything which is what your profile is pointing towards.

-Lastly, again I'm sorry that the rules are not up yet, but it is not allowed for Godly parents to be in their child's life in a physical form as often as Saemon has seen Ares. While we are not fully following the 'Percy Jackson' camp halfblood plot line, we do like to keep some parts of it in there to have some sort of a guideline.


I'm am so sorry to have gotten to you after your claim but I've been busy with remodeling the cabins into dorms and setting up the traits and powers lists. I had just gotten time now after work to come in and check on the profiles. I really hope this doesn't deter you in any sense because I do like where you were going with your character! Honestly! I just bid you to make him less God like in his skill set and bio. Children are suppose to be mortal until they are claimed. Speaking of which, you get a little sneak peak into what I will be putting in the claiming announcement: Children are to be claimed between the ages of 13 and 18. So if you either want to make Saemon a younger character or have him be a veteran at the academy is totally up to you.
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