Kagura Dance
-walk around the woods then scan the grass carefully-
Here, I'll give you some tips to make your roleplaying a bit better (Since what your doing is kinda chatplay ^^)
Okay first. Put your characters name in it. Have a mood for your post, Like Fun Scary or even angry. I'll give you some examples using my Character Linnia.
Linnia walked around the woods. She had a feeling her neighbor was watching her again. She needed to get away from her house for a while. She scanned the grass carefully not wanting to trip or stumble. Like it would help either way. She was clumsy.
^ See? Try adding more to what you roleplay. Add a mood, Show thoughts, What brought them there. Characteristics if it calls for it.
Also Geek is making you a posting format. (thing pretty thing with the picture you post with)
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